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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
wowww...ur amazaing the way u portrau their feelings and the emotional turmoil...
woww such a cute flashback..SO RK is Madhu's hero...waitign to know more about that..

U take up challenges yaar...im waitign to see how Rishabh is gonna make it with his kids and his life
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome update
loved their first meeting
awww my poor rk has really gone through a lot
waiting to know wat actually happened with him
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Brilliant updates Taru Di!Thanks fr pm!Sorry fr late reply!Loved Rishbala flashback!Loved Rishbala last scene!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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superb yaar...i loved the last part of this update
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#55
awesome update
loved their first meeting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
A soldier so badly bruised:(:(
Hope he doesn't suffer anymore...
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painful update...RK has gone through a lot of torture & madhu being his wife also endured a lot...& the kids too suffered...they all deserve peace & happiness...
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You made me cry .. specially with the last part. Excellent update!
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Chapter 4: Needs (Part A)


RK lay in Madhu's lap, enjoying the view of her bosom as she gently stroked her hair.
"What are you staring at?" Madhu asked.
"You are the most beautiful thing God ever created" RK answered, bringing a blush on Madhu's face.
"Liar!" she retorted, playfully pushing him away, only causing him to bend forward and bring his lips closer to hers.
"Yeah, I lied. You are the most delicious thing God ever created" RK said and watched Madhu turn crimson as his smooth husky voice gave her goosebumps all over. He leaned upward and took her lips in hers while his arms embraced her tight. Soon, she was lying down on the grass and RK was on top of her, their lips intertwined.

"Rishu" she moaned in a voice so full of need Rishabh was aroused beyond control. His hand turned mischievous and started wandering all over Madhu's body. Each touch sent currents through Madhu's body, and each time she sighed, RK's own hunger increased in tandem. Their tongues fought for dominance. Madhu was winning, until she felt RK squeeze her left breast and brush his thumb over her hardened nipples. A groan escaped her lips as unfamiliar urges clouded her brain and she gasped for breath. RK was kissing her on her neck now, under her ear and his warm breaths felt like fire on the wet traces he was leaving behind, sending Madhu in a tizzy.

She wanted him, she wanted him so bad.

"I love you" she blurted, without registering the words that escaped her. Suddenly RK broke away, as if shocked out of a trance. He sat up and looked around as if suddenly realizing that they were sitting under a tree on the mountains, accessible to everyone. Shit! What were they going to do in a public place? Thankfully, it didn't seem like anyone had seen them, but only he knew how close he had come to going all the way with Madhu. Madhu, oh God! He suddenly turned back at her, only to find her tearing up already as she sat up adjusting her top. She was so transparent Rishabh could instantly read what was on her mind. She was hurt because she had felt rejected, while in reality Rishabh had been numbed by her confession and it produced such a violent possessive response in his body that instead of words, he wanted to show her by his actions how much he loved her back. Had it not been for the drops of water that fell on his face with the drizzle that had just started, he wouldn't have been able to stop himself!

"Damn Rk! You are so stupid!" he mentally cursed himself even as Madhu stood up, ready to walk.

"Madhu, jaan! Where are you going?"
"What do you care?" She replied angrily as she strapped her stilettos back on.
"If I won't care, who would pumpkin!" RK held her hand and pulled her towards himself as he stood up too.
"I just saw how much you cared for me. I understand, I am just a silly college girl who is crazy about you and you're just flirting with me. It's just for a few days, roam around, fool around, enjoy! What a wonderful opportunity, right! I saw it in your eyes, the way you rejected me..."Madhu blabbered as she struggled to free her hand.

"Look into my eyes. Do you really think I am just toying with you? I love you paagal...I didn't even understand my own feelings until now, but when I heard you say it. it suddenly hit me that there's nothing I want more than to make you mine...forever"
Madhu stopped struggling, captivated by the passion in RK's eyes as he said those words. Her heart was overwhelmed listening to Rishabh's confession. She knew instantly what she saw in his eyes right now was different from the lust she had seen a few minutes earlier, and her heart erupted in joy. Suddenly, with mischief back in her eyes, she jerked her hands away from RK's now-loosened grip and smiled as she retorted "Liar!" She started running down the hill, and RK was soon following her. She had a headstart though as RK slipped back on his shoes, and she was enjoying peeking back every now and then to tease RK who was several steps behind. The rain started falling harder.

"Bam!" Madhu collided with a man on a bicycle as she reached the narrow mountain lanes. Shit, a constable!
"Arey! What happened girl? Why are you running?" he asked, then saw RK running towards them "That man? Is he trying to trouble you?"
"Yes constable sir. Please save me. That man is after me!" Madhu immediately turned her practiced innocent poker face on, even managed a few instant-tears.
"Don't worry. I am here." The constable said, just as RK reached them, who he started yelling at. "Hey you, you're troubling this innocent girl. I am going to put you in jail!"
RK was shocked, but Madhu spoke before he could respond. "Yes, constable sir, please take him to jail. If he stays out, he might rape me." RK's eyes gaped wide at Madhu's accusations, but he caught on to her drama. The last two weeks of knowing Madhu had taught him all about her over-dramatic tendencies.
"Sir, my wife has gone crazy. Don't listen to her. We just had a fight two minutes ago, and she is just trying to take revenge. She loves me very much, right darling?" RK pulled Madhu towards himself, grabbing her by her waist.
The constable gave him a smack on his hand. "Is it true? Is this guy your husband?"
Madhu started to nod in denial, but RK pinched her bottom really hard. She jumped and screamed, but RK covered up by saying "Of course sir. We are newly married, on our honeymoon. See that's my car. We came here together to see the sunset. Sir, I am an Air Force Pilot. Don't you believe me?"
The constable stared at RK's mature face and started to believe him. Which girl would come to this part by herself anyway? It was too far to walk.
"Then why was she crying?"
"Sir, you know wives. I am sure you have one too. God knows what flips them off." Madhu hit RK on hearing that. "There's nothing like that."
"You see sir..." RK continued, rubbing his arm where Madhu had hit. Then he moved his gaze to Madhu, staring into her eyes. "Come on darling, tell him how much you love me. Do you really want me to go to jail?" For a moment, Madhu wanted to deny, but the sparkle in RK's eyes was too irresistible. Besides, she just wanted to tease him, not send him to jail.
"No...sir, sorry...I love him."
"Ah, go away both of you! Kids these days..." The constable nodded his head in frustration, getting back on his bicycle. The rain was getting fiercer and he did not want to get wetter. RK meanwhile had Madhu firmly gripped by her waist. She tried to wriggle out as the constable left, but RK tightened his hold.
"Where are you going, biwi?"
"I am not your wife."
"You will one day be, even if you're not now. Besides, we have something very important to do."
"What?" Madhu asked innocently, turning to him. RK looked at his irresistible beloved drenched from head to toe now, her white kurti clinging onto her body and her hardened nipples now clearly visible. He moved his left hand over Madhu's cheek gently and pushed her hairlock behind her ear. Suddenly, the few inches between them were charged by electrifying tension.
"Well, it's time for me to rape you." he moved his lips close to her ears and said in a husky voice, before lifting her up in his arms.

[[To be continued]]


Edited by teekay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
I was not expecting update today.
I like the way you are writing the past memories in the present story. Nice update. Pl continue soon

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