RishBala OS: Because He Loved Me (Final Part-Pg12)

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

very nice concept but (like some other posters) I wish Madhu and Sultan never married. I am surprised that Madhu considers herself as his widow.

Will be interested to see what happens next!

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Oh please and pretty please give another update to this and dnt leave it on a sad note.anyways it was good to read

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.Mohabbatein.

@.Mohabbatein.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

shivu bhai & mb marriage mention kyun kiya 😡😡 excluding that part it was good OS

Edited by -Wild_Desire- - 12 years ago

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mevanp

@mevanp

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Very nice ... 😊 n like most of them even I avoided Sultan's part but rest of the OS is Fab... 😳

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cute.girl97

@cute.girl97

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Its interesting..thank God sultan died

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

You better write a next part giving a proper ending..
As such I'm hating the current track.. I wish I could kill Sultan with my hands.. No hard feelings to those who like the current track.. He is behaving psychic.. And Madhu is not letting anyone know what is happening.. That is getting on my nerves..
So please give a proper ending here..

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Woww!! So beautifully written Shivu You should really write more hun! 😳 Thank you for the PM ! 🤗

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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

R u kidding me?

We will throw chappal @ u 4 this lovely OS!😆

Samajh aa gaya na wht I m trying to say!

In short very nice OS n please please please write the 2nd part! eagerly waiting 4 tht!

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Plz do continue n make it a happy OS...

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Shivangi.

@caffeineaddict

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Superb
Continue Soon
Thank you so much 4 the pm

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Niki_cool
Oye Triple B, Madhu had to marry that Bhai kya ??🤢 Are temple jaane se pehle hi teenon ka safaya kar dete na 😆 On the day of marriage they died in accident 🤔🤣

But RishBala part of OS is Awesome re, You are a damn good writer 😉 Do continue 🤗

Thanks Nikki tikki for liking🤗