Rishbala SS- Broken Ties -Pt.9/Pg 58-[18/10]

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Well with jus the prologue not able to suggest you title name..

but loved the prologue..waiting for next

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

superb start madhu is superstar but what rk is i think he is her aunt son please pm me when ever you update

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SVK1234
I'm hoping this not AK and JM love story.

saha no yaar 😆 she mentioned it na it is rishbala ss😳

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

fantastic start. I was wondering, is it RK, is it Madhu???

Very curious about her parent's reaction.

Title suggestions if u want and if it fits with your story idea:

- home sweet home

- welcome home

- home is where the heart is

- running away

Maybe I need another chapter to come up with more suggestions ... 😃

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

will suggest title after reading the first chapter

Edited by .Shree. - 11 years ago

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RAONE8

@RAONE8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

😊 nice start 😛 please continue

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Saha Vikram Khanna

@SahaVikamKhanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: rekha.366
saha no yaar 😆 she mentioned it na it is rishbala ss😳

then I can breathe😆

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Bun

@KazBrekker

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
Nice

Originally posted by: luvvivian286
nice

Originally posted by: karamjeet
Superbbb start...loved it...

Originally posted by: rima4ever
nice start please continue

Thank you guys and yes of course i will continue..😊

Edited by lubzzxxx - 11 years ago

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Bun

@KazBrekker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL
lovely😃Is it a lovestory n is RK also a superstar in this ff😊

Have to say...'Gosh ur Good!!!'

well as it is no big secret...yes RK is also a superstar in this SS and of course it is a love story but with some mystery..hehe

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Bun

@KazBrekker

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: kg15
Nice start lubu...
Madhubala... Superstar!!! Interesting...!! I think RK is not of her category... A Superstar!!!
Continue soon dear... But you didn't. Mentioned anything about RK so it is little difficult to suggest a title as for now... Post the chapter 1 so that I can think of it..

Lol i kinda noticed that after everyone mentioned that...hehe should have been a bit more clear about the story so that u could suggest some title's and then thinking about it i think RK's entry really doesn't happen till like chapter 2 or 3..

Glad u liked the story so far and hope u will also keep reading it..will look forward to ur replies😛