Rishbala ss/ff/os - My DREAM PARTNER - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Read Part15 now..its lovely..So Rishabh is actually confessing what he feels only to deny it later😉..hmm what Madhu like Kelvin😲..really !!! Their Friendship is blooming😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Part16.. oh loved this caring Rishabh. he really likes err...cares for her😆. is Madhu testing Rishabh😉 guess even she is attracted towards him but may be unaware of it. well about her nightmare i believe its more like her past?? so will wait for ur updates to know the suspense😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice update. Madhu is having a nightmare. It must be related to her past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
nice update... rk is so caring and ya lovely friend too... and madhu is cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 17
Was she having a...nightmare?
Then I looked back at her..She was still squeezing her eyes, that pillow, and my shoulder. Ok, if she is having a bad dream, so WHAT SHOULD I DO NOW?!
" Madhs...Madhs...?"
I said looking at her. And then..
" Madh..."
" No..NO! This-This can't happen...No...N-NO.."
What is she saying? What is going on in her dream? I slowly got up and sat in a sitting position. I was continuously looking at her.
" NO!!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!"
She started shouting! What could I do?!?! The next second, I slowly placed my hand on mine. I held it with both my hands. Then she started squeezing my hand. I lookd down, on our hands. And...
" YOU ALL CAN'T LEAVE ME!!!"
She shouted very loud this time. My face shot up at her. What? You all cant leave me? Man..What is she seeing in her dream. And then..
A tear rolled down from her squeezing eyes...
.
I gulped
My eyes became vide.
My heart-beat became fast.
I became a little scared.
I bent down again. I took the same position. I moved my head on the right side. I whispered in her ear..
" No ones leaving u Madhs..I'm always there with u..I will never leave u alone..I'm always there with u... "
After saying that, my eyes automatically closed..I don't know why..Then I found silence all around..My eyes slowly opened..I slowly moved my head..Then I looked at her..
Her eyes were not squeezing now.
She was still.
Her mouth slowly, opened a bit. A slow sigh came out.
I got up..staring at her. I again had a very, very heavy head. I got up, took the jug and glass, I filled a glass of water, and I drank it in one shot. Then I looked at Madhs, she was still in the same position, her mouth was still opened a bit. I kept the glass. I slowly walked towards Madhu, I sat on the edge of the bed, on the left side. And suddenly, a click of a noise came. I looked towards room door. It opened. And guess what. I SAW MANNET THERE. Then I saw the clock. Ya, it was 8:00. He's coming time. He looked at Madhu, and then looked at me. He slowly came in and closed the door. He walked up to me and sat besides me; looking at Madhu. Then he looked up at me.
"Well..Madhs was not feeling well..So she is resting here.."
I said looking at Madhu. Then I looked up at Mannet. He was still staring at me. He slowly nodded his head. What is going on in his mind?! What is he thinking so deeply? Just then I again herd a click. Mannet and me looked at the door. It opened, Mr. Malik and Ma was standing there.
" Its time for us to leave now.."
Mr.Malik said looking at me. Then his eyes suddenly shot up at Madhu's face. Oh ya..means she also has to go now. I slowly looked up at Madhu. She was still sleeping in the same position. And just then...
" Oh Madhu..? Let her rest here! When she will wake up, Rishu or Mannet will drop her! Don't worry, let her rest here! Don't break her sleep!.."
MA said. I looked up at her. Somehow, Ma managed to convince Malik. And finally, he said 'yes' and Trishna and he went home. Ma said.
" Rishu and Mannet, Dinner will be ready in 15 minutes. You both be there. "
Ma said and she left. Mannet stood up, looking down at me..
" Ok, I need to go, u coming? "
" Give me 5 mins, I'll be there. "
I said looking up at him. Mannet slowly nodded his head, looking at Madhu. A smile came on his face and he looked up at me. OH COME ON SOMEONE SAY ME WHAT IS GNG ON IN HIS MIND?!?! And he left. Then I looked at Madhu. She was still sleeping..
Then suddenly...
That movement, When she hugged me, came in my mind.
That feeling, when she hugged me, came in my mind.
That shiver...of happiness and unexpectedness came in my mind.
That day in collage, when she first time laughed, came in my mind.
Our first meeting, the way I was attracted towards her, came in my mind.
That day, that movement, when she said SHE LIKES KELVIN, came in my mind. Now I realised...
My Heart had broken into MILLIOIN PIECES...
These all movements/memories flashed up in my mind one by one. After remembering the line which just now came up in my mind ' My heart had broken into million pieces ' One question came in my mind..
That was...
AM I DEVELOPING..FEELINGS FOR HER?!
...A lone tear dropped down from my eye...
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Precap- ( MANNET's POV )
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
awesome update dear...
awww he is falling for her...waiting for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice update so finally rk knw about his feeling 4 madhu...but she like kelvin...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Oh awesome updates..at last rk understood his feelings..waiting for mannet's pov..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 18
Am I developing...Feelings for her?
...A lone tear dropped down from my eye...
I looked at Madhu..who was still sleeping..Again a shiver ran down my spine. I again asked the same question to myself..And my heart answered...
" Yes "
Again a shiver ran down my spine. I CAN'T BELEAVE THIS. I REALLY CAN'T BELEAVE THIS.
I raised up my hand, I wiped that tear with my index finger, then I looked at it, I gulped. And then I again looked at Madhu.
I like her..
I like Madhs..
I like her..
I like Madhs..
These sentences were repeating continuously in my mind. I stood up, I walked towards the washroom, my footsteps were slow, my head was hanged down, my brows were narrowed.
I opened the door, I went towards the washbasin, I squashed water on my face hardly. Then I kept my hands down, And raised my head up, and looked at myself..
I saw how worried and shocked my face was looking.
I wiped my face, and slowly opened the door and closed it. I turned around..
And..
I saw MADHU sitting on the bed.
She was squeezing her head with her right hand.. I got worried for a second.
" Madhu? "
I said looking at her. She looked up at me.
" R-RK.."
She said squeezing her head. I slowly walked towards her, staring at her.
" RK..can I g-get some water..please..?"
" Y-Yeah!.."
I said and quickly, filled a glass of water. I ran towards her, balancing the glass in my hand. I sat besides her and gave her the glass. She slowly drank..
" Are you alright Madhs? "
I said keeping my hand on her shoulder. She took off the glass from her mouth..
" I'm having a heavy...head..."
" Because u had a bad dream.."
This sentence just slipped out of my mouth..I looked at her, she was staring at me with vide eyes..
" H-How do you know? "
Now should I explain her the whole thing?
" Well..."
I said her the whole thing..But-
I didn't say that how I had bent down on her..
Yeah..I didn't feel like to tell her..What will she think about me..?..She just slowly nodded her head and said..
" Oh..I'm-I'm so sorry..."
"Its totally ok Madhs...!"
I said in a calm voice, giving her a smile..She smiled back at me.
" Uh..excuse me.."
She stood up and walked to the washroom..
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Well then, Madhu ate the dinner with us and I dropped her back home..
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Well guys sorry for short update plz excuse me..😊
And ya, I'm gng to right MANNET's POV soon...
And I was thinking to write MADHU's POV also..SO plz say me ur ideas in the comments or u all can send me PMs too..Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
nice update dear...
and yes plz write madhus pov too...
waiting for next😊

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