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gennyM

@gennyM

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Me would like to read about 1,then 2 then 3.A slow and steady progression.😃

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vampires-lover

@vampires-lover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow dat's amazing...true wala love story...

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

This OS was just simply beautiful:') I loved loved loved it<3 & please do write another one on SulBala's baby☺️ s

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

This is beautiful. I am really very particular about this live in thing but after reading the reasons, their reasons, I am surprised that I do not have a problem with that in their case anymore. True, with both of them having bitter experiences in marriage institution, it is only natural for them to lose their trust in it. I loved the relationship you showed here, no running from one's feelings to an extent to push the other person away as we normally see. No OTT words or gestures to convey what they feel for each other. Their confession was natural, and the entire story was perfect. Awesome one Jaz. Loved it.

Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesum and lovely os. Loved Sulbala togethr. And abt option I would prefer in 2nd 1st and 3rd order. And abt live-in relationship I don't think its wrong if a two people doesn't want to b married and they don't believe marriage then its nt necessary they stamp their relationship for d sake of society.

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Basilisk

@Basilisk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Wow!! Awesome OS dear!!

Loved it!! :)

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@s1a2i3p4o5t6n7i

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Very well written!!!! Update soon!!!

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Aparna Gopal

@aparnasvj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Fantastic story... I really admire ur writing style... I like three options equally... Kuch bhi chalega yaar bcoz u will create wonderful works only.. Thanxs 4 the pm

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

updated my comment on pg1 😉

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

@Nazmaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Totally Amazing Os.. Although it doesnt feel like an OS.. More of an SS..
Please Continue this into an SS..
Also would love to see Sulbala Baby and well Actually All of them..

Loved it loads x :)

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