My first SS ever:Madhubala's Revenge - Page 2

Gud thought
but as far as the show was concerned
if this wld have happened there then
st wld have get a mini heartattack by audience only who wld have definately thrown tomatoes at him for spoiling rks life lol
but u know if we see frm a different perspective
after three betrayals back to back
wat rk did frm his pov wont be wrong
reasoning is wen madhus heart broke once she felt the need to revenge him
then he had his share three times
n no human being is that grt in this world to forget three betrayals
anyways thats my point
waiting to read more
n can we have rks pov too
n yeah i wld suggest u to name ur story as broken hearts
suits ur plot
but do we have a happy ending here

p.s i hope i havent offended u n ur story just stated my pov
though i myself hated the rk revenge phase but i wasnt impressed with madhu even thinking of doing that too rk after knowing that how his life had been since childhood
n one request i hope u had planned strong rk too
as weak rk doesnt go well with us
its not in his character to be weak like a fool

👏👏 super revenge

GOODLUCKANGEL-Thank you very much.😊To be honest,I'm not sure how to continue with the story because it was my attempt to only see how Madhu's leaving RK on the altar would look like.But I will think about what to happen next!😊

NehaVdian-Thank you very much.😊Haha,talking about ST I would love if someone threw tomatoes at him for killing my Rishbala!😆...Just kidding.😆No,although I like this version of the events,I still think it's a good thing that they didn't go on with Madhu's betrayal because I was tired of all bad things happening and I wanted to see finally that they reconcile and forgive each other.But the way RK came to that Madhu's forgiveness is the one thing I don't like.I also don't like Madhu's helplessness when he found out about her plan and when she said to him "You are not gonna end everything,are you?" I didn't like it.It wasn't suppose to be like that.It was like,RK tricked her,deceived her and in the end,he again had the final word.I wanted to be clear that Madhu was the one who forgave him and not the other way around.That's why I felt like he got away with the betrayal too easy.

please continue
this is public demand😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

please continue
this is public demand😆

Originally posted by: ilovebandini

<font size="4">NehaVdian-Thank you very much.😊Haha,talking about ST I would love if someone threw tomatoes at him for killing my Rishbala!😆...Just kidding.😆No,although I like this version of the events,I still think it's a good thing that they didn't go on with Madhu's betrayal because I was tired of all bad things happening and I wanted to see finally that they reconcile and forgive each other.But the way RK came to that Madhu's forgiveness is the one thing I don't like.I also don't like Madhu's helplessness when he found out about her plan and when she said to him "You are not gonna end everything,are you?" I didn't like it.It wasn't suppose to be like that.It was like,RK tricked her,deceived her and in the end,he again had the final word.I wanted to be clear that Madhu was the one who forgave him and not the other way around.That's why I felt like he got away with the betrayal too easy.</font>

<font size="4">As for Madhu's revenge(talking now in the show),I felt relieved that she wanted revenge and not that she forgave him that easily.I loved her talk with Padmini.But it was hard for me to watch her pretend that everything's ok and it isn't.That kind of manipulation suited RK best,not her.I always liked that she said everything she meant loud and clear.These kind of games were not her thing,if you understand me.</font>

<font size="4">As for RK,he did suffer in life.He felt betrayed three times in life and this would've been the fourth one.But the betrayals he experianced didn't stop him from doing something like that to another person.Many times I thought that what Deepali did to him,made him so bitter,but that is no excuse.Madhu never did anything similar to RK.She didn't trick him that she loved him and then left him.Deepali did that.So it was more logical to do a thing like the betrayal to Deepali than on Madhu.But he didn't.Madhu's slaps are nothing comparing to seing the girl you love marring your brother and being totally broken by that.And what did RK do?He called that same Deepali so he could torture Madhu more!What happened to him in the past is no excuse of what he did with Madhu.He deserved her revenge.</font>

<font size="4">This is my point of view only.I'm not offended at all,please you too don't be.</font>

<font size="4">As for the continuence of the story,it's interesting that now everyone expect next part.And I didn't even thought about it.😆I have no idea what would happen but I will try my best.RK want be a love fool but he has to show that he has a heart this time.I'll try to do my best.😊</font>

<font size="4">dharsii-Thank you very much.😊Thank you for your support.😊</font>

yeah i agree with wat u wrote
but if we see he never expected madhu to plot against him bcoz he knew that she has a heart which cld forgive n love him n he very well said that wen he took her to dream house that i wanted to correct everything but u became me
n.it was clear indication that he knew he was wrong always n it was mlre hurting to him that madhu chose the wrong path he chose n thats wat i guess which made her question that will he end everything
n yeah madhu didnt left him like dips but if we generalise rks pov he believed that fact that whoever he ll love will leave him always
n so he thpught frm that point before madhu leaves him he left her breaking both of them n for his revenging well he always maintained that he never felt anything for her she was not even important enough for him to revenge for wat she did to him n for madhu well she was his llve passion n obession so he fought with her along with loving her only n he surely brought dips on sets but if we see his perspective then he didnt wanted madhu near him bcoz wenever she was near he kinda lose his self n he feared that she ll know wat his feelings r so he played on that part
but wat i think is that no one ever understood him in show his feelings emotions hurt pain were never clear n like u said he got away easily
well i dnt think he got away easily even after marrying her he did face a lot
forst sultan them his career n health all at once being snatched away
they have shown him suffer so much for his one mistake that the revenge part luks dull infront of the jail n hospital trips he did for no fault of his

All the best for ur story
u wrote really well keep it up

Awesome start.I always wanted to know what would have happened if Madhu ditched Rk in the altar.Thank you for starting this ss & all the best to you.