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DVDfann

@DVDfann

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

soo sweet. Such a Fabulous update 👏

The last line made me cry awww😳

waiting for your next part. Please keep up the long update. Keep going😛

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

super👏i think i already told u...i'm in love with this story😊...
the way this story evolves is fabulous👏
i feel rudra is introverted...and always sacrifaces for rishaan?is it like that?or my delusion?😕
so rishan has made a tatto of rk to prove he is the real rk?😡
i think bittuji was at shock by seeing his bhabiji in newspaper😆
i'm glad that rudra met with accident...bcoz by that madhu had a chance to save her real rk😉
i loved it when rudra was gonna say "biwi"😊

Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Phew !! Read all the updates in one go..no way one can stop in between hehe !! Trust me I had this urge to read about the next and the next and the next chapters lol !! If it were a book, trust me I wouldn't have kept it down until I finished it in one go 😳 !!

What an amazing storyline and well complemented with such picturesque update :-) !! One can't help but stop and wonder about the author of such marvelous piece of writing 😃 !!

I so wanted to write synopses for each update, but then I realised I might not be able to do the justice that it deserve !! Hence I felt to go ahead as it is hoping it will serves the purpose hehe !!

Hmm where should I begin, initially though got intrigued by Rudra, could not help but got swayed in rishaan-maya duo !! Rudra looked mysterious and rishaan an open book lol !! So brain took the easiest way hehe... Rishaan, made me feel that he is a person living a superficial life...which even he is not even proud of, his single minded seek for maya and his blue eyes had my heart race thinking its the reincarnation of Sultan..but I am discarding this thought thinking, sultan was dead when the sitara studio ruined in fire along with superstar RK and Madhu !!

So do clarify, is even rishaan a reincarnated soul ? Why did he react the way he reacted when, his hired goons tried touching and assaulting Madhu on that night..why did he see red? What did possess him to spit fire and had that urge to save Madhu ?? Infact that one thing had convinced me that he is RK lol !!

Yup his nightmare and his anguish forces me to believe that all his life he wanted to live the life of great superstar "RK" !! This is my takeaway about Rishaan btw..which can be totally off the hook lol !!

Coming to maya, she comes across as one sad soul to me !! Her nightmares are a different tale altogether.. Strangely all of it has only made her strong !! Her constant fight with life does hint there is much more than what meets the eye !! Trust me, am all game for it lol !!

Ah finally the eye candy hehe...Rudra , the true reincarnation of superstar RK !! I loved his confusion, apprehension,pain, anguish with that pinch of hope in every replay of that unfateful night of burnt love and life !!

Finally I loved the last chapter..the turmoil, the uncertainty, the anguish, the urge, finally the temporary moment of bliss when Rudra-Maya relived that final moment of RK-Madhu !!

Now am literally dying to read the next one...the wait is simply killing me ... Hmm no wonder I can associate so well with Rudra's restlessness lol !! Do continue soon okay 😃

ps: please do pm me from the next update onwards :-)

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Awesome update maria 😳

i loved the way u started off with the feelings of all three right after the party night👏

the painting! totally RK 👍🏼...i remember how he sculpted madhu after just looking at her once 👏

loved rishaan's parlour scene...like how he was desperate to call and book the studio ignoring the tattoo 👍🏼 😉

bittuji is happy! i know y he allowed rishaan 😎...because he recognized madhubala in maya 😊 😉

the brothers' dialogues were splendid👏

rishaan said "u should have stopped caring for me long back" 😒 😭

rudra got upset and went for a drive 👍🏼

i love how u made rudra and maya meet !!! 👏 well choreographed 👏 👏

i love how maya once again recognized rudra 😳 👏

umm m not sure if i like the last line though 🤔

update soon 😳 😳

luv u 🤗

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

I haven't yet read the updates but I read a couple comments and went back to the lastest chapter to read the last part and OMG. I'M IN LOVE.

OMG.

I can't handle how amazing your writing is! Ah! So good!

His flashback and almost calling her Biwi...I need to catch up on this!

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Neela

@Neel_M

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Lovely updates Maria.

Not really sure why Rishaan was so angry!! And the reaction of Rudra by seeing the RK tattoo!!

I loved Bittujis reaction after seeing the article and the picture.

Recognizing Biwi could take some more time in my opinion. Rudra could have done some soul searching after few more interaction with Maya. But hey still liking it.

Keep up the good works you two bugs 😊

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Hiddlestoned
I haven't yet read the updates but I read a couple comments and went back to the lastest chapter to read the last part and OMG. I'M IN LOVE.
OMG.

I can't handle how amazing your writing is! Ah! So good!

His flashback and almost calling her Biwi...I need to catch up on this!

LOL! Pritt!! Why did you read the last part!

Didn't it get spoiled for you? You read only first two updates right?😲😆

And here I am trying so hard to create mystery.. 🤔 😆

Anyways, thank you! 😳🤗

Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

LOL! Pritt!! Why did you read the last part!

Didn't it get spoiled for you? You read only first two updates right?😲😆
And here I am trying so hard to create mystery.. 🤔 😆
Anyways, thank you! 😳🤗

😆!! You should feel special! For any book that I like, I go to the last chapter, sometimes the last page and just read it.

I'm impatient like that. 🤔

And I love spoiling things for myself! :D