RiMa TS: Pain Of Betrayal... Part 2 on pg 9 (9/7)

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: uma88
Painful start, i liked the way madhu gave back, though i know there was something behind RK's betrayal, i would never give up for the pain madhu gone through. Ur title suits the story, waiting for next part.

thanks uma dear!! ya it's suits nd define madhu's pain too... Will try to update soon...

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SuRu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

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kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hawww!!! 😲 You posted the first part and didn't pm me!!! Very bad Suru!!! Everybody read it and I didn't even know about it!!! 😡

Ok... So first part is really good!! You really wrote it amazingly yaa...

Loved the second part!! So heart touching!!! Kudos to your writing dear... Wrote so well!!! 👏

Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Well written. Liked RK's POV.

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ferii

@ferii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Diii fantastic fabulous update I just loved this story 😛
Han after painful chapter now u gave an awesome chapter with an happy ending ah i just loved it diii ⭐️ 😳

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Anj01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

nice update
nice story
rk really acted like a jerk...but one needs lot of patience in a long distance relationship n rk gave up to the pressure...but atleast he was guilty of his deeds
good that madhu decided to move on n give him another chance...all well thats ends well