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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
cute and sweet update.rk helped madhu,n he forgot to boost about his bike.lol
yes love is much deeper n bigger than all these.v true n v well said.
the van scene btw reminded me of abhay saving piya from a truck in pkyek.
loved the update.thanks fr pm and continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Unresed my post on page 12...😆 Enjoy your Reading... And yes I will unres on VL2...😆 So many pending comments to write...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Rishabh was sitting on the dining table as he waited for the experimental dish that Madhu was trying to cook since morning. It was a sunday and she had decided to have some experiments in her kitchen but it seemed more on Rishabh.

"Fast Madhu.." He said with his eyes closed.

"Just a minute..." came her voice.

"I have been hearing this since last 15 minutes!" He complained.

"So thats your fault.. Why are you asking it every minute.." she cried.

"Okay fine.." RK said putting a finger in his ear.

After another 5 minutes Madhu came out with a dish in her hand. She kept it infront of him and RK looked at it intently.

"It looks good.. why are you so nervous..?" RK asked her with a smile.

"It should taste good too na.." Madhu replied back.

"It must be.. but I have a condition before tasting.."

"What?"

"If its too much tasty then you wont get a bite and I will eat it all.." RK said in a warning tone.

"Thats a stupid condition.." she grumbled.

"Fine I wont.. Now have it fast and tell me.." she said restlessly.

RK took a spoonful and tasted it. "Wow Madhu.. Its great..!" He said with an amazed expression.

"Really?!" She asked excitedly. " she said as she took a spoon to eat"

RK picked the bowl and distanced it. "I had said earlier that I wont give it to you if its tasty.." he said with a frown.

"Thats not fair.. I did so much of hard work.." she complained.

"I dont know all that... i will eat it.. all!" He said as he kept eating.

Madhu breathed in her anger and stared at him eating it as he praised the juiciness and the spice. But not long after she was sitting in front if him with a smile as she admired him and his expressions.

"You want to go out?" He asked after he had finished.

"Why?" She asked back.

"You haven't eaten anything so lets get you some dinner.." he said.

"Ohh yes.. thanks to you, I havent eaten anything yet.. i will get ready and come.." she said getting up quickly.

RK smiled at her. He was still waiting for her to come back when he saw her standing at her door with a crying face.

"What happened Madhu?" He asked shocked and worried.

She came up to him and stood infront of him. "You lied?" She said with a sob.

"What did I lie?" He asked confused.

"It wasn't tasty.. it was aweful.." she said breaking into another sob and the next second she hugged him and started crying.

RK laughed slightly. "why are you crying? Its not a big deal.. sometimes such dishes get spoilt.." he said as he hugged her back patting her head.

"But you ate all of it.. why did you eat it? You should have told me.." She complained in between her sobs.

"You made after a full day's work.. i couldn't get myself to refuse it.." he replied back. He couldn't understand why but her tears were really hurting him.

"I am sorry.." she said wiping her tears.

"But how did you taste it..?" He asked confused as he had eaten all of it.

"there was some left in the kitchen.." she replied with a slight smile.

RK shook his head disappointed with himself. "Just half the work.." he said to himself. Madhu broke into a slight laugh and RK smiled to her. "Come on.. get ready we have to go for dinner.." he said to himself.

They both went down and Madhu ran to stand beside his bike. "Fast Rishabh!!" She called out ti RrK who was searching for the keys in his jeans.

"Why do you get so jumpy at the sight of her.." RK asked back with a slight frown.

"Come On.. its your bike.. why wont I get excited. " she replied back.

"You dont get that excited seeing me.." RK said annoyed.

"Yeah yeah as if you know.." she rolled her eyes sitting behind him.

"Ohh.. you mean you do get excited..?" RK asked naughtily.

"I am not answering that.." Madhu shouts in his ear.

"Shit.. My ear!! Madhu I am not deaf.." RK said narrowing his eyes in pain.

"Sorry. I thought you wont be able to hear it in the sound of the wind.." she said still screaming as they sped off.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Yes!!!!!!!!!!I beat sudha!!!!!!!wooo!!!!!!🤣 I'm dancing all over the place [/:D\]
Victory is mine!!!!!🤣

Coming to the update...I loved it yammy...again imagining RK on a Ducati...how I wish I was in Madhu's place 😳 😆 I will throw her coffee in her face to throw her off 😆

The classic food was good when it actually wasn't 🤣 had to go through that many times on my life...went out to eat samosas later 🤣 But I still had to eat that not so appetizing food 🤣 Anyways... 😆

When will she find out that RK is a superhero? He can eat anything 🤣 ANYTHING! 🤣 that proves he is a superhero!!!!! 😆 I hope she does soon... 😆

Loved the update yammy...now I'm off to start reading VL2...I said that yesterday but I haven't done it yet... 😆 I'm lazy 😆 Continue soon 😆 and update again at this time so that I can get first 🤣
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
okay Meg...dont dance too much...i missed my spot here but i got it n VL2😉😆

funny update Yammy...😆😆
loved it...😛😛
haha...my poor Rk had to eat that crap fully...😭😭
why cant she taste before giving to him??😆
i ll kill her next time if she tries her hand on cooking...😡😆
better she makes only her famous coffee with her precious coffee maker🤢😆
awe...again Rk on ducati... how i wish he takes me a ride😃😃...lucky madhu...😉😉
thanks for the pm but resed before it reaches my inbox😆😆
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Nice update n the scene where madhu cries was too cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
So these two are spending cute moments with each other hmm, nyc update 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Awww poor rk how did he even eated her dangerous dish lol
sudhar jaa rk otherwise after marriage u r going to get this food daily
she spend whole day in making one dish
will she spend a month or year if by chance they organize some party n she has to cook
imagine tallibala in flour all over sight to watch rofl
lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update !! Hope rks stomach is in good condition after awful food ! Superb update yaar but y short ?? Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute update
Thanks for the pm dear

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