RiMa TS: Pain Of Betrayal... Part 2 on pg 9 (9/7)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 2

haye mera angad💔🤣

anyway you written beautifully my suru jaan

it was awesome story..

really i like it

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow one thing i shud comment on is that even though the story was in RK's pov.. i cud feel Madhu's pain more..

so he had no valid reason other than distance hmmm...
if u ask me, did he deserve another chance then no... but then madhu has been through a lot and he is her happiness so he deserved it for madhu alone.

I loved Anshi and her bond with RK

nice story hun... was feeling so heavy after reading it.. and tht is definitely a complement👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Oh I didnnt c 1st part comming...
i guess u missed me wen u pmed ...

waise acha hua...
'dono part ek saath read kiya...
it wass so emotional..lovly one as usual...
loved d bond Rk nd Anshi shared...
though wat he did was wrong...
bt madhu too desereved to b happy
continue writin more...
i love ur writin..

nd

nd

jab bhi yeh cAke dekhti hu,...feel llk abhi cut karke kha lu..😛

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SuRu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Mohana1417
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Very nice Suru

thanks moho dear!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: kg15
Hawww!!! 😲 You posted the first part and didn't pm me!!! Very bad Suru!!! Everybody read it and I didn't even know about it!!! 😡
Ok... So first part is really good!! You really wrote it amazingly yaa...
Loved the second part!! So heart touching!!! Kudos to your writing dear... Wrote so well!!! 👏

nope yr I didn't pmed to anyone!!!
thanks for 1st prt!! glad u loved second part also dear!!! thank u!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: christobelle
lovely TS suru

thanks christy dear!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Well written. Liked RK's POV.

thanks dear!! glad u liked it!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Lovely TS, Suru

thanks shreya dear!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
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thanks dear!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ferii
Diii fantastic fabulous update I just loved this story 😛
Han after painful chapter now u gave an awesome chapter with an happy ending ah i just loved it diii ⭐️ 😳

thanks raha dear!!! glad u loved it.. :))

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