well i am going to write a long comment.. sorry for that lazy..
but this was sooo heart wrenching and so emotional..
i dont think you didnt depict Madhu's emotions.. her emotions came clearly through RK's mails and by what she behaved with RK before leaving...
after Madhu went away and as I read RK's mails I was crying.. NO.. not almost.. I was actually crying and i had to stop in between... it was not only seeing RK's pain but I could just imagine if he is feeling this way then what would Madhu be feeling...
i was crying all along..
RK's dream was so beautufully written.. it clearly depicted his inner turmoil and how he wanted to be a seperate entity and save Madhu and at least not be a reason for her agony but he couldnt.. and his inner monster had won over him...
And I have to say even without meeting the relationaship that had skowly developed between them of revenge and redemption and it changed to love...
and when Madhu comes to calm him down from his nightmare.. I felt the magnanimous strength that women have... and i fell into tears all the more..
and when Prats comes to meet RK that ws soo emotional...
Madhu was so strong in her decisions.. also she didnt take out her insecurities on their daughter... LOVED HER TO NO ENDS.. not that she was mahaan.. she did take her revenge... but she was the RIGHT KIND OF WOMAN..
and when she said she wants him to make love.. I was crying again as i felt their pain... and the whole love making session I was like that.. RK's insecurities and Madhu's too were so evident and beautifully brought out.. The wayy they consoled each other..
I loved their Story... and didnt I say that your writing could never leave scars to a story...
THANK YOU FOR SUCH WONDERFUL STORY
Hey btw.. what is ONS..? Even i dont know that.. 😆
Edited by k.atrina75 - 11 years ago
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