RiMa TS: Pain Of Betrayal... Part 2 on pg 9 (9/7) - Page 12

AND LOVELY TS

AT LAST THEY ARE TOGETHER

u have penned it nicely.

the thing i liked d most in this story is madhu marrying d other guy (sorry forgot his name lol.. I think anurag not sure..or its some one else name in some other story lol. Forgive me for forgetting lol) & Not betraying like other heroines who just dont care abt others & Immediately bounce on their love saying i dont want to cheat u, i cant love bcos my heart is with rk lol..she knows d pain of betrayal & Married him as he only supported & Brought her out of her pain given by rk.

but what to do, destiny has some other game to play & Again rishbala met & reunited..

for me what rk did was unforgivable mistake but then i m happy that madhu forgave him. If she was so stubborn with her ego then she wouldnt have got d happily ever after life with rk.

i liked d kid a lot. She is so adorable. Poor baby lost her parents but got a new loving parents to fill their void.

i loved d title...i shld that title attracts me first to read & Then only i saw it was ur story.

over all it was one brilliant emotional story written an excellent writer.

keep writing more such stories dear.