RiMa TS: Pain Of Betrayal... Part 2 on pg 9 (9/7)

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Res..i think i didnt read tjks ts. So will read it & Comment soon.

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SuRu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: anish17
emotional,beautiful and lovely ts suru
happy finally they united

thankss so much dii...

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

VERY EMOTIONAL

AND LOVELY TS

AT LAST THEY ARE TOGETHER

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SuRu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri
VERY EMOTIONAL
AND LOVELY TS

AT LAST THEY ARE TOGETHER

thanksss dear!!! glad u loved it..

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Read both d parts. Loved it dear.

u have penned it nicely.

the thing i liked d most in this story is madhu marrying d other guy (sorry forgot his name lol.. I think anurag not sure..or its some one else name in some other story lol. Forgive me for forgetting lol) & Not betraying like other heroines who just dont care abt others & Immediately bounce on their love saying i dont want to cheat u, i cant love bcos my heart is with rk lol..she knows d pain of betrayal & Married him as he only supported & Brought her out of her pain given by rk.

but what to do, destiny has some other game to play & Again rishbala met & reunited..

for me what rk did was unforgivable mistake but then i m happy that madhu forgave him. If she was so stubborn with her ego then she wouldnt have got d happily ever after life with rk.

i liked d kid a lot. She is so adorable. Poor baby lost her parents but got a new loving parents to fill their void.

i loved d title...i shld that title attracts me first to read & Then only i saw it was ur story.

over all it was one brilliant emotional story written an excellent writer.

keep writing more such stories dear.

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

superb ts...at first I thought anish is rk and madhu's daughter... superb dear... :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

part-| rk cheated on her... But she did a right thing by marrying angad... He supported her... Rk played with her emotion badly... !!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Part-|| they became together cause of circumstance... well, tym heals Although rk suffered but madhu's pain is greater... Rk keeps switching between madhu & ria... Tit fr tat Rk betrayed madhu, ria betrayed him :-))