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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
well this is very good story one thing seems unreal and is that padmni is not goona give him second chance so easly so u made her forgive him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks guys for your likes and comments...

madhu went home, she directly went to her room...
madhu:( to himself) o god will ma allow me to go for a outdoor shoot...that to alone with RK...
after some time padmini came home...
madhu went to her...
madhu: ma...i want a permission...
padmini: for what...( she already knowing it)
madhu: RK sir is going for out door shoot and i also have to go...so can i go...
padmini: yes u can...when are u leaving...
madhu: in evening...
padmini: ok...

madhu:( to herself) strange how did mom gave me so soon permission...
some thing is strange...mom is giving me so easily permission...
but madhu got busy in packing as RK told her that they are stayiny for 4 days there...

at 6:00 RK came to take madhu...
madhu with her bag...and placed it at the back of the car...
and RK started driving...
madhu: sir where is bittuji??...
RK:(to him self) why will i carry kabaap may haddi...
RK:( to madhu) no he will come with the crew...
madhu: when is the crew coming??...
RK: tomorrow morning...
madhu: then why i am going now...if u have told me then i would have also came with them...
RK: no...
madhu:why??
RK: because u are my PA...i may need u...
RK was unable explain madhu...
after some hour the reached RK's farm house...
when madhu entered the farm house...she her mind again started felling strange...
(where RK and madhu had said i love u)
RK saw madhu expression changed...
RK: madhu...madhu...
madhu just looking around...
RK: madhu...
madhu:( came to sense) yes sir...
RK: go and get fresh...
madhu: ok...
RK: your room is there( showed the direction)

madhu went in her room and got fresh...
but at that time the light went away...
madhu got scared and ran out of the room...
when madhu came in the hall she dash with RK and both fall on the sofa...
madhu on the top of RK...
madhu: sorry sir i am scared of dark...
RK: it ok...
but RK was enjoying it...
RK:( in his mind) i wish this light goes every time...
and after some time light came...
madhu:( getting up) sorry sir...
RK: it ok...i like it...
madhu: what????
RK: i mean i know it...girls are always scared of dark...
to change the topic...
RK: can u do a work for me...
madhu: yes sir...
RK: madhu u have to rehearse some scene with me...
madhu: but sir i have never done acting...
RK: u have to do nothing just say this dialogue...(gave a paper)
madhu takes that paper...
RK: so the scene go this way ...the hero force the heroin for marriage...
madhu: why???
RK:because the heroin needs money for her father's operation...so i have told u the basic ...read
the whole story...
RK was sitting on a sofa facing madhu...as madhu was sitting on another sofa...
madhu started reading the story ...it was the whole rishbala story...
RK noticed madhu's expression changing at every line...
madhu was unable to read the whole story...she was felling that she was connected to it...
but how she herself was not knowing it...
madhu:( tension on her face) sorry sir i can't help u in this...
RK: but what happened...?????
madhu: nothing sir i am not felling well...

madhu and RK both went to take rest...
madhu was unable to sleep as in her mind something was bothering her...it was that story that RK gave
madhu to read...

madhu came near RK room and knocked the door...
RK:( opened the door ) yes some problem...( shocked to see madhu with her bag) what happened???
madhu: sir i am sorry i am not feeling well so i am going back ...i came here to say bye...
RK:( worried) u cant go alone...i will come with u...
madhu: no sir i dont want to disturb u...i mean your shoot...
RK: its ok...i am also not feeling fine...lights are going after every hours...i too want to go back...
RK was finding a excuse...
madhu: sorry sir...for me...
RK: no not like that...i have no problem...

madhu and RK reached there home...
they reached at night 2:00pm...
madhu directely went to bed...
madhu was in a deep sleep ...when she saw a strange dream...
*******dream**********
madhu standing in a dark place...
madhu: is some one here...
a figure of a man walk close to her...
and when he is close to her...
man: biwi I LOVE u...
******* dream end*********
and madhu wake's up...
madhu was all sacred...as she was unable to see that man's face...
trishna: what happened madhu??...
madhu: didu that man...
trishna: man...what are u saying...??
madhu: nothing didu just a bad dream...let go to sleep...
madhu after that was unable to sleep...just that man's image was in her mind...

percap: madhu staying at RK mansion...
madhu scream's ...seeing that strange dream again...
RK: what happened???...
madhu: who is he...????
RK: he!!!!...

plz comment and tell how it is...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
yipee me first !!!
let me do some happy dance !!!......
beutiful updates.
ab toh rk madhu ko soone bhi nahi dega. sapno mein bhi 😉
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
amazing update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
saijahnavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
awsome dear 👏👏
i luved it
plz continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Superbb update 👏 👏

Hope Madhu's memory will cm bak soon 😃

PM me next tym too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
wow a nice story😊 gud writing😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
It was nice dear 😊
I liked it..plss update soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
awesome update..!!Precap sounds exciting!!Even i want to ask "who is he..??'😳

Thanks for the PM..Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
awesome update dear..thanx for PM

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