RiMa OS- When Love Met With Retribution- Part 2- Page 8 - Page 3

I know madhu did wrong. Bt wid her RK will also suffer.

It was always the hero dumping..

sudha ne mere ko do award diye pahle wo do fir lena apna

This was one if d most best os i had ever read on rishbala ...seriously di ...how do u do it ? :P
The whole idea was awesome ...n d way u penned it down was evn more better
It was really a pleasure to read it ...n d ending ...oh my ! It was just so sad ...rk was in love wid her ! I feel bad for everone in this story ...rk ...coz he loved madhu...but he still took vengeance from madhu...i feel bad for him...how will he live after hurtinh his love ? :'(
2nd madhu...though i hate her d most for talking like tht 2 mr kundra n being a money freak...i still feel bad for her as she had started loving rk wid heart widout n e selfishness...but i aint saying tht she was innocent or something...she wS at fault but i still feel bad for her as she was pregnant
3rd mr kundra ...i felt genuinely bad for him as he loved maya so much...but acc 2 me he shouldnt have commited suicide ...tht iis just running away...but i can understand tht he was not in tht state of mind to think ovr it...feel bad for him as madhu ditched him in such a bad way ! It would have been really hard for him to face such a situation ...the way u potrayed his emotions were really beautiful...i could actually picture d wholw scene
4th n d last ...d unborn baby...oh my ! I really feel bad for him...it wasnt his fault in this ...n he is gonna face too in dis ...in case madhu decide for n adoption or something ..n if she doesnt still the baby will have to live widout his dad..
But i never thought tht madhu n maya could b d same girl...it was really very shocking ...he is d most innocent one in d story ...n he has to face widout n e mistake of his
Overall it was truly superb di ...hats off !
Sorry for d long comment...couldnt control...lol

Nice OS...can u continue it & give a happy ending!!!

Somehow this os is too good that i m reading it again n again

WOW!! brilliant os...loved it dear...👏

Do you know di which scene I liked the most here? When RK said ITS OVER!! Really he us such a RIGHT KAMEENA.. This scenes reminds me when RK ditched Madhu in show.. It was heart breaking scene.. But I am not happy with the end.. RK should give her a chance.. Yeah I know she did wrong in her past but still Sabko dusra chance milna chahiye.. But I am ok with this as its a story only.. :-) Do write...

oh so heart-breaking. I'm feeling shattered right now..after reading it. 😭 Poor madhu..if she hadn't ditched Ritesh in past she would spend a beautiful happy life with RK...with their baby. 🥺