Rishbala SS- Broken Ties -Pt.9/Pg 58-[18/10] - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha1989

nice update dear but its short.
hope next will be longer


sorry dear...but they all are already written up...so can't really do anything...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks...😊

P.S. Love ur username!!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Awesome update...want to see Trish n Bittuji's reaction on knowing how these two have met again 😉.

Continue soon 😃


u will..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

what happened to bittuji?

so trish was madhu's PA...when i read first para,i thought she is rk's sister
anyway waiting for the past to know...when will u tell us about it?


well trish is actually like his sister but is Madhu's P.A. and friend
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Hello people!!!!!!!!!!!

Howz everyone?

Guys let me clear one thing...since the past few updates i am getting comments of making my updates longer...It's not like i don't want to...but people they r already written up so really i can't do anything to be honest except maybe ad a sentence or two...but am really glad that u people r telling me what u want, which i hope will keep coming...if anyone has suggestions they r more than welcome as i am happy to make changes if i really like the idea and think it would be better to have that instead of the original...

Anyway enjoy people...

P.S. I replied to all...check them out..

Part 8

"You already have.." she said with tears escaping their way through her eyes.

She ran away...she needed to be alone...needed to bring out the pain which

was buried inside her.


Unknowingly she managed to bring herself to the study where a piano was

placed in the middle. She walked over to it and stroke her fingers over it. She

hadn't played the piano for years now...she used to learn in from her mother

and also at school where she learned how to play multiple of different songs.

Settling herself on the chair she started experimenting with the notes trying to

get a hang of it.


"Padmini Aunt? What are you doing here? You were supposed to come

tomorrow right?" Karan said shocked as he saw her entering the mansion.

"Maa you too are here?" Questioned Payal as she saw Roma entering behind

her.

"You see, the whole time Padmini was worried for Madhu and also thinking

how she just had arrived and doesn't really know you guys yet...and so on...so

we two came back today itself.."

"Oh Aunt...you na worry too much..Madhu is having a great time here.." said

Karan

"Yes and if you were this worried you could have just called..." said Payal

"See even she is saying the same.." said Roma facing Padmini

"I just want to see her...where is she?"

"Ermm..she went to see RK or Deepali.." replied Karan..

"Okay lets go there then.."


Finally getting the hang of the tunes agin she started playing the Melody to

bring out the feelings burning inside her and started singing her heart out..


(Impossible - Shontelle)

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did, I did


She sang closing her eyes trying to fight those tears. Fighting those old

memories...spent with him.



And you were strong and I was not
My illusion, my mistake
I was careless, I forgot
I did

And now when all is done
There is nothing to say
You have gone and so effortlessly
You have won
You can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the sky line
All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible


With every verse her voice started to raise as if bringing out all those tears,

all those shouts she wanted to give him, show him. Her eyes refused to open

as they were lost in the deep memories which those eyes had recorded.


Falling out of love is hard
Falling for betrayal is worse
Broken trust and broken hearts
I know, I know

Thinking all you need is there
Building faith on love and words
Empty promises will wear
I know, I know

And now when all is gone
There is nothing to say
And if you're done with embarrassing me
On your own you can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the sky line
All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible!
Ooh impossible


She sang as if her life depended on it. Her mind continually was telling her to

open her eyes and fight the memories, but her heart was refusing...wanting to

let out the burden which was on it.


I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the sky line
All we had is gone now

Tell them I was happy
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did...


Her voice finally started to slow and calm down as a tear rolled down her cheek.

She couldn't hold herself together anymore..she dropped her face down in her

palms and cried. Cried her heart out which she hadn't done in these two years.

She did cry now and then...but never like this. Wanting to get rid of all the pain

which was hidden inside her, to make herself free, start a new beginning by

getting rid of old memories.


Finally pulling herself together she looked up with her blood shot red puffy eyes

to find everyone standing there with tears. She was shocked, never would she

want them to find out, especially Maa...who...who had tears rolling down her

face by seeing her child in so much pain which was suppressed within her.

She remembered how Madhu always used to sing when she was happy in her

teens, they had protected her from any kind of pain that there was never such

need for her to sing out her pain, but today she did that too. Madhu looked

away from that questioning face her mother was giving her, she was breaking

from inside once again by just remembering the answers to those questions,

Rishabh!

Looking around she saw others who had either pain or tears on their faces but

the one face which she caught was the one of her lovers. He looked at her

painfully with wet eyes; he felt too guilty at that moment and walked out well

rather rushed out as he could no longer look at her hurt face.


Madhu was broken...she didn't want to answer the questions her mother would

ask her in a minute so also rushed out.


RK was walking towards the main door...he needed some fresh air and that

was for sure. He had to win back Madhu but the hurt he had given her had

broken her from inside. Suddenly he bumped into someone as he wiped his

eyes..

"Sorry" he said without looking at her and bent down to pick up her phone

which fell.

"Thank...TUM!!" she screamed. Everyone heard her, Madhu too. All came

running into the hall to find out what was going on.

"Trishna?" he smiled.

"Why are you here? And what do you want?" she said looking at him disgusted.

"Trishna listen.."

"No you listen Mr.RK! Why can't you just leave her alone! You have done enough

damage so what do you want now?" she shot back. Madhu ran towards her

trying to stop her. She feared that Trishna would spill the beans as no one

knew about her and Rishabh and Trishna was not aware of that.

"Trishna listen..." she said holding her shoulder

"Sorry Madhu, but this guy needs a piece of my mind! That day i didn't get a

chance but today i have and i will use it!"

"Trish listen.." RK tried.

"Just Shut up Mr.Kundra!! You have no right trying to explain yourself!! What

you did can never be explained you get that!!" she shouted in rage.

"And I am really sorry for all that...believe me...your my sister right? Won't you

forgive me?" he asked with wet eyes. He couldn't bare all this hatred from the

two most important ladies in life..

"Sister my Foot!! You lost that relation the day you lost Madhu!! What didn't

she do for you and you? Gave her so much pain that she still can't come out of

it?My brother would have never said all those things to her! Whatever happe-"

"TRISHNA!!" shouted Madhu. She needed Trishna to shut up before she would

spill all the beans, She had done enough damage and on top was discussing

about her personal life that too in front of her! She had given no one the right to

do that!

"Whatever Happened that day was between ME and RISHABH only!!! And i

think it also should stay that way...You have no right to ask him about US when

even I have not questioned about it to him!" She spit out. One thing which she

always had a problem with was her anger. She could never control it for long

therefore she even left her parents house. Only one person had managed to

always calm her anger. RK.

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Edited by lubzzxxx - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
YAY...I am the second one to read the update and I think the first one to comment. But, back to the update, it was amzing...Can't wait for the next one. PLZZZ, update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Curious to know what happened between them. Please send pm about next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update trishna on fire waiting to know rishbala past
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update...hmm so finally Trishna is here and even the whole family learnt about Madhu's heart break !! Lets see if RK can calm Madhu down this time too 😉

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