RiMa OS- When Love Met With Retribution- Part 2- Page 8

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Bun

@KazBrekker

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane
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Sorry I quoted...its a mistake..I was meant to ptess edit...but ab kya kare? Itna quote kar kar ke adat bhan gahi hai! 😆 and also partly because I am too lazy to go back and click edit 😆

Coming to the OS..I think I jave already told u hw much I loved it!! LOVED THAT GREEDY MADHU! Even if she changed butI loved Iit coz usually the girl is always good...here its jwr own fault..what goes around comea around

And this is a threat! U better write Part 2 or u will be getting flooded! By all three of us and now we even have a bigger army so mind it.. 😆

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bhavnajaiswal

@bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Keep up the Good writing 👍🏼

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

No need to read already read!!!
it's most amazing, interesting, fantastic story I hv ever read in my life!!!
hats Off to ur imagination kavya dii!!!! 👏 👏 totally loved it!!!

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sufidox

@sufidox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Ya i read it and really Loved it

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Exellent OS Kavya Di!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesome update dear 😃😳

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I thought that this maya must be madhus twin sister sumthng heheh but it was not like that .i liked that part when madhu asks rk that did he never love her .Anyhow i wanted rk to say that he didnt love her

I think that could have been more appropriate

Anyways it was a very well written and a different os

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Again i liked that loyal rk to his frnd and money minded heroine .its was just a big twist .negative leads was brave idea .u can continue with the next part if u wish so and can make madhu and rk unite .i wont say rk has completely taken revenge from as he himself has to suffer for loving madh .it would have been better if he hadnt luvd her