Rishbala SS- Broken Ties -Pt.9/Pg 58-[18/10]

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Hey everyone!!
Well as promised here is the new story...well it will be a SS not a FF and guess what! You guys will get regular updates for this one (Hehe unlike my other FF).


P.S. it will be weekly updates and this week u will get the prologue and Chapter 1 😊

Prologue

I knocked on the door. I defiantly was nervous...would they forgive me? Would they

accept me back? Now after all these years i know how they would have felt when i left.

Were they this angry at me that they didn't even talk to me since the last 6 years? They

did not even try to contact me after that day i had wanted to fulfill my dream which they

were against. No...i was the one who was wrong, i shouldn't have just left them like that.

Even i didn't try to find out where they were and how. In these 6 years i really did miss

their absence...i missed them in every turn my life took...i always wanted them to

support me but they didn't. I did understand why didn't want me to enter this field...i

have failed them as a daughter and that's maybe why God had punished me like that...


I was jerked out of my thoughts as the door flung open and immediately i put on a smile.

A Fake one. A women opened the door who looked around the age of my mother, who

froze as she looked up. Judging the expression, it defiantly was a shocked one. I didn't

know what to say...did she know who i am? Well of course she would but i mean why i

have come here. When i went back to my parents house i had found it looked...it was

our old neighbor who informed me that they went back to my dads parents house,

meaning my grandparents. They had run away to get married and never returned back

nor did they speak of them much, so this was my first time coming here at Malik

Residence.


Coming out of my thoughts i greeted the woman with a polite, "ermm...Hi" i said waving

my hand.

"Ma..Ma..Madhu..bala?" that's all she could say. Really is it this shocking for me to be

here?I nodded.

"You..you..here?" gosh she still was stuttering.

"Do Padmini and Shamsher Malik live here?" i said ignoring her question.

She looked at me in amazement and then finally said, "You know them?" OK so one

thing was confirmed she did not know how i was related to them.

"Yes, are they here? I really need to meet them.." i replied. I really did need to apologize

to them.

"Yes, please come inside, i'll call Padmini but Bhai is not at home."she said as she lead

me inside. So she was my dads sister, my aunt. Before she could lead me to the sitting area

i heard a load scream. I sounded like one of those fan-girl screams so i turned around to find a girl who had covered her mouth with her hands

to keep the screams in. Her eyes were wide in disbelieve. I chuckled seeing her, she

seemed to be a few years younger than my age and also had brown long hair just like

me. Well and what does she do next? Comes running up to me nervously poked me!

Who does that? Then pinching herself she let out an "Oww" and started rubbing her arm

where she had pinched herself, hard i guess. Really was she trying to convince herself that

i really was there in front of her.

"Are you really Madhubala?" she said in excitement.

"Really is it this hard to believe that i am Madhubala?" i said a bit irritated.

"No...it's just...you in our house?"

"So?" i said raising my eyebrows

"Well you are Madhubala...the Superstar!"

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KazBrekker thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue - Above
Part 1 - Page 7
Part 2 - Page 13
Part 3 - Page 18
Part 4 - Page 23
Part 5 - Page 29
Part 6 - Page 35
Part 7 - Page 40
Part 8 - Page 45
Part 9 - Page 58
Edited by Mentally-Insane - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely😃Is it a lovestory n is RK also a superstar in this ff😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start lubu...
Madhubala... Superstar!!! Interesting...!! I think RK is not of her category... A Superstar!!!
Continue soon dear... But you didn't. Mentioned anything about RK so it is little difficult to suggest a title as for now... Post the chapter 1 so that I can think of it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start, but you haven't mention anout RK, so after reading chapter 1,wecan give our suggestions for title
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
do continue & pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic! Please continue soon and pm me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start dear and pm me please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
So madhu is superstar but wat is rk then is he normal man or in some other profession
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm hoping this not AK and JM love story.

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