Saving all my love for you:Rishbala TS : Final part :Page 17

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brilliant. Thank you for providing both of their view points. It was heart breaking but superbly written!!

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awesome , u really describe every scens in perfect way , whether it was rk inner termoil , almost every emotion , thanks for pm n continue soon

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Originally posted by: 4ever4love
brilliant. Thank you for providing both of their view points. It was heart breaking but superbly written!!

Aww thanks a lot 😳 glad you liked it 😊

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Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya
awesome , u really describe every scens in perfect way , whether it was rk inner termoil , almost every emotion , thanks for pm n continue soon

Thanks a lot Shailesh 😳

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Hey peeps,

I'm really sorry! the final part of this TS has been pending for a long time. I've been busy with my studies as a medical student & I hardly get time to write. So today I found some free time & wrote up the final part. 😳Here it is. Please do read & share your views. 😳 Thanks in advance.

SAVING ALL MY LOVE FOR YOU

Final part

It was her standing in front of him. He couldn't believe his eyes. He rubbed off his eyes with a confusion. ''Is this really her?'' He could see her hazel brown eyes shining with happiness. The tears made the eyes more shining. It was really her! RK had to believe. He had to believe that these eyes were the ones he had been missing for 4 years. They were belonged to his Madhu. They've been filled with painful tears for the past 4 years. Today, they are shining with happiness. He noticed the difference. He could see the unconditional love towards him, filled in her eyes.

The two love birds were lost in each other. Madhu could feel the happiness in her heart. Finally after her never ending determination & efforts, she could find him. She could stand in front of him after 4 years. She was over the moon. Her happiness was overflowing, which was converted in to happy tears. Madhu walked forward. RK to headed a few steps ahead. Without uttering a single word, she hugged him tightly.

She could feel the scent of him again,which she had been missing for 4 years. She hugged him more tightly burring her head on his chest. Tears were flowing continuously, wetting his shirt. The destiny has given them another chance for them. She is here for him. RK couldn't deny the fact that he was craving for her love for the past 4 years. He was living with her memories.

Madhu broke the hug. She kept staring at him. RK didn't knew how to react. He was numb. ''RK.. finally she could utter his name breaking the silence. ''RK.. how .. how dare you..'' ''leave me?" RK who had been silent for a long, completed the sentence. Madhu could hear his voice after a long time. He was smiling at her. Madhu too smiled, yet had a doubt if he had forgiven her. ''RK...? ''Hmm.. Biwi, 4 years have passed but you still haven't changed your hobby!'' ''Hobby?'' Madhu was confused. ''The name glycerine perfectly suites you!''He winked.

Madhu understood what he meant. ''But how come he..?'' Madhu was confused with his behavior. What she expected was his arrogant nature, specially after a separation of 4 years. ''Madhu, I know what you are thinking.'' ''I know you are wondering why I'm not cold towards you.'' ''RK.. I'm sorry, I..'' ''Shh!'' he placed his finger on her mouth. ''You don't need to apologize.'' ''I know, we both were wrong. We both couldn't change our attitudes towards each other.'' ''It was the main reason for our separation.'' ''But the time has changed & destiny made us to meet again.'' '' We can't change the past. It was just added to the history.'' ''But RK..? She was surprised to see RK's new difference. He had developed to a soft spoken, down to earth person from a ruthless superstar.

''Madhu.." RK held her hand tightly. " Madhu, I learned a lot about life while I was here. Glamor & fame are just temporary things. We've been blindfolded by them. In the past, I couldn't bear your popularity. It was all because I was afraid of loosing you. I couldn't see you with another co-star. But it was covered with my ruthless attitude, that's why I was cold towards you. I was afraid if my career flops, how would I make our lives better.''

''But RK, why did you leave me? Do you have any kinda idea how much I was missing you?'' ''I searched almost everywhere possible you would go.'' ''I've been fooled & trapped by people.'' ''They were faking about your whereabouts.'' ''I didn't give up! I had a hope.'' ''I knew one day I'll find you.'' ''And today, my prayers and wishes were answered.''

''Madhu, same goes with me. I've been missing you a lot! you don't know how I was going through such a heartache for the past few years. Anyway, let's forget all of them.'' ''Madhu.. he caressed her face. She felt the warmth in his hands. ''Madhu.. I'm ready to start a new life with you.'' ''Yes RK me too.'' ''I want to forget the dark past & to start a new journey.'' ''And promise me, you'll be with me forever throughout this journey.'' ''I promise you Madhu. I'm with you. I'll be with you forever.'' ''No matter what ever hits our lives. We should stand as a strong couple.''

RK placed a soft kiss on her forehead. She hugged him again. RK hugged her back tightly, wrapping her with his protective arms.

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I never thought that I could be in his arms again. I don't know how I spent those 4 years without him. I always believed in miracles. I'm so glad that I could witness a miracle 6 years ago. I found him. I found my life again after my never ending efforts. We celebrated our 10th marriage anniversary yesterday. It had been almost a decade to our marital relationship. But the past 6 years were the most beautiful years in my life so far. Our lives has changed a lot, but our love grew more & more with each day passing by. I'm really blessed to have him in my life. ''I love you RK! I love you so much!'' I don't know how many times I've been saying this. I'll keep continuing further too. Cause I love him more than my life.

Madhu closed her diary after penning down in a fresh page. Her diary was close to her just like RK. Her diary knew her life story so far. It holds a special place in her life.

She was still on her night wear. She looked at RK who was in a deep sleep after an exhausted night. She went towards the mirror. She looked at herself. She was going through her 3rd decade in her life, yet looked more younger & beautiful. She spotted the patch of love placed on her clavicle by RK last night. She blushed, recalling the romantic night she spent with her better half, making love.

Suddenly she felt two hands going around her waist. It was RK, back hugged her. ''Good Morning Mrs. Madhubala Rishabh Kundra!'' ''Good Morning Patidev.'' She smiled. ''Hmm so Biwi, what are you up to?'' ''Um.. nothing, I was just..'' Madhu gulped the words. ''Oh I know why'' RK winked. ''Cause you..'' he kept smiling. ''Cause you.. he stopped midway again. ''What's wrong with you RK? Stop behaving like a retard! Let me go!'' ''You know the reason more than me Biwi!'' he winked again. Madhu blushed until her soft cheeks turned red like tomatoes. ''Shut up RK!''

She noticed that it was 8 am in the morning. ''Oh no!'' ''It's almost late! late for school! ''Haha Biwi, why are you so stressed out?'' ''See there is is plenty of time!'' ''School starts at 9 o'clock & my little champ has almost one hour left to get ready & go.'' ''Hump! but do you think your lazy little boy will get up on time & get ready like other children do?'' ''What to do? he is your carbon copy nah!'' ''Following your 'good habits on waking up so early!' Madhu spoke sarcastically.

Rahul was RK & Madhu's 5 year old son. Their symbol of love. He was a complete replica of his dad. His appearance & behavior was just like RK. He was a mischievous little boy who was getting pampered by everyone. He was really lucky to be born as RK's son as he got all the comforts as a child of a superstar.

Madhu rushed in to Rahul's room. ''Uh.. she was about to loose her balance. Finally she could hold his toy rack. ''Stupid cars!'' She kicked the toy car which she stepped while ago. The room looked messy as it had been hit by a tornado last night. Toy cars, Lego blocks & Crayons were scattered everywhere. ''Urgh! Rahul! this little rascal is not gonna learn how to keep his own room tidy.'' "Hump! daddy's son nah!'' Madhu cribbed.

Little Rahul was sleeping, hugging his favorite teddy bear which was gifted by his parents on his last birthday. ''Rahul..! Rahul.. wake up darling.'' '' You are getting late to school.'' No response. He kept sleeping peacefully. ''Rahul!'' Madhu raised her voice. ''Get up you sleepy head.'' ''Mommy has lots of work to do.'' ''Come on, get up!'' ''It's almost 8 o'clock!'

Little Rahul was awake but he pretended that he was sleeping. ''Madhu, why are you shouting at my little champ?'' ''RK you have spoiled him!'' ''Look! your lazy son is still sleeping!'' ''Uh! let me correct myself! I know, he is pretending!'' ''Rahul! Madhu raised her voice again. The poor soul opened his eyes slowly. His parents were sitting beside him. He knew his dad was the only savior. ''Daddy, I'm sleepy.'' He yawned. ''Please tell Mommy to give me another 5 minutes?'' ''Aww my little boy.'' RK caressed his little son's hair. ''5 minutes? I know you can sleep up to 5 hours! or even more than that!'' Madhu said in a angry tone. ''RK, you better get him ready in another 10 minutes, or else..'' Madhu spoke in a threatened tone. ''Or else what?'' Both father & son inquired at the same time. '' Both of you won't get a single piece of the pudding I'm gonna make in the evening!'' ''Mommy that's unfair.!'' Rahul made a face. But his mom has left the room already.

Finally RK could dress up his little boy. Rahul fussed to go to school, all he wanted was to sleep it noon & play all day long. ''Daddy! I hate school!'' Rahul spoke out while RK was tying his shoes.'' Why? It's a nice place nah, you can learn about so many new stuff & also you got lots of friends there to play.'' ''No! I just don't wanna read & write! it's so boring!'' he made a face. RK took his son on his lap. ''Rahul, you want to be like daddy right?'' ''Yeah.'' Rahul always followed his father. RK was his role model.

''Then you gotta go to school study hard.'' '' Really? But daddy..'' ''Yeah, why not?'' ''But daddy, teachers say we can be a doctor, an engineer or a lawyer if we study well & do good in exams but none of them taught us that we can be a superstar!'' ''Oh! is that the problem my little man?'' RK smiled. ''No you can!'' ''You gotta study hard before doing anything. Even to be a good actor.'' ''Really?'' little Rahul was amazed. ''Yeah you have to. Now give me a hi five!'' Rahul placed his tiny hand on his dad's. ''Yay! high five!'' ''Ok daddy! I'm gonna do well at school & I'll be superstar like you!'' he smiled brightly. ''That's my boy!'' RK caressed his hair.

''Mommy! I'm ready! Rahul ran towards his mom who was cleaning up their bedroom. Rose petals were scattered everywhere in the bed & the floor. The floor looked messed up with the wax of scented red candles which were giving light throughout their romantic night.

''Rahul.. good boy!' She kissed & hugged him. ''Where's my kiss?'' RK came along. Madhu glared at him angrily. ''No kisses for daddy!'' She spoke out. ''Oh hello! that's unfair ok?''

Rahul noticed the rose petals. ''Mommy, what are these?'' ''Uh.. Rahul!'' Madhu tried to stop her naughty boy from getting on to their bed. ''Flower petals? Little Rahul was confused. Madhu glared at RK. She was embarrassed in front of their child. RK kept smiling. ''Mommy, why are they all over the bed? You always scold me that my room is so messy! but look at yours!'' He giggled. RK joined the giggle. Madhu made a face.

''Ok ok, now get down.'' RK picked up little Rahul who was bouncing on the bed. ''You are getting late. We gotta go soon.'' At the same time.RK's mom Radha entered the room. ''Daadi! Good morning!'' Rahul jumped from his daddy's arms. ''Good morning beta, I was waiting for you for breakfast.'' ''Daadi maa look! Which room is more messy? Mommy & daddy's room or mine?'' Radha smiled, noticing the embarrassment in RK & Madhu's faces.

''Um.. Rahul beta, come on let's go downstairs. I've made something special for your breakfast.'' ''Really? Rahul smiled with excitement.

Madhu looked away. ''Biwi, why are you behaving like this? What did I do?'' ''Hump! RK! you don't care about anything! Look! Rahul was questioning & you! you didn't even support in a word for me! ''Oh Biwi! it's quite natural. Kids are always curious about stuff.'' ''RK, I don't know how to handle him anymore. He is getting naughtier day by day!''

''Well, I have a solution!'' RK winked. ''A solution?'' ''Yeah!'' RK's hands went around Madhu's waist. ''RK stop it! You know our little devil can storm in to our room at anytime.'' ''I don't wanna get embarrassed in front of him again!'' ''Relax Biwi, he is enjoying his breakfast downstairs.'' ''Hump! ok, now tell what's your solution & let me go! I have lots of work to do.''

''Biwi, RK tightened his grip. ''Don't you think that we should bring another companion for our champ?'' ''Another companion? you mean another baby?'' Madhu widened her eyes. ''Yeah! sure it will help him to change his behavior. I'm sure he'll be a protective big brother.'' ''A baby girl will be fine. A junior jungli billi just like you.'' Madhu smiled. She always wanted a cute little daughter to team up like RK & Rahul so she can have another one by her side to support her.

''Biwi, what do you think? This is the right time to bring a little baby sister for our Rahul.'' ''Will you make me a daddy again?'' ''Hmm... that's quite possible what happened last night!.'' Madhu spoke slowly hiding her blushing face. ''What? I didn't get you?'' ''Cause, RK... Madhu was stammering. ''Yeah?'' ''Cause we forgot the protection last night!'' Madhu whispered slowly & ran away fast hiding her red blushed face. ''Aahan, not bad Biwi!'' RK chased her weaving dreams about a little baby girl to complete their cute little family.

~THE END~

Edited by VinuRox - 11 years ago