SS - Liberation updated Ch 4&5 on 29th Nov

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: bikeshsngh03
Nice update..👏
It felt like they have a split personality.😛
There is feeling of pain and darkness in night and in morning felt like They are a sweet couple in love.
Is RK a doctor of animals?😛

No it is not split personality.. but kind of like a condition response.. you will understand it more in the following updates..

Yes rishab is a vet!!

Quote

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: punam2712
THIS CONFUSED ME
ARE THEY MARRIED OR JUST LIVING TOGETHER
BOTH HAVE A SPLIT PERSONALITY OR WHAT

No.. no split personality.. bare with me.. you will understand as you read the following updates..

What I can tell u is yes they are married..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
awesome update! 👏 👏 👏
i felt like they were sex workers in the past or related to some sort of crime world and they togather managed to run out of that place and are now living togather...
sorry if m blabbering crap...its just attempts to make head or tail of the story 😆

coming to the update...i loved every bit of it...i love how u penned down the mental turmoil...looks like both are in love but, unknown to it as they are still lost in the past ...
👏 👏 👏 👏

update soon 😳
i have sent u a buddy req...do send me a pm 😳

No .. no sex workers.. and no no criminal past.. yes they got out of thrir situation but you will have to wait for the details in the following updates..

I am glad that u are trying tofigure out what the story is all about..

Yes you hot it right.. the past over shadows their present..

Will accept your buddy request.. but u need to keep in touch thru your comments as respect to the efgorts I put in..

Quote

janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

Quote

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: janu_2006
gr8 part..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

Thank you!! Am working on the next update... It is a vital update which will give you some background information..

Quote

DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I take it they are both broken. Well you know what they say: two wrongs don't make a right. I say, two halves don't make a whole. It takes a whole to make a whole. They need other people, but before that they need to understand and mend their own psyche. Being together at this stage is bad news.

Quote

139271

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

interesting concept... i guess Madhu was a victim of child molestation/rape... and he also seems to have gone through a similar situation... waiting for u to reveal their past😊

Quote

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey
I take it they are both broken. Well you know what they say: two wrongs don't make a right. I say, two halves don't make a whole. It takes a whole to make a whole. They need other people, but before that they need to understand and mend their own psyche. Being together at this stage is bad news.

This story is through and through a dark story... Right now I am not sure if I want to give it good ending.. I will have to see as the story goes.. right now it is just going to go from bad to worse...

This is something so different from what I have ever done.. And am enjoying the darkness too much..

Quote

RAONE8

@RAONE8

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Awesome update! 👏 👏 👏...update soon 😳...i have sent u a buddy request do send me a pm 😳

Quote

luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: book.worm
interesting concept... i guess Madhu was a victim of child molestation/rape... and he also seems to have gone through a similar situation... waiting for u to reveal their past😊

You have that right... they both are victims.. I am working on the next update which will give you their background...

The story is terrifying... dark and depressing!!!