My first SS ever:Madhubala's Revenge - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved it. As much as I love RK & Madhu together, I always thought RK got off way too easy after that 'unmarriage'.

This is what I would have loved to see on the show. Pls continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Jane523-Thank you very much.😊
NehaVdian-Thank you very much for your support!😊I'll to do my best.😊
4ever4love-Thank you very much.😊I'm very glad that you like it,I wanted to see how Madhu's leaving RK on the altar would look like,so I wrote this.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

First of all,thank you all for the support.😛🤗Ever since I didn't plan a sequel to the story,please forgive me if I don't fulfill your expectations.😆And ever since I'm a lazy writer,this part will be shorter.😊No RK-Madhu scene in this part too.We continue where we left-when Madhu left the altar.That same scene continues.


Part 2

Madhu was gone.She disappeared in the crowd and RK could only say these words to Bittu as he helped Sikki and Deepali hold Radha:"-Bittuji!...Find her!Stop her!"-he yelled.Bittuji obeyed and went through the crowd.One photo reporter came closer and wanted to take a picture of Radha who was now conscious but still laying in the hands of her family.RK,as he was nervous took the camera out of the reporter's hands and threw it with all of his strength on the floor."Hey,what are you doing?"-yelled the reporter.RK lost his temper and caught the reporter by his jacket.He almost could've hit him if the security hadn't intervened. "Police!"-some of the reporters yelled. "Call the police!" 10 minutes later,the police arrived and took RK.Without a word and with emotionless expression on his face RK entered the police vehicle.

In the meanwhile,running through the crowd,Madhu had mixed feelings.She finished her relationship with RK forever,but she too suffered.She never wanted this to happen.All she wanted was to live happily with him.Forever."He made me do this"-she convinced herself.RK's eyes filled with tears and then his anger was something that she wouldn't forget soon."He deserved it."- she thought but she still felt uneasy as she went towards the taxi who was waiting outside of the back entrance.As she wanted to enter,someone's words made her stop in that very same moment. "-Bhabhiji!" Madhu turned around and Bittuji was standing in front of her.She felt uncomfortable for a moment but then found strength to look him in the eyes. "Bhabhiji"-Bittu repeated coming closer to her and shaking his head in disbelief. "-Why?...Why did you do this?"-he asked."This will destroy the chief.You know that he can't live without you." Madhu got angry. "-Your chief will be just fine,don't worry Bittuji!-she replied."He doesn't need anyone in his life,including me!" "Bhabhiji,that's not true."-Bittu continued."That's what the chief thought also.He thought that he didn't need anyone in his life.But he was wrong.As you are now too.My chief loves you bhabhiji.He is lost without you.He can't go on without you in his life.Believe me.I know the chief very well.Auntiji told me what happened the next morning after he had left you.He was calling your name before he woke up.That means that he loves you.He loved you even then but he didn't have the strength to admit it to himself.To admit that he is in love with you."

"Bittuji"-said Madhu "none of this interests me.Whether your chief loves me or not,that is not important.What he does is.And you chief proved many times before that he doesn't care about anyone but himself.So why should I give him another chance now?"

"-Because he made a mistake bhabhiji.He made a mistake for which he is paying right now.He made the mistake of not listening to his heart as you are doing right now.I'm begging you now as I begged him then.Don't leave my chief.Don't make the same mistake.Please!" "You begged him right?-she asked angrily."You begged him.And what did your chief do?Ha?"-she got even more angrier."Did he listen to you?Did he?No!He played with my heart and my emotions the way that he wanted.So why should I be any different?"

"Bhabhiji,please try to understand.He didn't wanted to admit that he loved you." He moved little bit far away from her and continued "-Ever since Deepali left him the chief swore on himself that he would never again let love become his weakness.That's why he didn't stop his revenge.Not because he didn't love you,but because he did.Please believe me that the chief loves you."

"Bittuji,-said Madhu with little bit softer voice and overcoming her anger "I believed that your chief loved me.I believed.But do you want to know what your chief told me the night when he left me?You want to know?He said that he saved my life only so he could destroy it.He,himself!A person can do such thing only to the person he hates the most,and not to the one he loves!So please,please don't try to justify your chief in my eyes!"-she finished again angrily. "Now please-she continued calmer."If you really respect the brother-sister relationship that we share,please leave me alone right now."-she said and went inside the taxi.The taxi drove off and Bittuji was standing alone on the street. "Bhabhiji"-Bittu thought as she left,"I was once worried about the chief and that it might be late for the two of you.Now,what can I do?How can I convince you that the chief loves you?How can I convince you to stop this until it's too late...?"

Back in the police station RK was sitting down in his cell.His face was numb and emotionless.In his hands were Madhu's broken bracelets.He couldn't take his eyes off them.Madhu's words started occupying his thoughts:"Will you marry me?" "-No!"...What did you think?Did you really think that I will give you a chance to play with my life after what have you put me through?NEVER!"..."You are only RK the superstar.Nothing more!"..."What's the matter Mr.Rishab Kundra?What kind of game are you now playing?Which face are you trying to show me now?"..."That night...I put my dreams in front of you...You let me dream with you and then you decided to turn my dreams into my worst nightmare"... "I thought that I was the luckiest girl in the world ...Because I had you" ... "But back then...I didn't know who I was dealing with.You've shown me your true face" ...Those were the words echoing inside RK's head.And along with them came the memories..."I,Rishab Kundra announce that everything between me and Madhubala Shamsher Malik is over"..."We are no longer husband and wife"..."Main tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya!"

He was silent.He looked at the bracelets."You remember what you told me that night?I remember one sentence.I will remember it as long as I live."Some broken bracelets and some broken dreams!" He remembered how they broke the night when he left Madhu.He remembered her numb face...

"-Mr.Rishab Kundra?"-the guard interrupted his thoughts."There's someone here to see you." RK looked up with hope that maybe Madhu came or at least Bittu with some news.But none of them was there.In her beautiful saree in front of RK was standing Deepali.


Part 3 - Page 8

Edited by ilovebandini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
too emotional update
but i didnt get just for stopping the reporter how come they can put a superstar in jail
but i loved rks turmoil
how broken he is errr so bittuji got his nerve right he feared to admit his love thats wat it actually was
now y the hell dips is there to hurt him more
or to taunt him that his madhu did same
so how is she less than her for him
arghh i really dnt want him to listen her but alas he is in jail he cant throw her out too
waiting for next part
i loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ilovebandini


I'm still thinking how to continue!😛


great😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Jane523-Thank you very much.😊
NehaVdian-Thank you very much!😊I wanted to make RK not able to talk to Madhu again.I knew the jail thing would be a clishe,😆but I still chose that part as the best for the moment...And RK will be in custody only one night because he assaulted that photo reporter,Bittu will get him out the next day,don't worry.And Dips,yes she will say some things that will make him angry...😆You'll see.😊
rima4ever-Thank you very much Dia!😊I tried to make something.I'm glad you like it.I already started part 3,but I don't know when I'm gonna finish it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
nyc writing
love to read more
plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Emotional update.You have beautifully penned down Madhu's anger & Rk's inner turmoil.Loved Bittuji in this update.Looking forward to know how the story progress further.
Thanks for the pm:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
noiseygirl-Thank you very much.😊I'm glad you like it.
rima4ever-OK.😊I'll try to post soon.
lovermg-Thank you again.😊
lathaprasad-Thnnk you again.😊
Shayadrana_rk-Thank you again.😊

Thank you very much for your comments all,I'm glad if liked what I wrote.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
thanks 4 pm
superb update
why depali is here?
waiting 4 next
update soon

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