My first SS ever:Madhubala's Revenge - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
He does deserve it...but he also doesn't...it's complicated 😆
Now deepali is going to try and seduce RK again
More "get out" moments coming our way I hope 😉

Continue soon dear
Loving this story 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
noiseygirl-Thank you.
zariya123-Well,yes...
Abhiya4life-I agree with you.Dips doesn't seduce him but she gets the "Out!"😆
zoya789-Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
As for the story,I changed my mind-I'm not gonna make RK strong.I'm gonna make him a desperate man...But part 3 is going kinda slowly...🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shasha1989

superb update...
continue soon...


Thank you.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
awesome update loved it 👏⭐️RishBala separates again Madhu completes her revenge hope RishBala be together again 🤔 Tfs for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
First of all let me tell you all that I barely wrote this part.So I guess with every part it's gonna get tougher to write.I guess most of the writers start great and then it's harder.Or,ok,that happened to me.Never mind.I'll try to do my best.
I planned RK and Deeps scene to be longer,but it's shorter.Also the RK-breaking-stuff scene is very similar to the one shown in the show when RK found out about Madhu's plan.😆


Part 3

RK looked at the bars and saw Deepali standing at the other side.As he was sitting he just turned his look away and said..."-You...What are you doing here?"-he obviously was not in a good mood when he saw who came to see him.His look turned towards what he held in his hands-the bracelets.Dips felt uncomfortable. "-I...I wanted to see you"-she finally said..."-How is maa?"-he asked after several seconds of silence. "-She's alright."-she replied with a serious tone holding her arms crossed. "Sikki is with her.The doctor gave her sleeping pills." RK again put his head down and continued to gaze at the object of his obsession.She looked at his face carefully.It seemed tormented.In his eyes she could see dried tears.She was genuinely worried but she also felt somehow uncomfortable at the same time.She was not used to see RK so down and without any of his ironic remarks. "How are you?"-she asked.He didn't answer.She didn't know how to continue. "-I told you not to trust that Chawlbala!"-she finally said what's on her mind putting her crossed hands down. "I warned you...But you didn't want to believe me."-she concluded.RK's face showed that he didn't want to talk about the matter but he didn't say anything.So she continued. "And you thought that I was the one trying to deceive you.That I'm the one who is trying to make you a fool!" "Are you finished?"-he finally spoke raising his head again. "No,I'm not.-she said."You always defended her.You were always so proud of her love.Now you'll have to hear me.You always insulted me.And look at what she did!Your beloved Madhu!She made a fool out of you in front of the whole world.So that everybody can laugh at you.Now everybody's gonna say that that Chawlbala-she said clenching her teeth,"had brought RK the superstar to his knees!" "-Deepali!-RK yelled as he jumped and approached the bars with one fast movement.The bracelets fell out of his grasp down on the floor. "Enough!"-he yelled again and Deepali moved away from the bars."I don't want to hear you!Get out!" "RK..."-she tried..."-Out!!!"-he yelled again showing her the way from where she came with his hand.She left immediately.RK tried to calm himself.He turned back and got the bracelets of the floor.Then he sat down again.Deepali's words were like a poison to his soul.He clenched his teeth.

Bittuji was desperate.They told him what happened to RK,that the police took him.But when he finally got a chance to see him in the prison they said it was too late and that he should come the next morning.When he saw that he can't talk to RK,he wanted to try to talk to Madhu again,so he went to the chawl.When he entered,another surprise awaited him-a lock on the door of Madhu's home."They left this evening"-one of the neighbours said."Just before you came there were a whole bunch of reporters here but they didn't find them either." Bittuji was in thought "Where could've Madhu been gone"... "Did they say where they were going?"-he asked. "At some relative's place,that's all I know."-the neighbour replied.Another older women when she saw Bittuji said angrily "Heeey you!What are you doing here.Go away!We don't want to see any people of that superstar here.Jaa!" "Auntiji..."-Bittuji replied confused,but she interrupted him quickly "-Don't you say auntiji to me!We saw what that superstar did to our Madhu the last time when he was here.He deserved everything that happened to him!Now,what are you still doing here?Jaa!!"-she ordered him again to leave.

Bittuji was worried.Now what would he tell his chief?How could he tell him that he can't find Madhu anywhere?

The next morning RK was awake.He had problem sleeping.He managed to sleep only several hours.Big circles were around his tormented eyes and tiredness was visible on his face.The expectation of news about Madhu didn't leave him peaceful.But Bittuji didn't come.RK was wondering what had happened.Then the guard from last night came to him and said "Mr.Rishab Kundra...You are free to go." RK knew what that means.Bittuji came to the prison.He hurried up and went to see him.Bittu too didn't look like he had much sleep.When RK came to him,Bittu said to him "-Chief...Let me get you out of here and then we'll talk.Let me do that first." He looked at his chief closely.RK face looked tired.His eyes were red from tears and not enough sleep.He was silent.Bittuji expected that he would right away try to find out something about Madhu but he didn't.He understood that that what happened deeply hurt his chief.No one could understand what was going on in his chief heart but he did.That's why he tried to talk to him and informed him of all things as they went together to RK's car."Radhaji is better.I checked her this morning before I came to see you."-he said but was confused because it seemed like RK wasn't paying much attention to what Bittu was saying.They drove off.He still continued."Chief...I...I canceled all your obligations for this week.You have only one shoot,and that's thursday night." RK was looking through the car window.Bittu was expecting him to say something but he still was silent.At last,RK spoke:"-Bittuji...Take me to the chawl." "Chief..."-tried Bittu. "Just take me there"-he repeated.Bittu was really worried.He never saw his chief in this condition.He expected that RK will yell,be mad at Madhu,he will be so angry,he expected another drama.But RK was oddly quiet.That was so unlike him.Bittu knew that it was time to tell him what he had found out "-Chief"-he started,"...I was in the chawl yesterday night.Madhu and her family were not there"-he said and RK who till then was looking through the window,turned his face and looked at Bittu.He listened carefully without saying a word."One of their neighbours said that they left and that nobody knows exactly where they went.I only found out that they are staying at some relative's place but I don't know where." "And I don't know till when"-he added carefully.RK listened what Bittuji had to say and then turned his head straight and was quiet.Bittu felt helpless.He knew that this chief's behaviour is not gonna turn out good.He drove him home.When they came in front of the elevator,he tried to talk to him "Chief...I know that bhabhiji hurt you...-RK immediately raised his hand as a gesture that Bittu should stop with that conversation that very same minute.He did.When they entered the mansion they saw Deepali and Radha in the living room.When Radha saw him she tried to wipe her tears. "-Rishu?"-she said coming closer.RK looked at Radha,he threw a fast glimpse on Deepali and was ready to go up in his room when words from the TV news made him stop. "A true drama was going yesterday night on the wedding of the superstar RK with Madhubala Shamsher Malik... " He listen for several seconds and then without words he went to his and Madhu's room.The big room looked so empty now.Not a voice could be heard from it.RK entered slowly.He saw the picture of him and Madhu that was hanging on the wall.A picture of his Madhu...Madhu whom he trusted and loved.He knew that he made a mistake in the past but he finally believed that everything is alright between them and that finally they will be happy together.He wouldn't let anything happen to her.He wanted to fill his Madhu's eyes with joy.He loved his Madhu so much.He thought that she felt like that too.But obviously something else was in her heart...His eyes filled with tears.Suddenly in one moment he had lost himself."How could she do this to me?"-he yelled breaking all things that came on his path including the picture. "How??"-he yelled again and Bittuji came running into the room and tried to calm him down. "Chief,chief,please control yourself.Calm down"-he tried to hold him from breaking things. "Tell me Bittuji!"-RK again yelled breaking everything that was left standing. "How could she?" Bittu looked helplessly:"-Chief..." "How?"-he said and finally gave up and sat on the floor.Bittu sat next to him and looked him with compassion. "How?"-RK repeated and his eyes were full with tears. "-Chief please,please calm down.Your gonna disturb auntiji and you know that she wasn't feeling alright.You'll get through this.You'll see.Let me get you something to eat." "I don't want anything.Go away.Leave me." "Chief how can I leave you in this condition?" "I'll be fine,leave me.I don't want to see anyone.I don't want to hear anything.Leave me alone." "OK,chief.But please.Please promise me that you won't do something stupid.Please." "I said I'll be fine.Leave me!"

Bittuji left the room but he didn't leave the mansion.He was afraid that RK could do something in his anger or from despair.So he stayed.He was gravely disturbed."Where is bhabhiji?"-he thought."I need to find her.Only she can stop this madness"-he thought.He tried to call her cell again but it always played the same note "The phone you're trying to reach..." Madhu turned of her cell phone.He tried calling Padmini...Same effect. "Where are they?"-he thought.


Part 4 - page 11

Edited by ilovebandini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update loved it 👏⭐️RishBala separates again Madhu completes her revenge hope RishBala be together again 🤔 Tfs for pm 😊


Thank you.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
res
unres
so madhu left without ant clue😲
RK is desparate ...
and deepali i will kill her someday 😡
super ...👏
waiting 4 next
M the 1st 😆😆😆
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

res
unres
so madhu left without ant clue😲
RK is desparate ...
and deepali i will kill her someday 😡
super ...👏
waiting 4 next
M the 1st 😆😆😆


Hihi,thanks!😊Yes you are!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
awesome update loved it again 👏⭐️ Tfs for pm 😊😊

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