Rishbala ss/ff/os - My DREAM PARTNER - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
yaar bechare ki jaane legi kya phele to yeh bata ke shock diya dat she like kelvin now asking do u have crush...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Lovely update..so waiting for Mr.kundra's reply now😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Oh rk's line during madhu's love confess awesome..and best the last line..what a question..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
ahhhaaa nice update dear..
she is asking do u hava crush on a girl..? ohha ya and its u dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Hey awsome n interesting updates just read n they r really good
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Part 15
" Do YOU have a CRUSH on a girl? "
...My heart stopped beating...
REally! I am not kidding! I really felt like my heart beat had stopped! I was still, like a statue. I was just staring straight into her eyes. Hey hey wait...is she LAUGHING?!
WHAT?! SERIOUSLY!?!?! She was just trying to control her laughter. Then I thought to myself..
" Hmm...so my dear sweety ur joking meh huh? Wait..let me give u a very nice back answer..."
I smirked at my self. After seeing my se*y smirk a confusion-types expression came to her face. Then I looked down, kept my hands in my pocket, and then looked back at her and said..
" Yes "
She raised her brows. So this was an unexpected answer for her...hmn...good move RK...good move...
" So can I know that girls name please? "
She said like she was singing a song..She came a little closer to me. I raised my foot and again came a little closer to her..
I gave her a giggled smirk.
I kept my arms on her shoulders. She narrowed her brows a bit and looked at my arms.
" You. "
I said. She gulped and her eyes became a little vide.
" W-what? "
I removed my right hand from her shoulder and kept it on her waist. Her vide eyes were still staring at me. Then I pushed her more close to me..Her hands came to my back so that she can balance herself. My left hand which was still on her shoulder; I tightened its grip. Our noses genteelly hit each other. I had almost made her off guard..She was breathing heavily..We both were still staring at each other..
" Madhs.."
We both were still staring at each other...
" Will you be my valentine? "
She was still like a statue. And just then...
" HAHA!!!HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
I bursted out into laughter. I removed my hands from her. I held my stomach tightly. Well..i gave her a fine back answer...She was still staring at me..
" What? I WAS MAKING U A FOOL MADHS!! HAHA!!!! " I said...She gave me a angry sigh..Then I controlled my laughter and it finally stopped...
" Well..."
Madhs said. I looked at her. She kept her hands in her pockets and looked down..
" I hope that Kelvin had said this all to me..."
...My Heart skipped a beat...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
nice update... they enjoy making fun of eachother... lovely friendship...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Cool update..loved the confess..but hate madhu's last line..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 16
" I hope that KELVIN had said this all to me.."
...My heart skipped a beat...
Why does this Kelvin always comes between us? I just hate Madhu for this. She always adds Kelvin between us.
Then I looked at Madhu who had gone deep inside her thoughts..Her eyes were hanged down. Well..I can't leave her like that because of my anger..I went up to her, I stood besides her and I kept my hand on her shoulder. She raised her head up in a sudden move and looked up at me. I just gave her a fake smile. Then she looked down and said..
" Your Love Confess was brilliant RK..every girl would really love this...''
She said giving a smile. And what? every girl would love this? Means she's saying that she also liked it but that Kelvin jumped at her mind? What. The. Hell.
" Well I am sorry..but..I should leave now..othervise..u know my dad.." Oh yeah..her dad..Madhs should really leave now...
'' Oh ya Madhs...U should go...And ya, take care of yourself.." I said coming in front of her..I saw her face..Her relaxed eyes were just staring straight at mine. A small smile came to her face, She came a bit closer, raised her hands and...
...She hugged me...
It was a soft; gentle hug. Her head was resting on my shoulder..Her hands on my back..Her head on the either side. In short words, she had relaxed her body on mine. And without thinking once, My hands raised up and relaxed on her back.. I slowly relaxed my face on her head.. And well...
This was our first hug...
..After this sentence came to my mind..My eyes slowly opened..Madhu's head was still resting on my shoulders.
" You're a lovely friend RK..You're a lovely friend.."
A soft shiver of happiness and unexpectedness ran down my spine..Slowly..my eyes closed..I tightened my grip of hug..And said...
" I'm always there for u Madhs..I'll always be your lovely buddy..."
The next few seconds, my eyes opened..Well..because I didn't even think at once before saying that..Slowly..Madhu's head began to move..Her hands slowly...dropped down..She slowly raised her head up..I was continuously looking at her..Than finally her head was in front of me..Her eyes staring into mine..I could see my reflection in her eyes..I saw that how still was my face..How still was her face...Her eyeballs slowly started looking here-and-there. Then I realised that I still had not removed my hands from her back. I broke our eye-lock and slowly removed my hands. I was looking at her..And she was looking at my HANDS which were slowly, droping down..
" UH..RK..I should leave..."
" Yeah! Madhs..."
We both again shared an eye-lock...And..
" Bye RK.."
" Bye Madhs.."
And she left...Her foot steps were slow..She was thinking something..I was also looking at her in a still position.. I was scanning her every dialog she had said me...I became all lost in my thoughts..Then somehow, I came out and I ran to my bike...
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I reached home, ate food, met my brothers, I did everything..I took my car keys and drove my carto some spot...
..Now, It has been somewhat half-an-hour..I decided to drive back home..I was having a heavy head..I think because these all unexpected things were happening with me.. I finally reached my mansion. I entered, walked. Well, I was passing through and I saw some guests sitting with my mom. And..GUESS WHAT.
I SAW TRISHNA AND MR.MALIK SITTING THERE!!!!!!!
What? What are they doing here? I went and I greeted all of them. Then, suddenly my head started looking here and there, one question popped in my mind..
" Where's MADHS? "
Oh yeah Man?! Where is she? I looked everywhere but she was nowhere. Then I finally asked..
" Where is Madhu? "
I asked looking at everybody. Then Trishna said-
" Well RK Madhu has also came with us..but..she was not feeling well..so she is taking rest in the guest room..."
What? She is not feeling well? I looked at Ma who was staring at me..
" Rishu, u can go, check her. If u want. "
Ma said with a smile. I nodded my head saying a 'yes' and walked to the guest room...
I finally reached there. I stood in front of the door. I slowly opened the door a bit. I peeped inside. I saw Madhu lying on the bed. Her eyes were closed. Then I fully opened the door. And closed it besides me, not making any noise. I slowly walked in, admiring her.
She was sleeping on her right-side. She had squeezed a pillow in her both hands. Then I looked down, her legs were also squeezed..Hey hey..wait a sec...
WAS SHE FEELING COLD?!?!
Then I looked at the windows, they were fully open. Air was passing through..Then I looked at her face. Silly girl..She would have closed the windows man..I ran up to the windows and slowly closed them. All the windows were closed now. Then I looked at Madhu, sunlight was coming at her eyes. I again looked at the windows and closed all the curtains. Then I removed a bed sheet and put it on her. I turned on the fan. Then I looked at her..
Her face was looking like a baby..A lovely baby..Her flicks were coming on her cheeks, Her chubby-cheeks flatted on the pillow. I gave a small smile and turned around to leave. I walked 4 steps..But just then..i stopped.. I HERD SOME NOISE.
" Uhm...hmn..ahhm...ahh..."
My eyes became vide. I turned around, I looked at Madhu. Well..SHE WAS MAKING THOSE NOISES.
She started squeezing the pillow which was in her hand. I slowly walked towards her..I sat besides her, I was continuously staring at her.
" Uhh...haa...hmn...ahhhuhh!..."
Her eyes began to squeeze. She began to squeeze her pillow a more harder. I came a more closer.
" Uh...No...No...NO!!..."
She said the last word a little louder. The next second, I bent down. I kept my hands besides her face..Our noses were touching each other..
" No..NO...! "
Her one hand suddenly came on my shoulder. She started squeezing my shoulder.. Hey hey wait...
Was she having a...Nightmare?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
awesome update dear😊
madhu had nightmare?? means did malik nt treated her well?
waiting for next

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