RishBala OS: Because He Loved Me (Final Part-Pg12) - Page 7

Originally posted by: EternalFrission

awesome

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-

Shivuuu :D Part 2 real soon :D
Dying to read the rest :D ❤️

Keep up the good work :D

Originally posted by: Shree.123

Beautiful OS 👏

Loved the little girl 😳

But didn't like Sultan marrying Madhu 😡

Plz do continue 😃

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

It's lovely..how I wish Sultan n his family should have died right after RK n Madhu's divorce... Pls continue soon..can I hope for a happy ending pls 😳

Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza

Awesome shivu!!!

loved to read changed RK!!

so reserved, so mature!!

vl b waiting fr next part 😊

Originally posted by: sangeet6690

beautiful OS...but y do u hv to get Madhu n dat🤬 married!!!

plz do continue...u r an amazing writer!!!!

Originally posted by: flowing_river

It's awesome...😊

do continue soon...

Originally posted by: -Rashi-

Superb!!! U have written it beautifully must say u r amazing writer👏 Thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: srik1

I wish Sultan had died before marrying Madhu. It feels so ugly to think that Madhu allowed Sultan to have relationship with her. yyeewww...

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..

Awesome ...loved it

Liked ds different reserved RK

update soon

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

amazing amazing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 plz write a concluding part to it and plz pm me when you do it😃

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE ONLY THING I DIDNT LIKE IN THIS STORY IS MADHU GETTING MARRIED TO SULTAN

SHE SHOULD HAVE LEFT HIM TOO

Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman

yes sad one

but loved it nyce

Originally posted by: Desire6

Though startd wit sad note lovd d way d story flowd to +ve ness.. SHIVANGI U REALLY S AN OWESOME WRITER , Rk here s so calm n understandn.. Nd dat Sultan🤬 CRAP MORON.. I wish same death s shown n show.. Minus dat marraige part.. I cant stand hm 4 a min.. Oh dear pls write next part to it.. Pls make it an SS.. Pls waitn nd thanks 4pm.

Originally posted by: .VivaciousSoul.

ow beatuful os... calm rk again a surprise package... best part was sultaan n his family is dead nw... n det lil galnis cho chweet..

one req (as always 😆)... I think its sad os.. make it more painful.. I really want to knw hw rk gone through all ths yrs.. wht he thoght abt mb..

waiting for next part.. 😛...

aalsi sab ke cmnts like karti hai mere masoom cmnt ko bhi kabhi like maar diya kar 😡

Originally posted by: titli4love

Loved it dear!! Update the 2nd part soon..thanks for PM. Hope u will re-unite them.

Originally posted by: Hdhd

Awesome OS.

Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

Lovely OS but please give it a beautiful and happy ending :)

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Oh please and pretty please give another update to this and dnt leave it on a sad note.anyways it was good to read

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

nice do pm me

Originally posted by: -Wild_Desire-

shivu bhai & mb marriage mention kyun kiya 😡😡 excluding that part it was good OS

Originally posted by: -naughty_smile-

Awsome OS shivu :))

Originally posted by: Trouble.

Nice update!

Originally posted by: Kawan

ASUM OS...