Rishbala OS - A Happily Ever After? *Added Part* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Reading this once again
And I loved it each time 😉
Awesome choti 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Excellent so well scripted just love them so much Rk amd Madhu so carefree. Just brilliant keep up good job. Keep me in the list. Have a great day . Keep the story rolling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Beautiful os, the flasback added essence to it, it was lil painful. Thanks for sharing this part with us
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
thanks for the pm
already read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome os Lubeeda di... loved it too much...
Tfs for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome work
Very emotional
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
WOW!! it was beautiful...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awesome and brilliant story dear 👏 Tfs for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesme OS luby😊I m speechless,Jst love this piece of writing very much,I cried while reading this OS,U knw u can pretent in frnt of all world bt we can't pretent to our own self na,Madhu lost smone with whom she used to imagine her future,She cried and cried bt can't able to forget him and mve on in her life,her parents thought shifting place might bring change in Madhu's cndition,and in that point Madhu realise hw much she is hurting her parents,her parents want her happy and for her parents only she tried to talk mre and mingle with friends , might that help her to overcme her lonelyness,with time Madhu's behaviour start to change wo kahte hain na waqt se bara davya koi nehi hota,Bt her love never fade,she never forget him,bt she nw knw hw to pretend that she is hppy nd mved on in frnt of world and then they cmbk once again and madhu's all old memories which she hold back a cornr of hr heart forcefuly started to cmbk again,then she has to face RK's mther too,hw painful it would be for madhu😔Bt shd did that too for her family and hr Rk's family's happins,here cm's her past in frnt of her the same face whom she tried to forget all her life in frnt of hr, bt he is nt her RK,few moments of hope and happiness faded when crual reality hit her.Then the unexected proposal, life gave her a new chance ,a chance to mve on without forgeting her past yet mv on for new hope,a new future.Jst love hw u wrote it luby🤗,madhu's emotion,rishabh's pov each and everthing u explained beautiful.Already read 4 times dnt knw hw many times will read mre,Pls write mre os's like this and yeah nw m going to start reading ur ff's too😃 pls I m requesting abhi se thora regular update dete rahna jada tarshana nehi plz😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear Lubu loved this brilliant and marvellous OS,🤗
you have written it so beautifully.👏 👏
What a story,emotional,lovely,very diff.,but pratical too.👏 👏
Loved loved it so much. 😛I cried while reading it yaar.😭
Madhu was feeling so lonely,she loved Raj very much and when she met Rishabh,she got ready to gv a chance to herself and her life again,😳she should coz one can't die with the dead.
Life appears so long when you are alone and she will always love Raj but she also want to live happily after,nt unhappy everafter.
The flashback was so emotional,very heart touching,written excellently,the scene in the hospital,one could easily feel their pain.😭why sometimes life give so much pain?
Loved Rishabh also,he is sush a nice guy,so caring.In all loved all the char. and loved every bit of it.😛

I loved the idea of Madhu accepting Rishabh and ya her love for Raj will never die,even if she accepted Rishabh.These are two diff.things.It doesn't means that her love was false for Raj.Its pure and true.Truly an amazing story and congratz to you for winning the competition.🥳You deserved it for writing such exceptional piece of work.⭐️
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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