SS - Liberation updated Ch 4&5 on 29th Nov

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't want to introduce the base of the story.. Rather would like you to read it and draw up your own ideas and opinions about it.. Again, I am going to be treading into a dangerous, not wildly talked about reality. A reality which we may not like, detest even, yet sadly it exists. It is high time we come out of our ostrich like hiding tendencies and look at the realities of life as it is. Good and Bad it is all there, out there in the world. It is time to look into its eyes and acknowledge it. Only when we acknowledge that it exists are we going to be able to do something about it.

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Liberation

INDEX

Chapter 1 : Pg 1

Chapter 2 : Pg 4

Chapter 3 : Pg 7

Chapter 4 : Pg 12

Chapter 5 : Pg 12


Not sure if the readers are liking my style of writing or my story. But would appreciate it if you could hit the like button or post reply button and leave your comments, be it in the form of criticism or approval!!!

Thanks!!

Also here is the link for index of other stories/articles/polls etc..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3763862/index-ff-os-ss-articles-polls-revisited


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Chapter 1


The creaking of the door as it opened woke her up and she cringed in terror. Almost as a reflex, she closed her eyes and held her breath in. He tried to be quiet as he walked into the room, not wanting to wake her up but these damn hardwood floors... As he neared the bed, she held onto the covers as tightly as she could, afraid of what the future would hold for her. As he neared the bed he realised that she was already awake and aware that someone was in the room. He noted the stiffness of her otherwise relaxed frame. He took in the fact that he didn't see the rise and fall of her chest as she breathe in. He immediately took action and quickly climbed into bed beside her, moving in to hold her tight. She didn't move, she didn't breathe. She had learnt a long time ago, that it was best to be still and let him do what he wanted rather than put up a fight. Putting up a fight just made things more horrifying for her. If she just laid still he would be done quickly and would be on his way just as quick and she could forget all about it, pretend like it was a bad dream... just a nightmare.. yes, a recurring nightmare.


He put his arms around her terrified frame and whispered in her ear, "Shhh...Shhh... Its me.. Its just me." She was already in another world, locked away from the realities of life. A world where nothing and no one could hurt her. A world where she was just an innocent little girl loved by her Daddy and Mommy. A world where the only things that could scare her were her exams. A world where she would be anxious but at the same time excited about her first kiss. A world where one day she would adorn a beautiful wedding dress and marry the man of her dreams. A world where she would willingly bear the pain of child-birth because she knew the happiness that would follow. A world where her life would revolve around her hyperactive kids, a loving and caring husband and a fulfilling work load.


He patted her sweat drenched wet hair and kissed her forehead a few times all the while talking to her. "Its just me... open your eyes.. come on you can do it... open your eyes just once."


His voice vaguely registered in her consciousness. It sounded as if it were coming from far away like someone calling out to her from a distance. She felt his voice more than she heard it. She trusted that voice but was finding it hard to follow it. She pushed herself towards it.. She pushed till she could hear it as if he were standing right next to her and yelling it into her ear. She finally managed to bring herself to open her eyes. She gazed into his worried all knowing eyes and felt her body automatically begin to relax. As her eyes recognised him, her body recognised him and it didn't have to be told to relax, it just knew. She took in her first breath and let go of her hold on the covers.


He was glad to see the anxiety and panic in her eyes vanish and the steady rise and fall of her breathing.


"Rishab.." she whispered as she finally turned her body towards him, pushing herself atop him, embracing him with everything she had. "Shhh... its all over... He cannot hurt us now.." Rishab assured her as he embraced her shivering body as tightly as he could.


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aDarkAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me first 🥳!! Lemme dance too 😆!!
Wow !! It's awesome Luvera.. It's just too good !!by the feel of it, I can say that she is treading in danger and is away from her parents n dreams. Hope it's not too ugly !! I loved the way she relaxed when she realised it's Rishabh 😳 !! Oh god !! Someone out there who is creepy n hurts them and may be that's what Rishabh is talking about and hmm that also means he is taken care of the situation..

Enough of my guessing, am very eager to read more now.. It's quite intriguing and since I love your style am totally in baby 😆 !!
Do continue soon Luvera, am glad u are not giving the Char sketch as this may take away some curiosity our of the plot 😃!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The PTSD is spot on.
Here are some of my guesses:
Human trafficking: she was sold to her capture for sex work.
Prolonged rape: this is technically also trafficking. Or even one instance of rape is enough to trigger PTSD like this.
This reminds of the biggest trafficking case that unfolded on the mountain a few years ago. Shook up our city. God the streets are hard.

Anyway, good work. Sure strong enough to pull me back on the forum.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Me first 🥳!! Lemme dance too 😆!!

hahahhah... dance away girl... shake that ass!!
Wow !! It's awesome Luvera.. It's just too good !!by the feel of it, I can say that she is treading in danger and is away from her parents n dreams. Hope it's not too ugly !!
It is ugly... but it is true for someone out there.. but you know me... I don't shy away from talking about the unspeakable!!!
I loved the way she relaxed when she realised it's Rishabh 😳 !! Oh god !! Someone out there who is creepy n hurts them and may be that's what Rishabh is talking about and hmm that also means he is taken care of the situation..
The story has just began... and the layers are yet to be peeled...
Enough of my guessing, am very eager to read more now.. It's quite intriguing and since I love your style am totally in baby 😆 !!
Thanks girl... This story I wanna talk about... increase awareness!!
Do continue soon Luvera, am glad u are not giving the Char sketch as this may take away some curiosity our of the plot 😃!!
Yeahh... Basically I just have an idea of what I wanna write about... Lets see where the flow takes us..
Though I have to say... I am a little anxious of how the story will proceed and turn out..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

The PTSD is spot on.

Thank you!!! 😎 I needed this scene to work perfectly as this is the base of the story.. I will be building on this..
Here are some of my guesses:
Human trafficking: she was sold to her capture for sex work.
Prolonged rape: this is technically also trafficking. Or even one instance of rape is enough to trigger PTSD like this.
This reminds of the biggest trafficking case that unfolded on the mountain a few years ago. Shook up our city. God the streets are hard.
Hmmm... Rape is part of the story... But I will be bringing a whole different approach to it... It is going to get ugly before it gets good.. I will be touching on topics that usually people keep mum about... I want to develop awareness through this story..
Anyway, good work. Sure strong enough to pull me back on the forum.😊
Yup!!! I am that good!!!!! ahahhahahah 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing beginning. Very absorbing. I love all your writing so am looking forward to this SS. Please PM me. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Luvu u came up wit a new Ss!!! wow..Muaah 🤗

I just luv ur style of writing. ..nd am on for dis one too.. it has kept me hookd in first part itself...

Ghosh dat is an intriguing. .she is n danger nd der is a saviour too.
I thnk she is forced , rapd or iis it she been sold...to..*******

I am happy dat u hav come wit such delicate topics...



cont soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amzing update..continue soon and thanxx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazingly well written! 👏 👏 👏 👏
looks like she was raped (or something similar) in the past...
waiting for the story to unfold...update soon😳
pls add me to ur pm list 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really intersting dear...
eager to read more... 😳

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