RiMa OS- When Love Met With Retribution- Part 2- Page 8

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@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

hayyy!! i'm 1st to comment on this epic story!!🥳
thank u so much for writing another part for this beautiful story!!😛😛

now i'm in another confusion which is - whether i like part 1 more or part 2??😕😕 i think i loved both!!⭐️⭐️

part 1 was unique.👏👏 i loved it for its uniqueness, showing the leads in negative role - yes, now i made my mind... u showed both madhu & RK in gray shade.😲😲 1st half madhu & 2nd half RK.😉😉

part 2 - outstanding!!👏👏 u gave a perfect ending to this amazing story!!👏👏

at start i thought madhu gave birth to the baby & she died leaving her son to RK but nah... then u showed a nerdy madhu & mayu... i thought so madhu gave their son to RK & left to chandigarh with her baby girl (bcos kavya likes baby girls only) but nah... then came the shock - Ansh is adopted son of RK... what?? - there i thought whether madhu had a miscarriage & both adopted one one child for their own... but nah... myra is madhu's blood, okay. then came the dradooon trip (yes, its dradoon for me bcos i'm a baby like mayu) so i thought okay like in kuck kuck hota hai they will reunite in the camp & madhu will accept Rk's adopted son as hers & no doubt Rk will obviously love her baby girl but nah... nothing happened like that. then came madhu & ansh encounter... i thought ansh will like madhu miss & try to mingle his single father with her but nah... but he got scared of madhu & u shocked me yet again... what? ansh is madhu's son huh?? then how it went to RK? there i thought madhu deliberately put him in orphanage so that RK can adopt him some how knowing his adoption plan but nah... she lost her baby boy on the 1st day itself... oh my! that's the terrible punishment for her sins... okay then i thought Rk will meet mayu 1st like madhu but nah... nothing happened like that too... u proved me wrong in all the possible ways... but finally i WON... yes i won won won... i cry out loud that i won... both Rk & madhu UNITED after five years...😛😛
oh my! u brought tears oops salty water in my eyes during their face off!!😭😭

love met with retribution & the retribution killed their love in pieces but by some miracle their love reincarnated after 5 years... lovely lovely lovely...👏👏
yes, both RK & madhu are sinners but punished beyond their sin limits...
& now both are bathed in pure love!!😃😃

okay! now its time foe nation wants to know question LOL😆😆
1. y that nurse stole the baby?? to put in orphanage??😆😆
2. if RK din't look at mirror then how french beard?? i know he might have get that done that in spa saloon but there also he dint see his image in mirrors?? he never saw his eyes in rear view mirror? never entered any trial room with four sided mirror?? if he closely watched his son then he could have seen is face in ansh eyes!! so the question his whether he saw or not truly?😆😆
3. why always girls wear geeky nerdy specs when they get badly affected but not cut their face with knife?😆😆 & why always they choose the profession teaching but glad u dint show her working in any small village like usually happens in films.😆😆

okay! now my likings:
Rk adopting a baby.👏👏
madhu giving birth & making a tremendous changes in her life!! the changes which leads to her betterment!!👏👏
loved the bro-sis quick bonding!!😛😛
i loved both gadget freak ansh & back scaring mayu LOL!! two pies in one pod!! u really portray ur kiddo characters beautifully in ur stories!!😳😳
final selfie - a perfect family selfie!!😉😉
Rishbala forgiving & forgetting awful things happened in the past & starting a fresh blissful life!!😳😳
Rishbala moon light wedding & their kiss with unsaid promises!!😃😃

one word for this story - EXCELLENT⭐️⭐️

one warning - dont u dare call this story a blunder but it's indeed a master piece!!⭐️⭐️

No contest nothing but this story won the 1st place in my heart!!😃😃

sorry for writing yet another essay in ur story!!😆

P.s i read ur reply to my previous comment! i loved it!!😳😳
yes, u gave answer for all my questions through this wonderful part except my million dollar question how madhu came to know her pregnancy in 3 days but u said u even dont know & its a blunder i'm letting it go!!😆😆
i,m so so happy with the way u ended the story!!😛😛
hmm... my kind kavya won over my killer kavya LOL!!😆😆

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

aww diii epic update 😊

wat a emotional reunion just loved it

i cld exactly imagine rk punishing himself for something he did for a right thing

but glad that he forgave her n brought her back to his life

wowww they had twins sooo cuuuteee n adorable

loved ansh n myra

ofcourse anshs n rks bonding was the major point of this update n u really wrote it well

hatss off u diii 😊

u seem to be a ⭐️ writer

keep rocking

godbless

Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome update kavu dear Tfs for pm 👏😳

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awsome update to your OS Di!👏

Just one little thing. 😆 It's more like a three shot than a two shot. 😆 Alas you gave us two updates to your wonderful OS.😳😆

Naw, it was a really heartwrenching update. I thought that Ansh was Madhu's and RK's boy. And I thought she gave him up so RK could raise him. But how did he get stolen and put in an orphanage? It doesn't matter. I am glad your wrote this, but to be honest I liked the first part better.😳😆 And that's only because of their separation. As Sudha will say you are a killer.😆 And I like those parts the best. 😆 Why do you think I consider Rohan a hero. 🤣🤣 Can't wait for the revelation time. Or for the update for the Beats of Love. I have a special song in mind when Sameer reenters and meets RK and Madhu. 😆

I like happy endings just like the next person. But in real life there aren't always happy endings and my preferation is when you are in your killingmode. 😆

Okay, of the topic. 😆 Awesome update. And I know that all those people who send you PMs and asked you to write an happy ending got it now.

But I still like the first part better only because you were in your killingmode.😆

I am a bit disappointed. RK removed his goaty look and at the same time doesn't want his Biwi to be a chashmish.😆 He wants them to be like they used to be. But that means he has to betray her again. So Di write another update where he does this. 🤣

By the way who cried more? RK or Madhu?

I Think Justin Timberlakes song Cry me a river was wrong. He should have called it cry me a lake. 😆 Like the one in the story.

You were my sun
You were my earth
But you didn't know all the ways I loved you, no
So you took a chance
And made other plans
But I bet you didn't think that they would come crashing down, no

You don't have to say, what you did,
I already know, I found out from him
Now there's just no chance, for you and me, there'll never be
And don't it make you sad about it

You told me you loved me
Why did you leave me, all alone
Now you tell me you need me
When you call me, on the phone
Girl I refuse, you must have me confused
With some other guy
Your bridges were burned, and now it's your turn
To cry, cry me a river
Cry me a river-er
Cry me a river
Cry me a river-er, yea yea