Rishabala FS : Tum Mere Ho Part 04 on Page 25 (13/01) - Page 5

Such a cuuute story lazy, i love this possessive gunda RK, actually at first perfect wsa my fav in your writing, then breast came, then his kiss was my fave, and then just married and now its tum mere ho, wanted to see the next part as early as possibe, pls pls pls continue ti soon lazy

Oh god I am simply in love with the story and this gunda RK...man he is sooo good...I loved the way he showed his luv for Madhu...his possessiveness, his attitude, his gundagiri everything is compelling me to say "Hayeee Maardaala..."

Awesome update...😃😛
I liked dis rugged and different RK...😛😉😊

Simply fab update
Gunda rk..loving it
Continue soon

hi, just wanna say u r an amazing writer dear. Superb update. Well from begining i loved d concept of arrange marriages but ur stories makes my belief strong . A big wala hug n love u

nice concept and part 1...loved character sketch...tapori yet romantic rk n a shy madhu...rk stalking her w/o hurting her and arousing a feeling of protectiveness in her mind...thanks to dips..she always brings rishbala closer...omg,rk marrying madhu forcefully...eager to read next developments...

lazy how the hell u always come up with such wonderful stories😊...loved it so so much...does RK knows about balraj thing...???😕 jst loved this obessed lover boy so much...❤️

firstly sorry for commenting so late..i hv this project n it is taking all my time.. i dint even get to celebrate d new year😭 😭.. m reading all ur updates whenever i get even teensy weensy bit of free time..i log in only to read these updates so that i can feel fresh n rejuvinated😊

coming to this one..it is superb i loved it..i liked it when she said that she feels safe vd him!!!
but he is too much how cn he force her into marriage..his ishq has junoon a true grey character but then m a sucker for grey n dark characters..so this one is one of my fav.really looking forward to see what happens now!!!

nice start, liked the concept