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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello friends i am going to write a story on our dear Rishbala...

this story came to my mind while reading a old book...

the story starts when all sultan story goes to an end...

in this story sultan and aryan goes back to dubai...

and before going sultan have cleared all the misunderstanding in RK's head...

IN MUMBAI...

RK was feeling very guilty about what he did to madhu...

RK:(to himself) madhu i did very wrong...i didn't trust u ...

but now no force ...no game...i will now ask pure forgiveness from u...

and then he called bittuji...

RK: bittuji cancel all my works...i have to do some important work tomorrow morning...

bittuji knew what was going in his chief's mind...

but...

some where in a hospital padmini, Trishna, malik and roma was sitting in a room...

and on bed was madhu lying ...with all machine and bandage on her head and hand...

as she meet with accident when she was going to meet her friend...

and after some time doctor came in...

padmini: (crying) doctor ...

doctor : don't worry ma'am...her memory will soon return but don't force her to remember any thing...

{{{ yes you heard it right madhu had lost her some months or a year from her mind...

when she woke up she had not remember anything related to RK or mukund ...nothing ...she had lost memory of 1 year...}}}}

malik: can we take her home...

doctor: why not... tomorrow u can take her home...

saying this doctor went away...

padmini:( crying) malik why is this problem coming on madhu...why...

mailk:( comforting padmini) don't worry madhu will start a new life...

plz comment and tell how it is...

i will update after some hours...

precap: rk and madhu face to face...

now how will RK make madhu to remember her lost memory...???

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yippiii!! M first to comment...🥳

Nice start Dear...

Waiting for next chapter how RK react about Madhu's memory loss??

Continue soonn.

Thnx for PM...

Edited by Khushi2187 - 12 years ago

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kriti ( Neha)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wowww... I was thinking the same after Revenge track RK realise his mistake and if Madhu lost her memory 😃

Plzz continue and pm me 😊

Waiting

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anvikaatti7799

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful story please continue,waiting for new RK and madhu's love story

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mandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

fantastic concept dear...

do continue...😊

i m really sad d way serial is going ...no punishment and no guilt in rk😡

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

super awesome start.thanx a lot for pm and continue soon

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome Start Anna. 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really loved it alot.❤️
I'm eagerly waiting to see RK's reaction on Madhu's memory loss. 😳 😳
Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳
Thanks so much for the pm. 😃

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nahtani88

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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anna_77

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks guys for your likes and comments...

In morning RK was getting ready to go to the chawl and ask forgiveness from madhu...

at that time bittuji and radhaji came in...

radhaji: good morning rishu...and best of luck...

bittuji: yes chief best of luck...

RK:( surprised ) why are u both saying best of luck...

bittuji: because u are going to bhaibji to say sorry and bring her back...

RK: so u know that ...ok thanks ...and buy...

RK reached the chawl and went to madhu's house and was shocked to see that it was locked...

RK thought of asking a man sitting there...

RK: excuse me where have madhu and her family gone...

man: don't know but the are out from 3 or 4 days...

RK was about to go when that man called him...

man: i think they have shifted some where else...they are not staying here...

RK was hell shocked...

and disheartened went back to his mansion...

here madhu was getting ready in her new house for her work...

she has joined a job in a parlour ...as after 1 week she was well...

madhu: ma...ma...i am going...

padmini: bye...and take care...

madhu reached her work place ...when she entered she saw her boss sitting all worried...

madhu: ma'am are u ok...

boss: madhu yes all fine ...its that a hair dresser was supposed o go on film set of RK but she is sick so she will be unable to go...

madhu: it's ok ma'am i will go...

boss: great madhu...thanks...

madhu reached the set...when she entered the gate ...bittuji was standing and talking on the phone...

madhu went near him...

madhu: excuse me ...can u tell who is bittuji??.

bittuji:(shocked) bhaibij ...

madhu: what????...i am the new hair dresser...where is the hero's vanity van...

bittuji without saying anything pointed in the direction...

madhu went to the vanity...and knock the door...

RK:( shouted from inside) come in...

RK was facing in the opposite direction ...

madhu: sir i am the new hair dresser ...madhubala...

hearing this RK turned and saw madhu standing...

RK:( happy ) madhu...i was searching u ...

madhu: sir why were u searching for me...

RK hugged her...and madhu pushed him...

madhu: who the hell do u think u are??...how can u hug any girl...

RK was all shocked ...

RK: any girl...biwi...

madhu: see u are superstar that doesn't mean u can say anything...

RK: but...

madhu: i am leaving this job...

and in with this madhu walked out...

plz comment and tell how it is...

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blazingstar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

i loved it yar

i think the new trend abt amnesia has been set:D

loved ur writing

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