Rishabala OS : Hearts Aflame (Rape Story)

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

this is a BEAUTIFUL STORY! so well written 👏 👏 👏

u know u shud stop getting worried about your writings...nobody here can bash u, we have an army ready 🤣 we love u tooo much 🤗 ❤️

i really loved this story...especially the hurt when it happened between two trusting friends...loved both the POV's

i wish this was longer...i m being greedy i know...but i really wanted the five yrs to go slower...i could have read more that way 😆 😈

can i have an epilogue to this which maybe includes certain memories of those aloof days?

pls pls pls

pretty pls 😭

i want to read more 😆

love u *muah* 😛

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bria

@bria

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

you know at certain point i felt bad 4 him...nice os

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
this is a BEAUTIFUL STORY! so well written 👏 👏 👏

u know u shud stop getting worried about your writings...nobody here can bash u, we have an army ready 🤣 we love u tooo much 🤗 ❤️

i really loved this story...especially the hurt when it happened between two trusting friends...loved both the POV's
i wish this was longer...i m being greedy i know...but i really wanted the five yrs to go slower...i could have read more that way 😆 😈
can i have an epilogue to this which maybe includes certain memories of those aloof days?
pls pls pls
pretty pls 😭
i want to read more 😆

love u *muah* 😛

yea I also want tooo😳

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riyakhanna728

@riyakhanna728

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wonderful OS lazy... Loved it.. 😊

You know what I felt more for a rapist than a victim and thats only because of ur wonderful writing.

U did wonderful job with such a sensitive topic ⭐️

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

beautiful OS..

thanks for pm dear,,

Edited by janu_2006 - 11 years ago

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

omg! it was difficult...n intense...n sensitive subject. when you gave then warning note i almost decided to not read it but then i trusted you...so i decided to go through it.
you are an amazing writer...it was such an emotional heart wrenching story. i cried a lot while reading it.
liked the ending...good that you didn't decide on getting forgiveness for rk...but he got his punishment by suffering all those five years.
it was difficult for madhu to choose him after all what he did to her...but i guess she felt the pain of his suffering n somehow it soothed her own pain.

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

well i am going to write a long comment.. sorry for that lazy..

but this was sooo heart wrenching and so emotional..

i dont think you didnt depict Madhu's emotions.. her emotions came clearly through RK's mails and by what she behaved with RK before leaving...

after Madhu went away and as I read RK's mails I was crying.. NO.. not almost.. I was actually crying and i had to stop in between... it was not only seeing RK's pain but I could just imagine if he is feeling this way then what would Madhu be feeling...

i was crying all along..

RK's dream was so beautufully written.. it clearly depicted his inner turmoil and how he wanted to be a seperate entity and save Madhu and at least not be a reason for her agony but he couldnt.. and his inner monster had won over him...
And I have to say even without meeting the relationaship that had skowly developed between them of revenge and redemption and it changed to love...
and when Madhu comes to calm him down from his nightmare.. I felt the magnanimous strength that women have... and i fell into tears all the more..

and when Prats comes to meet RK that ws soo emotional...

Madhu was so strong in her decisions.. also she didnt take out her insecurities on their daughter... LOVED HER TO NO ENDS.. not that she was mahaan.. she did take her revenge... but she was the RIGHT KIND OF WOMAN..

and when she said she wants him to make love.. I was crying again as i felt their pain... and the whole love making session I was like that.. RK's insecurities and Madhu's too were so evident and beautifully brought out.. The wayy they consoled each other..

I loved their Story... and didnt I say that your writing could never leave scars to a story...

THANK YOU FOR SUCH WONDERFUL STORY

Hey btw.. what is ONS..? Even i dont know that.. 😆

Edited by k.atrina75 - 11 years ago

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

You have pen down brilliantly. Keep it up.🤗

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BIKESH SINGH

@bikeshsngh03

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Amazing emotional os.
Luved ur dp

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

it was very emotional...i dont have proper word to put here...this is really sensitive issue and you dealt with such delicacy too...loved the way you have showed RK's turmoil and how he and Madhu both came in terms with their situation...Brilliant!!!

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