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Sudha I beat you!🤣

I know late with unresing... And I am glad you are continuing this story... 😆 Hope you know how to continue it now...😛

RK's heart fluttered...🤣 Fly hearty... Fly... Fly like the wind... No fly like Superman... Fly to the outer space...🤣

Wow. Some would say defensive and cute, I would say possessive...😆 He is so possessive with Madhu...😆 That poor nonflying heart of his doesn't know that yet...🤣 Well he'll find out as soon he sees Madhu talking with a different guy, a stranger...😆 Be prepared mister to get your little a** beaten from a superhero... Hell hath no fury like a possessive superhero...🤣 I so see that awful Uma Thurman superhero movie before me now... 🤣

Madhu is an angry little woman... Why only kicking the tyres... Kick it's engine...🤣 Oh, yeah that's right it's inside so she can't kick it... 😆 Well she can kick something else... But it would probably hurt her more...🤣

Now that teasing part... I loved it... RK is nowhere being girly... Teased her in the right way... And that Ducati... Well Ducati, Harley what makes the differnce... RK has a bike... That isn't girly at all... Well it could be if it was pink...🤣 Or him having a bicycle instead...🤣 Not saying bicycles are girly, they aren't... Just saying that given the previous 2 chapters and him saying he has a bike and it turned out to be a bicycle... I would literally ROFL and declared him as a girl while his superpowers makes him appear as a man...😆

He missed to rant about his bike?😲 This woman has totally got him...😆 Strange? RK yes it is strange that one obsession has replaced another obsession...🤣 I wonder what you would do if you ever saw a guy on your bike and with Madhu... 🤣 You'll be more successful than Elmer Fudd...🤣 Just saying this... Lets the hunting season begin...🤣

Now, you'll see something that is rarely seen by me... Unless it's about Rohan... And yes he is still mine and no I'm not cheating Sudha...😆 RK... Now you have almost repaired that girly aspect of yours... You didn't want to stop that driver, but couldn't let that girl's life be in danger... The arrogance, righteous and caring nature of yours got shown just in this little scene... Making me almost forget your, as I said, your girly girl aspects...😆 And it all went on smoothly, until that coffee came back into the picture...🤣 It made me remember all of the girly girl aspects all over again... And laugh remembering them... No offense Maryam...😳😆

👏👏 You made something incredible Maryam... You took a break, tried to look at it from a new perspective and you did it...😛 You accomplished it... You showed his superhero stunts, tricks or whatever it is...😆 Didn't go into detail about it all, and didn't make him all girly... You took a U-turn...👏 Keep it going and this story will surely be a success like all you other stories...

Thanks for the update and for the PM...

Better luck next time for me..😆

Woho I'm 3rd not bad at all!😆

Congrats ni di on coming first👏😆Maryam di you are an awesome writer and think u don't write well!

At last u updated Superhero story great di!

I must say Madhu is a lil too naive for her age😆

Poor car! I pity o you😆

Tada Rk the super man saves rk from the Demon driver 🤣

Loved the part di and I loved it when Madhu was blushing!

Tfs for pm di though I came before it...😆

Nice update.

RK confused about his feelings for Madhu.

Thanks for the pm.