RishBala OS: Because He Loved Me (Final Part-Pg12)

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-Ronnie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

very cute shivu!! :))
really very nice !

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sayantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

amazing amazing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 plz write a concluding part to it and plz pm me when you do it😃

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

THE ONLY THING I DIDNT LIKE IN THIS STORY IS MADHU GETTING MARRIED TO SULTAN

SHE SHOULD HAVE LEFT HIM TOO

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mimibm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Grief and loneliness could change Right Kameena into a calm and patient man. His character has grown into a more appreciable one. I would love to know more about his second chance with his love Madhu..😊

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sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

yes sad one

but loved it nyce

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Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Though startd wit sad note lovd d way d story flowd to +ve ness.. SHIVANGI U REALLY S AN OWESOME WRITER , Rk here s so calm n understandn.. Nd dat Sultan🤬 CRAP MORON.. I wish same death s shown n show.. Minus dat marraige part.. I cant stand hm 4 a min.. Oh dear pls write next part to it.. Pls make it an SS.. Pls waitn nd thanks 4pm.

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BadtameezBrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

ow beatuful os... calm rk again a surprise package... best part was sultaan n his family is dead nw... n det lil galnis cho chweet..

one req (as always 😆)... I think its sad os.. make it more painful.. I really want to knw hw rk gone through all ths yrs.. wht he thoght abt mb..

waiting for next part.. 😛...

aalsi sab ke cmnts like karti hai mere masoom cmnt ko bhi kabhi like maar diya kar 😡

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cardio21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Good work but Plz dont show any marriage between Madhu n that creepy villain. I wanna enjoy ur story. And this wedding thing will continue to haunt me throughout ur story..