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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had read it before but still read again to enjoy once more!!
was really awesomeee nd sweet story neha DEAR!!!
keep writing!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was one sweet love story... Love bloomed after marriage and RK was actually in love with his wife!! Loved it a lot!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FIRSTLY A BIG THANKU TO ALL OF U MY BEAUTIFUL READERS
I M OVERWHELMED TO RECEIVE SUCH AMAZING RESPONSE ON MY STORIES
SO AS I PROMISED TO POST THE SECOND PART FOR THIS STORY
I M HERE TODAY BEFORE THE DAY I SAID
THREE UPDATE IN A WEEK
QUITE A SPEED NA 😊

WELL THIS PART IS DEDICATED TO @zoya789
as she especially requested for it
n to sudha dii @madhurish who was excited to read it
so here it goes
HAPPY READING

part 2
chief chief , shouted bittuji from outside n came in rks cabin , disturbing his chain of thoughts. Rk glared at bittuji for
disturbing him again , n at once bittuji stopped in midway n luked everywhere but at him , rk got more irritated n shouted
wat the hell is wrong with u now will u plss say wat u want to say n leave me alone my head is bursting .
Bittuji hesitantly started speaking , he didnt want to be get killed by his chief for messing up again now rk got furious
n snapped at him r u speaking or shd i appoint a new manager for myself .
bittuji continued chief wo bhabhiji is coming to office , she just called me to inform u n she told me that u plss be free
when she is here n instantly a smile curved on his lips hearing his biwis name . It has been 2 weeks since he realised that he was
in love with madhubala rishabh kundra , his biwi his madhu but alas the ceo of kundra empire found it difficult to say to his
wife n since then he has been thinking of telling her abt his love but wenever she comes infront of him , he falls short of ideas
n makes a fool out of himself infront of her . Bittuji was waiting for rk to say something but he was simply smiling
which made bittuji shocked that his chief was smiling at nothing , was he ok , did he hit his head somewhere or is he hallucinating
something , all sorts of question occured in his mind n he blurted to rk
chief r u ok do u need doctor ? is ur head aching now rk luked confused at him n asked bittuji did u leave ur eyes at ur home today
or u simply got them exchanged or u fall from some height n u r seeing too much , do i luk ill to u that i ll need doctor
wat the hell is happening to everyone nowadays y u ppl r behaving so madly now bittuji luked at him stunned n said chief its u who is
behaving so differently nowadays u smile at nothing in particular , even bhabhiji was telling me that u have become wiered these
days . RK glared at bittuji n said now will u leave or r u planning to eat my rest of the brains too already half r eaten by biwi
now u too do it n fulfill her emptiness n they heard a thuddd sound n rk luked in the direction finding madhu glaring at him
ready to kill him . Bittuji ran from the cabin to save his life ppor soul always gets sandwitched between these crazies fights
for not supporting anyone in particular .
Biwi, biwi listen i was just telling n she shhhed him n said had hai rk do i eat ur brains that u were complaining bittuji abt me
she said cutely n rk just wanted to kiss her there n then but he control n said to himself luk rishabh kundra who is asking
she wants to know whether she eats ur brain or not wen in real she has fully smitten u by her charms n magic . Madhu waved her hands
infront of him n he came out of his thoughts n madhu raised her eyebrows at him n said ,'' rk wats wrong with u where u get lost
these days r u fine is there any problem then plss tell me we will go to doctor'' n she pressed her lips to not laugh at the last
rk smirked at her n pulled her through her waist n she got stunnned with his sudden action
he huskily said , u want to know where i get lost na i ll tell u but tonite wen we will go out
till then have a restless time sweetheart n he left her waist n sat down on the sofa as if nothing happened between them
madhu stood there in a daze n rk called out to her n said r u planning to serve me the lunch or u want me to be hungry n he winked at
her which made her heart skip a beat . They ate in silence n soon madhu left from there n rk went to make arrangements
for the surprise he planned for hi biwi .
It was 8 pm wen madhu reached to the address rk had called her with the driver he send along with a gift wrap packet which
had a beautiful black saree , matching danglers n sandals n a beautiful diamond bracelet . She was amazed to see her hubby being so
romantic all of a sudden , she realized that he wants to tell her something but she was confused wat it cld be . After the driver went away
she luked around but found no one , not even a single light she got scared n started to call r ... rkkk ... rkkk r u here
n he came from behind n blindfolded her n she got more scared n rk calmly said relax biwi its me y r u getting scared i m here right
she stomped her foot n said wat r u doing i cant see anything wat this place is y is it so dark here
biwi if u ll calm down then we will start walking n u ll know where we r n now come on stop being a questinaire n come with me
he holded her hand n started walking slowly so that she doesnt trip on her saree , wen they reached their destination
rk said to her that i m going to remove ur blindfold u plss open ur eyes slowly .
rk removed her blindfold n madhu opened her eyes n was stunned to see the sight infront of her
they were standing on a love boat in the middle of lake , the boat was decorated with red roses n white n red heart shapped balloons
n colourful lights n to her surprise there were her big pictures allover now she luked at rk with tears in her eyes n rk went on
his knees n said the words which he was dying to say
''madhubala rishabh kundra u became my wife two yrs back but we never had anything more than friendship but slowly slowly
u made me fall for u life never seemed so beautiful untill u entered it , rk never felt so blissfull before meeting u
i never felt so complete before u entered my life will u give me the honour to be the man of ur dreams
will u let me hold u in my arms in my warmth for the rest of my life r u willing to be my soul mate for the next 7 births
i love u madhubala i really love u a lot frm the bottom of my heart will u let me mark ur soul with my name
n before he could say more madhu sat down on her knees immediately n threw herself in his arms n cried happy tears n said
i m already urs rishabh my soul my heartbeat everything belongs to u
i love u too rishabh i love u sooo much . Rk smiled n hugged her tightly
crackers burst in the sky n they luked above n it read RK LOVES MADHUBALA
madhu smiled n hugged him again n rk said biwi if u r planning to sit here all ur life
then i have no problem but its just my knees r paining a lot n both chuckled
rk picked her up in his arms n took her inside the bedroom in the boat
to mark her as his .
The night was a long passionate night for the love birds who just confessed their love to each other
n dreamt to spend all their life in each others arms .

p.s so here goes the second part
hope u guysss like it
plss do like n comments .

Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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perfect end to a beautiful story
Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awesome and perfect update 👏
thanks for pm Neha dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Beautiful ending to the lovely os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
awww!!! really mindblowing one dear!!! loved it all a perfect end!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Nice second part Neha.
You had me laughing at the middle with Bittuji.😆
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Loved the part with Bittuji 😆
And the ending was so sweet 😳
Awesome update neha

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