Rishbala OS - A Happily Ever After? *Added Part*

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Hey Guys!!
Here i am posting the OS which i entered in the forum's Competition organised so well by Kavya sis, Uma sis and Sporrow sis!! And i also ended up winning!! I would heartly like to thank everyone who voted for me and also congratulate once again all the other participants! Everyone wrote sooo well!!

Anyway i am posting this OS again becoz when i was sending it to Uma sis i thought it got too long so decided to take out parts in order to shorten it a bit. Becoz of that i had to change a few paragraphs around so that it made sense and now i am just adding a flashback into the story which i think will still make sense...

please leave comments and feedback and please like :)

P.S. Added part in a different colour..

A Happily Ever After?


5 years have passed since that incident but it is still planted in my mind as if it happened just yesterday, and here i was, returning back to the same place which had his memories everywhere. Not that i have forgotten any moments of us together but that place seemed to haunt me back then. I was young and couldn't handle everything. Once i was finished with school my parents thought it would be best to move away from London and away from his memories so that i could start a new life. In some way i am thankful to them as it did help me start again but getting rid of his memories would never happen. I had become a more talkative and outgoing person here in Birmingham which i had never been. I had made a great set of new friends but never even tried dating someone because i couldn't get myself to. It would be like cheating right?

Since childhood i had been shy but ambitious and like every other girl i had waved dozens of dreams in that tiny head of mine. Hundreds of wishes which would bring happiness to me. Those little gestures or things which would make me happy and which i had planned to return to my loved ones in order to make them smile. But one of the biggest dream of every girl has to be, to find her prince charming from watching all those Disney movies since a young age. It's funny naa, how that little idea of one day a prince coming on his white horse will love you endlessly and then they would live a happily ever after. And whilst you grow up that dream just gets bigger and more realistic. You start to understand than no prince charming on a horse will come for you but you still dream of a happily ever after just with a normal everyday guy who will still love you endlessly. He would make you feel special in his own ways and that will be just for you.

When i started High school all those dreams i had with him' started falling apart. Those poor innocent dreams clashed with reality. Not only was i too shy to even talk to a guy but hardly any guy ever even really tried to start a conversation with me. After all i was the nerd of the class who managed to always get the highest marks in class but unfortunately not many friends. Time started to move on and many started dating. I hardly had friends except Trishna and Mark who themselves were dating one another. Being a silent observer i always managed to catch on the happenings on my classmates lives which seemed to be filled with excitements. Be it their friend group outings, parties, hook ups or even break ups. With the kind of life that surrounded me i started figuring out that I'd e one of those people who would never find that special one to spent the rest of my life with.

That thought soon changed when i meet him. He was the new kid in Year 10 who moved to London with his mother from Manchester. His arrival changed everything. It brought freshness into my dull life. A smile onto my face. Making my eyes always search for him; RK. And to top everything off, Him and his mother, Ms.Radha, had moved into a house down my street. RK wasn't like every other guy, but was a very reserved person. Yes he was interactive with others unlike me but he also tried to talk to me, the nobody in class.

Both of our families being Indian my parents also soon became good friends with his mother which just made us see each other more often; over dinners or some religious events. And with every meet i just found myself more attracted to him. He always had his hair gelled sidewards which i thought made him look adorable. Like every other teenager he also liked to wear jeans and t-shirts as casuals and in school have his uniform tie a bit loose. However I always had it neat and perfectly set. Over a span of a few months we two had become very comfortable and close friends and my feelings for him just grew on and on. A total surprise to me was that he was into books and had his own little library in his room. We started spending more time with each other, and with every passing moment i knew i was falling in love with him. Somewhere deep down it did scare me if he liked me or saw me the same way i did but everything changed when he asked me out on my 16th birthday. It indeed was the best present anyone could have given me. Our parents didn't have any problem with our relationship either. From that moment everything changed in my life. People started noticing me more as he never left a chance to introduce me as his girlfriend, which helped me a lot as i managed to build on my people skills. Months passed and we just grew on each other. Thinking a day without him seemed impossible and with 100% i could say it was the same for him. We had shared our first kiss which just felt heavenly. It was as if i had already gotten my happily ever after just by being in his arms, but how wrong was I. I still laugh at myself for believing in that. I have always read books, the guy and girl fall in love, then he or she leaves him or her but at the end they mostly end up back together. But not in my love story. He left me and now will never return.

Today was the first day back here in London. The same house i lived and grew up in for more than 16 years of my life."Mom, Dad i am going out for a while.." "Madhu?" "Don't worry Mom, i am going down to the local stores in hope to find some old class mates." i told her in an assuring voice. I knew she was worried for me; they didn't even want to come back here in the first place if it wasn't for my dad's transfer and my continues nagging and assurance that i would be fine. But would i really? I didn't know myself.

I walked down the streets to the local markets avoiding RK's house on the way as i knew i wasn't ready to face it. I might have grown strong as in a person and also accepted with the happenings but some things will take time. I looked around the area. Yes things had changed but some things were still in the same place, like my and RK's favourite bookshop. Making up my mind i decided to go in and have a look around.

"Madhu?" asked the old lady who seemed to recognise me. "Morning Mrs. Harris" i smiled. "My Lord, look at you, you have changed." she said as she cradled my cheek lovingly. "With time everything changes." i stated. "It's been years, Madhu.." She took me into a comforting hug which i accepted. "You still haven't forgot him right?" "Not at all." I decided to take a leave after we chatted for a while. I walked through the park where me and RK always spent good time in just walking or sitting around. I couldn't help it but everything reminded me of him and our time together, no matter how hard i tried. I was lost in my thoughts and memories that is a gentle tap on my shoulder which brought me out of them. I turned around to find out who it was. Immediately a bright smile broke out on my face; there stood my only two buddies i had in this city, Trishna and Mark. Trishna clasped her mouth with both of her hands in shock and Mark just stood there stunned. "Hey guys!" i greeted excitedly while giving both of them a quick friendly hug which somehow just managed to shock them more. "Now will you two keep standing here like statues or will you talk?" i asked bored with not either saying a word. "Madhu what happened to you?!" Trishna finally asked. " I mean no glasses-" "-Err..Contact Lenses..Duh?" i cut her out with my explanation while pointing to my eyes. "Seriously Madhu are you ok?" Mark asked. I gave him a confused look. "Like look at you! You look so different and Wow! You are talking way more." he explained. "I think this is already the longest conversation we had with you actually talking." he continued stunned at me. I laughed at his comment but couldn't deny agreeing with it. We continued to talk and catched up on each others lives. Time and a new environment had changed me which they pointed out. Trishna was now Mark's fiancee and they both soon planned to get married which was a shocker to me. They were only 21 but had decided on it already but both explained that they would only get married after they finish university for which it was only left a year for Trishna and two for Mark. Anyhow it was exciting news to me however nothing about him was spoken. We exchanged numbers to meet up another day. When i left i wanted to leave everything behind me which also made me lose contact with my two only friends here.

"Madhu, we are going over to Radha ji's today." Mom told me as i was walking up the stairs making me stop on the spot. It had been a week since we had come back here and i still hadn't meet her. "She invited us over for a Puja and wants you to come too. She really wants to meet you dear." mom informed me. I did too want to meet her but could i face her? "Your friends Trishna and Mark will also be coming there with Trishna's family." this time it was Dad who spoke up. I nodded. "Okay i will get ready by evening." i told her and continued my way up. Once in my room i took a look at the picture of me and RK holding hands and widely smiling. I had to meet Radha mom sooner or later anyway so why not now. I took out a red-pinkish Saree and decided to wear it for the puja. I applied light make-up and put on a pair of earrings which matched to the Saree. "Madhu you look beautiful!" mom said proudly as i came downstairs "Excuse me? She is Daddy's princess and daddy's princess always looks beautiful but have to say today she will blow everyone off." Dad said playfully to which we all had a laugh. "Still I will never get anyone like you." i replied to which he laughed and puled me into a hug.

"I am nervous." "Don't be. She is family to us." Dad comforted me as we rang the bell. He put his arm around me and gave me a light squeeze on the shoulder. Radha Mom opened the door and instantly i was hit by a wave of tears in my eyes and also could see her welling up. "it feels so good to have my daughter finally back." she said as she put some khol behind my ear to keep me away from bad eyes and then instantly hugged me, tight. We had a little reunion at the door and then she asked us to come in. I felt his presence there for sure, which felt soothing and content. I greeted my friends and her family who were already present with a smile. "Since when did that nerdy Madhu turn so good looking and hot?" i could hear the soft whisper from Trishna's older brother to Mark. I let out a light chuckle. "And Sultan you tell me, since when so interested in girls? If i remember correctly you always used to stay away from them saying they are too much drama and all?" "Well one can't help it. I am a 23 year old guy and well, if you know what i mean." he replied adding a wink as he finished up. All of us laughed at his comment and talked for some more. I got up and headed towards the kitchen to help out the ladies in there. Fixing my Saree on the way and not paying much attention i suddenly collided with a black figure who was deceasing down the stairs. Starting to lose my balance i somehow managed to interlock my arm into the arm of the figures who seemed physically strong as he held on to me and then pulled me up. I looked up to make direct eye contact with the person. Everything froze for me. He stood there right in front of me, intensely staring at me. It was him. I had no clue about my surrounding because right now it was only him in front of me. The last time i saw his face was 5 years back and here again he stood in front of me.My eyes were already welled up and i couldn't think straight at all. I slowly raised my hand to his cheek, lost in his eyes. He had a light stubble. He was different. His hair was spiked up and falling sidewards which allowed some strands to fall on his forehead. The intensity in his eyes was soon replaced with a flirtations look and smirk adoring his lips,"Ooo Aankhon mein teri, Ajab si ajab si adayein hai" he sang in a soft whisper. "Dil ko banade jo patang saa se, Yeh teri woh haawaien hain.." he continued to sing with that playful smirk. He brought up his index finger to lightly flick my nose with. He was different. He had smirk instead of a smile. A stubble instead of a clean shave. This wasn't him. It couldn't be him. Getting myself together i pushed him as hardest as i could. I looked around the room to find everyone had gone silent and was looking at us both. "Hey! Why did you push me for?" "You..you are not him!" "Madhu.." i heard Radha mom call me as held my shoulder from my side. "No Mom. This is not my RK!" "Madhu listen.." "Mom this isn't Raj!He..h-He is Rishabh right?" i asked which then made everything sense to me. Radha Mom nodded her head in agreement. I looked at Rishabh again. He looked totally like him just more rough. "When did he come here?" i asked still looking at him. In some way it hurt to look at him because i didn't have my RK with me. "Once he turned 18. He was old enough to move out from his father's place and came to live with me." she explained. Raj and Rishabh were both twins and due to the divorce each parent had got one child. Raj had told me how Rishabh had planned to later move in with them once he was old enough. I had never meet him until today and it felt all wrong. "Mom..i..i can't.." "Madhu.." "no Mom..everything about him seems the same!" i stressed out."Mom i need some time alone. Is..is RK's room still there?" i asked her. "Madhu no one goes into that room. It always stays locked." "Mom please?" "But.." "I need to go.." i explained with my head low. I didn't want anyone to see my tears but i knew most of them already knew. "Hmm..you know where to find the key."she told me with hurt and pain for me clearly noticeable in her voice.

I rushed up the stairs, unlocked his room and slowly walked in. With the first glance itself, I could tell that it was regularly dusted and cleaned, even if it stayed locked. It was still the same though. His bed, table, book shelf, everything in the same place. And every single picture still in place. He always enjoyed taking photographs so we two had pictured of every moment and he always put them on his wall making a big collage. I don't know how long i stood there, looking at those pictures and remembering those moments which included the day i lost him in that car accident.

*Flashback 5 years ago*

My sobs were just not coming to an end. How could they? The person i loved the most was inside the ICU fighting for his life or actually my life as i knew i would have no soul without him. For the millionth time i wished that i could just set time back and stop RK leaving my house for even a minute longer so that he wouldn't be in the position he is now. If only that had happened then that drunk driver wouldn't have driven into him.I couldn't help myself from thinking of the pain he must be bearing right now. He always has hated injection and needles and right now so many needles had been injected into him. Radha mom was crying in the chairs opposite mine and my mom tried comforting her while she herself had tears filled in her eyes. Dad had his arm around me, making me lean into his chest as i cried hoping and praying that everything would be fine soon.

Finally after hours of waiting the doctor who was operating on him came out. "I know this is very though for you all," started Dr. Davis, "but i will be honest with you all. He..He doesn't have much time. He is really critical and there is not much chance for survival, but we will still try our best. I am sorry." he explained. It couldn't be. My RK couldn't just like that leave me! I know he will put up a good fight with death because he has always been a fighter. Be it through protecting me or through his parents divorce. He won't give up. I had faith on him."C..Can I..g-go see..him?" i stuttered through my tears. I think these were a few words i said after many hours."Only once he regains conscious, but i must warn you that it might be the last time he will wake up." I shock my head at him. I knew he is wrong. RK will fight, fight for his life and mine.

"How is he? Mom tell me...did he talk? What did he say?" I shoot my questions at Radha Mom as she exited the ICU. He had woken up 5 hours after the doctor had left and all four of us sat outside patiently. Once the doctors had checked him they allowed us to meet him one by one. Even though i wanted to rush to see him i had to stop myself. Radha Mom was his mother and gave birth to him. She was in equal pain as me and had the first right to go see him."He wants..to..meet you.." she cried. I encircled my arms around her and gave her a supporting hug which i too needed. She cried onto my shoulder for a few minutes and then finally sent me in. I looked around the room to find beeping machines but when my eyes found him they welled up even without my permission. I slowly stepped towards him and sat down on the stool next to the bed. His face was covered with scratches from the crash. Plasters covered his ribs and stomach were the car had driven straight into. Even his head was covered with band aids but still blood was visible. I took his hand, which was attached to many wires leading off to different machines, and held it. He slowly opened his eyes and looked at me weakly. I knew he was trying to smile which he did eventually manage. There was a long soothing silence between us. "Ma..Ma-d..hu," he said with great difficulty, "a-al..ways..sm-i-le.." "I promise i will but only if you are with me.." "N..o...pl-ea-se?" Not wanting to refuse him i nodded with a tearful face. "I Love you RK..please hold on..for me?" i requested. "I Lov-e..y-ou..t-oo".

And that were his last words to me. I slumped down leaning against the hospital wall were my Dad came over to comfort me while my Mom supported Radha mom with the news the Doctor just gave us.

A week later they held his funeral in the local cemetery which i think everyone attended. I still hadn't accepted that he left me as i felt his presence in everything around me. I didn't want to go back to my normal life but my parents wanted me to slowly move on so they thought it would be best if i attend school to get my mind off things instead sitting around in my room with his pictures. But school made everything just worse. Everyone seemed to show pity on me or constantly ask me if i was ok? Was i? I didn't know the answer myself but i defiantly knew that they were getting on my nerves which lead everyone to see a new side of me. I myself actually didn't know if i could ever get angry on someone let alone shout.

"You two were really deeply in love right?" Rishabh asked dragging me out of thoughts. I hadn't noticed him coming into the room but guessed that he stood there for some time now and was looking at those pictures with me which he was still looking at. They weren't of big events or so but just everyday happening and activity pictures. "Yes, and i still am." "I am sorry." "Don't be, he was your brother too." I had calmed down a lot. His memories were always soothing. And in those memories there was no Rishabh which helped me accept the fact that Rishabh was a total different person. "Hmm, a brother who didn't attend his funeral." "Why didn't you?" i asked. I never had really thought about it. He and their Dad both didn't attend. "Dad had taken me to a relative of his and mom didn't know. So the news never got to us. Once it did, i did come here but had to return back after a few days. I never really got the chance to meet anyone as i had decided to stay with mom but she was getting affected by it as we are twins and obviously look the same. So i went back." he explained. I nodded. "Am i affecting you right now?" i looked up at him. He was a bit taller than RK i noticed. I shock my head. He was Rishabh and a total different person. I needed to accept that and i would but ruining away from him would certainly not help. "Can i hug you?" he asked which took me by total surprise. "Huh? What?" "I want to hug you." he repeated. Was he for real? "But why?" "Just. As a friend you know." "We are friends?" "Why don't you want to be?" once again he looked at me intensely waiting for my answer. It wouldn't be fair on him if i kept myself away from him only because he had the same face as Raj but could i manage seeing him present here always in front of me? There is no way that i wouldn't remember RK by just him being around me but that is what i want to overcome right? Making up my mind, i hugged him. A friendly hug for the start of our friendship. He hugged me back, tight and i could tell that it wasn't a friendly hug any more. It was more of a supporting hug, for the loss of someone very close to us both. It felt good. Content. And maybe also finally, complete.

"Hey" "Hi" "Why did you call me here?" "Just.." "Huh?" "Well just like that. Can't we two just hang out?" "Over a coffee?" i asked curiously. Rishabh just shrugged his shoulders. He pulled out a chair for me to sit on and then seated himself opposite me. "Btw you look beautiful but i liked that Saree look on you more." "Thank you." i giggled. " You don't look bad yourself." i complimented him. He had worn a casual black shirt which really made him stand out. "You look quite attractive to be honest." i smiled and winked at him. Instantly his smile turned into a smirk which clearly reflected attitude. Which RK never had. We placed our orders to the waiter and started to talk a bit about ourselves."You know i asked mom about you." "Why?" i asked a bit tensed. "To know more about you." "And?" "Well the description she gave me does not match with you at all i think." "Why? What did Mom say?" "That you are a shy reserved girl. A bookworm. Innocent." "So you don't think i am innocent?" "Of course not!" "What?!" i asked shocked. "Well yes. You are the one trying to seduce me in broad daylight." he acted all terrified managing to make me laugh hard. He stared at me for a while as i calmed down and asked him what?' through body language."You know you have a beautiful laugh." he replied still staring at me but only straight in my eyes this time. I don't know what but something about him managed to bring some feelings into me when he was around. It was just him, his way of being who he is. It was a strange pull which i couldn't explain and neither could resist because it was the best i felt in years. Or was it because RK himself too always said that i had a beautiful smile?Was i trying to search Raj in Rishabh?

We decided to walk around the place once finished with our drinks. We stopped near a small crowd who was gathered listening to someone playing soft guitar music. People placed coins and notes as they left in a hat in front of him. "May i have a dance?" Rishabh asked extending his hand. "What? Here?" "Yes what is wrong with this place?" "It's public." "But he too is playing Public and nobody or he himself seems to have a problem with that." "Still." "So you mean you just don't want to dance with me?" "No you are taking it all wrong." "Then?" "Well i haven't actually ever danced before." i told him embarrassed. "Not even with Raj?" he asked shocked. I shock my head. "Wow. He always was this kind of gentle and sweet gesture person. But seriously no dance?" ha asked again shocked. I once agin shock my head. "Well if not with that RK then would you want to share your first dance with this RK?" "But i don't know ho to." i reminded him. "Don't worry, just go with the flow." he said gently holding my hand and leading it forward from the crowd. He placed the hand which was in his on his shoulder and slid his hand around my waist. He entwined the other hand into his own and then slowly stepped forwards and backwards allowing me to get a hang of it. I knew people were staring but he didn't take his eyes off me and didn't allow me either. It was just me and his capturing eyes. He was different. Very different. And i liked everything about it.

Another week flew by just like that and with everyday me and Rishabh meet up in one place or the other. I could never deny him and even if i did, he would somehow persuade me. Sometimes over dinner where he would be a perfect gentleman while at other times when we would just go out to a local club he would be total flirt which just attracted me more to him. He had this type of personality which would make everything lively and joyful, and me too. He introduced me to many of his friends of whom some i already knew. He was the total opposite of my RK but i guess that's what i liked about him.

"Madhu?" "Yes, my name is Madhu. Short for Madhubala." i smiled. "I know what your name is, pagley." Radha mom laughed, lightly hitting me on my head. "Well then why did you say my name so surprisingly?" "Well maybe because i wasn't expecting you here." "Oh so now i have to ask to come?" i put on a hurt face to which she laughed out load. "No Dear, come on in." Once we settled ourselves on the couch she asked me if i wanted anything to drink which i politely denied. "Ermm, Mom isn't Rishabh home? Where is he? He promised to take me to the university he studies at for an admission. I hope he didn't forget." "I am here, and no i didn't forget." Rishabh spoke with a smile. "Then let's go?" "Ladies first.." he spoke gesturing his arms forward towards the door. "Bye Mom." both of us spoke in unison. I grabbed my file which had all my documents in it off the couch and headed out. Rishabh stood there leaning against his car waiting for me. He again had his hair spiked sidewards like the other day and put on a pair of sunglasses which i have to say looked really good on him. He wore a black leather jacket, a pair of jeans and a white shirt which stuck close to his body giving a slight hint of the abs that were hidden underneath it. Wait was i checking him out?

"Hey RK what's up dude?" shouted someone as he parked up. RK. I looked at him to find him looking at me worried. "Madhu..well..i know Raj was called as RK too but people call me that too." i nodded. "Can i call you Rishabh though?" "Only You and Mom." "Hey RK who is this?" asked that same guy as we walked towards him." The Love of my Life.." Rishabh stated putting his hand on my waist and holding me possessively. Not only what he said had shocked the wits out of me but his hold too. It was just like Raj, though he just used to say it and hold me lovingly and full of care unlike this RK who seems more possessive. I was lost in my thoughts that i didn't even notice we had started walking on with his hand still on my waist. "I am sorry for that, but i know guys will start to annoy you sooner or later., which i can guess you will get uncomfortable with. If they know that you are with me there is not much of a chance." he explained. I didn't say anything but just continued to walk. I had been occupied with Rishabh so much that i wasn't even missing Raj that much. Did i feel guilty? Yes. It's only been about 2 and a half weeks since I ave gotten back here and already Rishabh was taking up his space. Didn't I ove him? Was my Love this weak? These questions kept eating me up from the inside.

"Madhu please say something." Rishabh said finally breaking the silence on the way home. Paperwork was done and now I just needed my parents to sign some papers and then I could start soon. However I didn't talk to him at all. Somehow he had managed to make everything awkward between us and I did not know how to break that awkwardness. Or was it actually me? Me holding back? Me over thinking? But wasn't he showing too much concern for me? More than a friend would? Like RK? No he couldn't. I needed to make everything clear before it got out of hand.

Having enough Rishabh parked at the side of the street and got out slamming the door. He was angry which scared me. I got out and walked up to him. "Madhu I am sorry." "Why do you care Rishabh?" "What do you mean?" "I mean why do you care if I am getting affected by you? Why do you care if I could grow uncomfortable with other guys around me?" "Madhu.." "No answer me..." I told him in a furious whisper. "Because I Care God Dammit!" he let out furiously while grabbing my arms. Then softening up a bit, "I don't know if it is because of the girl I saw in a book shop happily talking with an old women. I don't know if it is because something about her attracted me to her that I actually was crazy enough to follow her." he let out a sight,"I don't know if it is because of that lost wondering girl in the park or that sudden change in her once she meet her friends. Or because I kept thinking about you for the rest of the week, going to that park and bookshop just in the hope to get a glimpse of you." I looked at him in shock. He had left me totally speechless. "Seriously Madhu, I don't know if it is because of these two beautiful eyes which have so much dullness and loneness in them. Or that surprise in them when they first meet mine, that sudden happiness. But I guess that wasn't for me. Madhu I havn't told you but I loved this past week. Just you and me. Your playfulness, that laugh..I love it all." he confessed as he raised his hands to cup my face and then gently wiped away those tears with his thumb. "Madhu I now I don't know you that and you don't either, but I want to get to know you. Even if it is just as friends dear. But I just want to be a part of your life since the day I fist saw you, meet you. I know everything is too soon but please, just one chance" he said leaning his own forehead with mine. "Rishabh.." "Madhu?" "I can't.." "Try.." "I am so sorry.." I silently cried. "I can't..can't get myself to.." "to take another chance?" I shock my head nodding whilst bitting both my lips together. "Just one chance Madhu..All I ask for is one chance.." he breathed heavily. "Can I please have some time?" "Take all the time you want...I am ready to wait." "What if I don't love you?" "Then be loved by me." "What if I feel something for you?" "Then I will make sure to never let that feeling die down." "What if I am scared that you will take Raj's place? I feel like I am cheating. What if the thing I feel isn't for you? What if it actually is for him?" "Madhu listen, I will never take his place or ask you to give it to me. He was special and always will be and believe me even if it is a way of you loving him I will feel content." "How can you say all this?" "Because I am falling for you. And that too very deeply." he said as he hugged me. I cried on his shoulder trying to overcome my fears and insecurities.

"Rishabh?" "Madhu you have to." I looked at him scared. He gave me an assuring nod and put out his palm in which I placed my hand. "You ready?" "Only if your there with me." I spoke and he smiled. He led me through the graveyard up to his. Rishabh pressed my hand for support. He handed me a bunch of Red roses which he purchased a while earlier, "Go." he said as he let go of my hand. I walked up to his grave and bend down caressing his engraved name Raj Kundra'. "Hey RK. 5 years and not a single day when I didn't feel complete without you. I know you must be angry for not coming to visit but hey better late than never right." I left out a soft chuckle amongst my tears. "You know RK, I meet your brother here, RK, Rishabh Kundra. He is like you in some ways but different in many. You know he is very fast and bold. It took you months to tell me what you felt and he took only a few weeks. Raj, I Love you and always will but now I..I want to take a chance. A Chance to Love again. A chance to find my Happily Ever After. Bye Raj. I will come visit again soon and next time I promise I will bring him along with me and not let him stand away from me." I got up wiped my tears and placed the roses next to his stone. I smiled over to Rishabh and extended my hand which he happily took as walked up to me. I will take this chance and this time I will have a Happily ever after...


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First to comment. 😆 Lubu this was one of my favorite stories. And I am happy I get to be first to comment. The flashback scene was just so 😭. Well done.👏 The entire story was very beautiful written. You didn't even had a chance to PM me. 😆

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loved it
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brilliant piece of work, lube dear!!⭐️
i'm so proud that i voted for the right story & i'm happy this story won the winner up title!! u deserved it!!👏
it's already an emotional story & to top that u added an even more emotional flash back!!😭 but i dint feel much hurt bcos i know its raj & not Rk!!😆
please do write more!!😳
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excellent os dear👏
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excellent os 👏 ...loved it

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Congrats Lubeeda👏
It's very nice & emotional OS, base on Different & excellent story!

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This Story is really different,,,😳


It;s like 1st love and 1st feelings or love belongs to raj than Rishbah,,,

And RK feelings is like Sudden love or Impressed by charm...and Raj was like True love or real love...

mmm,
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Originally posted by: Ni33

First to comment. 😆Lubu this was one of my favorite stories. And I am happy I get to be first to comment. The flashback scene was just so 😭. Well done.👏The entire story was very beautiful written. You didn't even had a chance to PM me. 😆



And the trophy for the first comment goes to...NINA!!! 😆
Aww thank u sisso!!

And I still haven't PM'd anyone...am gonna do it in a while.. 😃 but still well done 😆
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved it

i was so touched



Aww thank u once again dia! 😳

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