Rishabala OS : Hearts Aflame (Rape Story) - Page 7

I have read this 3 to 4 times since you first posted it hoping I can find the words to describe how I feel. Sadly still nothing. Naturally my heart broke for Madhu and I wanted to hang RK but somewhere after that moment in her room when he leaves his address and key and says if you ever decide to kill me, I live alone" My heart broke for him too. I'm not justifying what he did was right not condone his it yet I wept for him throughout the rest of the story. He understood what he did and the gravity of his actions that he was willing to turn himself in but the punishment he gave himself was worst. I don't know, I make no sense but it was a beautiful story and it was written beautifully.

Well Done!
She needed to forget, and she could see that he has changed! very well written Book.Worm!
Don't let the forum waasis effect your creativity!

oh my lazy dear...wonderful story...and i can see, A BOLD ATTEMPT!!!!!!!!...hatts off u dear 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

well i am going to write a long comment.. sorry for that lazy..

but this was sooo heart wrenching and so emotional..

i dont think you didnt depict Madhu's emotions.. her emotions came clearly through RK's mails and by what she behaved with RK before leaving...

after Madhu went away and as I read RK's mails I was crying.. NO.. not almost.. I was actually crying and i had to stop in between... it was not only seeing RK's pain but I could just imagine if he is feeling this way then what would Madhu be feeling...

i was crying all along..

RK's dream was so beautufully written.. it clearly depicted his inner turmoil and how he wanted to be a seperate entity and save Madhu and at least not be a reason for her agony but he couldnt.. and his inner monster had won over him...
And I have to say even without meeting the relationaship that had skowly developed between them of revenge and redemption and it changed to love...
and when Madhu comes to calm him down from his nightmare.. I felt the magnanimous strength that women have... and i fell into tears all the more..

and when Prats comes to meet RK that ws soo emotional...

Madhu was so strong in her decisions.. also she didnt take out her insecurities on their daughter... LOVED HER TO NO ENDS.. not that she was mahaan.. she did take her revenge... but she was the RIGHT KIND OF WOMAN..

and when she said she wants him to make love.. I was crying again as i felt their pain... and the whole love making session I was like that.. RK's insecurities and Madhu's too were so evident and beautifully brought out.. The wayy they consoled each other..

I loved their Story... and didnt I say that your writing could never leave scars to a story...

THANK YOU FOR SUCH WONDERFUL STORY

Hey btw.. what is ONS..? Even i dont know that.. 😆

Dear ONS means ONE NIGHT STANSD!!! LOLZ

Originally posted by: moumita.madhu

Dear ONS means ONE NIGHT STANSD!!! LOLZ

Superb Story lazy 👏👏👏

Very realistic.

I could feel both madhu and RK's pain.

Thanks for this story.😊

awesome OS...
it was painfull...
thanks..