My first SS ever:Madhubala's Revenge - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeah i agree with wat u wrote
but if we see he never expected madhu to plot against him bcoz he knew that she has a heart which cld forgive n love him n he very well said that wen he took her to dream house that i wanted to correct everything but u became me
n.it was clear indication that he knew he was wrong always n it was mlre hurting to him that madhu chose the wrong path he chose n thats wat i guess which made her question that will he end everything - OK,I guess you're right
n yeah madhu didnt left him like dips but if we generalise rks pov he believed that fact that whoever he ll love will leave him always
n so he thpught frm that point before madhu leaves him he left her breaking both of them n for his revenging well he always maintained that he never felt anything for her she was not even important enough for him to revenge for wat she did to him n for madhu well she was his llve passion n obession so he fought with her along with loving her only n he surely brought dips on sets but if we see his perspective then he didnt wanted madhu near him bcoz wenever she was near he kinda lose his self n he feared that she ll know wat his feelings r so he played on that part - Yes,ok,this makes sense too
but wat i think is that no one ever understood him in show his feelings emotions hurt pain were never clear n like u said he got away easily
well i dnt think he got away easily even after marrying her he did face a lot -Yes,I know he did,but I was thinking until the wedding,after that they faced all of them together,I love them so much!
forst sultan them his career n health all at once being snatched away
they have shown him suffer so much for his one mistake that the revenge part luks dull infront of the jail n hospital trips he did for no fault of his

All the best for ur story
u wrote really well keep it up -Thank you!😊

The scene with their dream house,the scene in his father studio when they listened Mr.India songs and when they talked...Are the ones that made me not wanting Madhu's revenge to happen!RK knew that he didn't deserve Madhu's forgiveness.When I saw the episode when Madhu forgave him,I didn't quite understand why she decided to forgive him.Maybe because of those events,but she still had bitterness.I had to look at the episode carefully again to understand what happened.She remembered all those scenes.But when they spoke,when she cut herself,he said does it hurt she said yes and he said but it doesn't look so deep and she said something like that it's still under and when you realize about it's too late or something like that I don't remember,but he understood and after he said about the night when they were drunk that she said..."That I will never forgive you"-Madhu finished the line.But RK said "But Madhu you came to me.You came back to me."Probably the hope in his voice is what made her forgive him,he so much needed the forgiveness I think and Madhu didn't want to let his hope down.
But to tell you the truth I so wanted a scene in which Madhu cries her self out and tells him everything in the betrayal that he hurt her so much(although he knew that)and that she wanted to get even with him,that he hurt her so much and RK to listen with tears in his eyes too,and for them to just forgive each other and cry together and hug each other and hold each other.I know it was all cleared in the wedding,but it was kinda all publicly,and this way it would be only between them,to clear things themselves.Maybe I will write this reconciliation.😆
P.S.In my story,the scene of RK proposing Madhu,the scene with their dream house,the scene in RK's father studio and the other nice scenes that happen,in my story they don't happen.RK dragged Madhu forcefully in the house and everything that happened till she left and went back to the chawl happened.After that,nothing.RK was still being RK and showed no respect towards Madhu.That made it easier for Madhu to continue with her plan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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v.p.joshi-Thank you very much.😊I'm glad you like it.
Shayarana_rk-Thank you very much!😊I also wanted to see how would that look like,that's why I wrote it.Thanks.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue when u can 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Plz pm me
One rquest happy ending.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever


continue when u can 😳


I'm still thinking how to continue!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovermg

Wow

Plz pm me
One rquest happy ending.


Thank you very much.😊Ok.Ok,it will have a happy ending but I need to think how to get to that happy ending first!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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To tell you all the truth it was easy for me to write this SS,but the sequel is a problem.That's because I knew what I wanted to write here-Madhu leaving RK on the altar.And now I'm not sure how to continue.Ever since it's my first SS,I think I will not make it long before Madhu and RK reconcile.I don't have nerves to make long story like she and him live long time apart or something.I'm gonna try to write something although I'm not sure you're all gonna like it.But ok.Anyhow I'm glad that you liked what I wrote,thank you all for the support.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilovebandini

<font size="4">To tell you all the truth it was easy for me to write this SS,but the sequel is a problem.That's because I knew what I wanted to write here-Madhu leaving RK on the altar.And now I'm not sure how to continue.Ever since it's my first SS,I think I will not make it long before Madhu and RK reconcile.I don't have nerves to make long story like she and him live long time apart or something.I'm gonna try to write something although I'm not sure you're all gonna like it.But ok.Anyhow I'm glad that you liked what I wrote,thank you all for the support.</font>

hey i ll suggest u to carry on with watever u have in mind dnt bother abt us
i m sure we will like it
u have given amazing dialouges in first part
so u can definately go on easily just listen to ur idea n write leave the opinion options for laters

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