RiMa OS- When Love Met With Retribution- Part 2- Page 8

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kia karoge jaan kar

@JsparrowJ

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

heyaaa
someone brings the chain..
hahahha someone given happy ending
hhehehe
well didu azzeb see kahani thee pahle socha ye hoga then socha wo hoga then dono ko mix kiya fir kuch nai hua hahahhaha

confuse kar ditta tennu...
nyway awesome

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

loved it sooo mmmuucchhh❤️.

thank u so mmuucchh for this beautiful n happy ending dear👏

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Sis, i have no words to say, really its a masterpiece.

I loved both part 1 and part 2, the way u explained both their feel before and after their meeting, it was brilliant sis.

At first i thought, ansh was Rishbala son, and RK got him from madhu forcefully, and madhu gave him back for feeling guilty, but later i got shocked on reading ansh was adopted son of RK and i was more shocked when you told ansh was rishbala's son. Mayu was so cute, i liked the way she accepted RK with her cute little demands.

Ansh selfie was really nice and the final family click was so cute as ever.

But one thing sis, if u go for happy ending, i wil be like the sad ending was too good and it was heart breaking, but if u give a sad ending i was like, no no rishbala don't deserve this, they are meant to be happy,because ur killer mode is so brilliant that at times i wonder how i start to love sad endings, do write more sis.

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

lovely OS..

thanks for pm dear..

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Thank u so much for this part Di 👏

It was Beautiful 😳

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

The two shots was awesome...though I had a doubt whether it was Madhu who was Maya but I really brushed the thoughts off because in my thoughts Madhu was always like a damsel in distress and can never be a selfish one...

Part two was amazing too..the way both of them mended their hearts was emotional...

keep writing sweetheart...thnks for pm...