Rishbala ss/ff/os - My DREAM PARTNER

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...MY...

...DREAM...
...PARTNER...
- I N D E X -
Character - Page 1
Sketch
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 2
Part 3 - Page 2
Part 4 - Page 3
Part 5 - Page 3
Part 6 - Page 4
Part 7 - Page 5
Part 8 - Page 6
Part 9 - Page 7
Part 10 - Page 7
Part 11 - Page 8
Part 12 - Page 10
Part 13 - Page 11
Part 14 - Page 12
Part 15 - Page 13
Part 16 - Page 14
Part 17 - Page 15
Part 18 - Page 15
Part 19 - Page 16
Part 20 - Page 17
Part 21 - Page 17
Important msg - Page 18
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Character Sketch-
(PLEASE READ )
Madhubala Shamsher Malik ( Madhuri )- She is stylish, but yet shy. She Can't mix up with people, she needs time. She is a adopted daughter of Shamsher Malik. She is 16 years old ( studies in collage, 11th standard ) She doesn't like her name so all her friends and family call her Madhu or Madhuri.
Trishna Malik - elder sister of Madhubala. She is 20 years old ( is in 15th standard) She is hot, smart girl BUT selfish, and a little proud. She loves herself and doesn't pay much attention to madhubala.
Padmini - Maid of Shamsher's house . Treats Madhu and Trishna as her own daughters.
Shamsher Malik- Father of Trishna and Madhu. He is rich, very rich. He loves her both daughters. But, always gives special attention to Trishna. Shamsher has a great friendship with the KUNDRAS.
Mohan Kundra - He has 3 sons. Rishabh, Mannet, and Dhruv. He is also rich, very rich. Shamsher is his best friend. He loves his three sons very much.
Rishabh Mohan Kundra ( RK )- He is the second son of Mohan Kundra. He is hot, smart, and sometimes se*y too. He is flirty, BUT, he doesn't flirt with all the girls, HE ONLY FLIRTS WITH THOSE GIRLS WHO ONLY 'HE' LIKES. He loves himself. He is also 16 years old ( studies in the same collage, 11th standard )
Mannet Kundra - Elder son of Mohan Kundra, He is graduated. He is 22 years old. He is a biasness man. He is very shy of girls. But yet, he is friendly. He is very smart, yet cute. He loves his both brothers.
Dhruv Kundra - He is the youngest son of Mohan Kundra. He is in 9th standard. He loves Mannet MORE than Rishabh. He is naughty and funny. He likes to make friends who are elder than him.
Radha Kundra - Mother of Rishabh, Mannet and Dhruv.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz start soon...
pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1..

Wooohoo! I am very exited as it is my first day of the collage! I was just getting ready, finally I got ready and I ran down of the stares and I saw my mom calling me
" Rishu! Rishu at least eat your breakfast and go! "
I looked at her and I realised that I have not eaten my breakfast yet...OMG how am I soo exited to go to the collage...For meeting new girls? LOL...
" Come bro sit, at least give me some company man! " My elder bro Mannet said, and yash my little cute naughty bro looking at me saying the same thing looking at my eyes. So I finally sat and ate my breakfast... Then I ran into my car I drived to my collage..and guess what, I was lost! I was not able to find my collage. Then I was thinking what to do. I stopped my car and I asked a guy who was sitting in his car
" Hey, can u tell me where is Mount collage? " Ya my collages name is Mount collage.
" Buddy I am also going to the same place! "
Oh wow I am always lucky! :P
"...follow my car ok?"
" Thanks"
Than I followed his car. And finally we reached the collage. He parked his car and I also parked my car, I got out and I went beside him I smiled at him " Thankyou very much buddy! "
" Never mind. Well, I am Kelvin, Kelvin Kenth. And you? "
Kelvin Kenth...Shhe what a crap name..Shit! Thankgod I didn't say this to him!
" Well I am RK."
" What? "
" Haha..I am Rishabh Kundra, Plz call meh RK"
" Haha ok..so..Rk..lets go to the collage together!"
We went to the collage together ,I saw new people and new girls too..but I was not likeing anyone..
" are new also new to collage? " I said looking at him. " No, I am in 12th standard now. " " cool " I again turned my head and I started looking at others. Then I saw one girl coming to us, looking at Kelvin. I looked at her and I noticed her. Damm She is hot man!
" Hey Kelvin! "
She said and hugged him as a friend.
" Hey Trishna! How are you girl!? "
Woo Trishna..good name..She was wearing a mini skirt and a short sleeveless top, high heels and full makeup done. Then she looked at me wondering who I am. " Trish, He is Rishabh, I mean RK" Kelvin said.
She just nodded her head and looked at my shoe, slowly raising her head up- and finally looking at my face.. woho I am really so hot! and she came in front of me and raised her hand and said
" I am Trishna Malik" I holded her hand and said
" You can call me RK " She just smiled and again repeated the same thing, looking at my shoe and than on my face and she went. Oh really am I that hot? I and Kelvin was just looking at her leaving, Kelvin started doing something in his phone. I was still looking at Trishna and I saw... she went to one girl..You know, that girl just attracted me. Trishna was talking to her rudely, she was just trying to clam her down. She was not hot, she was beautiful. She had curly and frizzy hair, she was wearing shorts and a nice U shape deep neck top and left side it was sleeveless and right side it had half sleeves . She was wearing normal shoes. I asked Kelvin looking at her " Who is she? " Kelvin raised his head up to see which girl I am pointing at, he gave a giggled smile and said " She? Oh she is..." She just closed his eyes and kept his hand on his forehead, trying to remember who she was, I was still looking at her, Trishna was just pushing her , I was just thinking and just then
" MADHUBALA! "
Madhubala?
" Her name is Madhubala but all call her Madhuri or Madhu. She is Trishna younger sister." And he again started continuing whatever he was doing in his phone. I was still looking at her and suddenly I saw TRISHNA PUSHED HER AND SHE FELL ON THE GROUND! without thinking I just ran and she was looking down, touching her hips, squeezing her eyes, Trishna was still standing there looking at me coming towards Madhu, I just went and I raised my hand to pick her up, she looked at me and she holded my hand and stood up, I kept my hand on her shoulder and said " are you ok? " She nodded her head, looking down, squeezing her elbow. Then I looked at Trishna who was looking at me with a confused face, Then guess what I also looked at her shoe, and then at her head, I did the same thing. I was looking at her with a angry face. She looked at Madhu and than at me and she just went tapping her feet. I was still looking at her and then Madhu said " Thankyou, thankyou so much " I just smiled at her and then I removed my hand from her shoulder. She also returned a smile and walked away. I was still looking at her.I was Kelvin looking at me. Man I wanna say one thing, whatever she is , She is cool...😆😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Vinona: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankyou very much guys! now I am writing part 2...
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Part 2
OK, now the fun time is over, we all had to go to our classrooms now. Kelvin said bye to me and he went. I went to my classroom AND GUESS WHAT, I SAW MADHU SITTING THERE! Woo! She's in the same class!? cool man...I am so lucky. I was just looking at her just then she saw me " Hi " She said looking at me. " Hey " I said. Her phone buzzed and she turned her head. I was just going to sit besides her but just then I realised that we aren't THAT close friends yet. I said to myself "control RK, control, I know if u r gonna sit beside her, u r gonna flirt with her! move away you! " I said to my self and I went to the next row.. Well, let me explain, Our classroom had 3 rows. madhu was sitting on the 2ed row ( which was in the middle) she was sitting on the first bench. I went to the third row and I sat on the third bench. Wow baby I could see her clearly! Cool...cool...just than one girl came, HELLO HELLO she was not a teacher, she was a student, man she was hot and se*y, She looked at me and she came and sat besides me, I looked at her and than I looked down and suddenly I saw Madhu giggling at me. OH WHY MAN?! was I behaving like I am shy? LOLOL. I was just staring at her and than she turned her head away. CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT IS SHE THINKING?? PLZ TELL ME! Just than I saw our teacher coming, Man he was looking so strict. He was wearing big black glasses. Shhe.. Madhu was also staring at him and I bet she was thinking what I was thinking. MAN her face was showing that clearly! She also turned her head to see me. LOL our thoughts are also the same...Haha..I was just going to laugh but I controlled it coz our great teacher was standing in front of us. And F.I.N.A.L.L.Y IT WAS THE LUNCH BREAK! cool..Than I saw Madhu going alone. well I didn't follow her.. GUYS I AM NOT THAT FLIRTY! In the lunch break I met some guys and I spent some time with them..But I saw Madhu silently eating her lunch alone on a table, she was lost in her thoughts. And then I saw Trishna Gossiping and laughing with her girl gang. Well..Trishna is her sister so she would have invited her.. Is something going on wrong between them..What would that be? And after turning my head from Trishna, I saw Madhu looking at me and my gang of friends. was she wondering that 'wow..that guy is new to this collage and from now only he has started making new friends!' Was she really thinking that? Or she is thinking " I wish that guy would come and sit with me" Just then she turned her head and again started eating her food. I thought I should go and sit with her but just then
' TRRRIIINNNGGG ' The bell rang..means our lunch break was over and I saw my plate and MAN I DID'NT EVEN HAD COMPLETED EATING MY FOOD YET! I was still feeling a little hungry.." Oh..don't mind. Better luck next time.." My new friend Parth said. He was friendly man.. I got up and I saw Trishna looking at me. Oh why? I went to the classroom, attended my lectures and finally, It was time to go home! I went home in my car.. Well I saw Madhu going by her bike and Trishna by her own personal car with her gang on friends...I was really feeling bad for her.
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Do you guys like it? PLZ PLZ PLZ leave your comments.. I will update Part 3 tomorrow.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it..do continue soon n pm me😳
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Thankyou very much guys for likeing my os/ff/ss MY DREAM PARTNER. I really really love your comments AND YOUR SUPPORT TO M DREAM PARTNEER. Plz continue reading. And yippie! hears PART 3!---------------
Part 3
I was driving my car on a fast speed, while driving, I was scanning my whole day in my thoughts, From when I met Kelvin the first time, till I saw Madhu on her bike. But my constration was only on one name, ' Madhubala' ...
YEAH! you heard that right! I never ever thought that my first day of collage will go like this..constrating only on one girl.. I was just thinking...thinking...thinking...Then suddenly. My head turned on the left side, I saw a big mansion, that mansion was looking familier, I was just seeing it and then i saw a boy standing there...wait..hold on a sec...IS THAT DHRUV!?!? then i looked at that mansion and i realised that ITS MY OWN HOME! But before i could realise my car was still on a full speed and it got away from there, I suddenly stopped my car and you know what, MY FACE WAS INCHIS AWAY FROM THE STEARINGWHEEL...Hey hey don't worry! Thanks to my seat belt..lol..😆😆
Then i clossed my eyes, i thought to my self, " Control your self RK, control your thoughts" And i opened my eyes , withen the next second, i again started my car and made a quick Uturn. I was just going to enter my mansion but i agained stoped and i saw dhruv standing there, In the middle...Oh i know..i know..
whats going on in his mind.. I mind was jumbled uo with so much of thoughts that i even forgot to horn! Poor me...
Just then i heard a knock at my window, I opened it, Dhruv standing there with a question mark on his face " Bro..uh..what just happened? I mean uh..you went there..uh..Uturn..uh..I am just asking that.." "Nothing, I was just lost in my thoughts" I said the truth..😛
And before he could answer me back, I started my car and drived away. I parked my car and ran towards my mansion, And you guys know what,
I WAS STARVING!!!😲😛
I did'nt eat my food completely in the lunch break so...you know...
And, without even washing my face and hands I directly rushed towards the kitchen and ahh..she again came..
" Rishu! Atleast wash your hands and sit!" "I'M STARVING!" I raised my eyebrow and hands. And woo i again told the truth.." Why? Did'nt you eat your lunch break?" Well this time i couldent say the truth..The movent she said that, Madhubala's face flashed up in my mind screen. I ignored her and i sat on the dining chair and then i said " Ugh..whatever..FOOD PLZ!" She just gave a glare to me and started taking out some food.. just then Dhruv came inside with his hands and face completely washed, and he said to mother " Me too plz! " My mother turned her head and smiled at him and then looked at me with a look that was saying ' Learn something from your brother' Well really? I ignored her..She served me some food and i started eating it.. And now, its 10:30 PM IN THE NIGHT! My whole day spent just thinking about my collage and that girl...um..what was her name? oh yeah! MADHUBALA! I changed to my night wear and i slept...
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OK I KNOW THAT THIS PART WAS A LITTLE BOARING..😭😭
BUT trust me guys..The next part is going to be good..plz don't stop reading...Wait for Part 4!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's nice..waiting for the next😛

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