Rishabala FS : Tum Mere Ho Part 04 on Page 25 (13/01)

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

OMG!!! I'm in love with this RK. I always love to see RK's Junoon for Madhu.

Thank You so much for this story. Please don't make us wait for long.

Btw, I like Milind's pic. I was also visualising Michi in this OS.

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I just love this possessive RK

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sneha

@sneha_17

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hope RK is Savior not villian 😕

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow yr, wht a update. M eagrly waiting fr next part of d story. Plz update soon. Thax fr pm.

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riyakhanna728

@riyakhanna728

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

what a start ... superb

Tapori, possessive RK. Diff concept.

BTW loved the title .. I m sure u r going to justify it.

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesome Start..!!! Liked the start...Love the tapori RK and sahmi Madhu...Waitng for next n Thanks for the P<M!

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priyachand

@priyachand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

loved it lazy! wonderful start!

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Superb start Lazy!i loved the concept!& Specially this Gunda RK!Bole toh Ek Number Manas!& this innocent Madhubala!Dips as always is a Vamp for me!pls continue soon!

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

WOW! That's one hell of a start to the story. We have a lot of information and I suspect many more twists and turning coming with that ending. A surprise wedding. 😊

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

What do I write this time??? You are a very talented writer. I have said that. Your stories are fantastic. I have said that. Your characters are detailed and interesting. Said it. The dialogues are - wait said that too.

You are are making this very difficult Lazy!

"Tum Mere Ho" was not what I was expecting but it has started out brilliantly!

At first I figured ok, it's going to be like abc and then you throw in these lines that make me stop and say, what?? For example, Rk takes Madhu's money but then gives it back to her. Ok, not bad.

But when Padmini asks Madhu if RK has ever touched her, Madhu comes to a realization followed then by yet an even bigger realization: RK will never hurt her. That kid of trust - under the circumstances - is huge!

So the straight forward story is not so after all. Despite what we (think) have seen RK do for money, when he goes to get Madhu and Padmini is holding him, you clearly describe that RK gently removes Padmini's hand.

There is more to this RK then meets the eye.

I really am loving this one! (Wait I have said that before too!) 😉

Edited by 4ever4love - 11 years ago