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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Comment from suadade:

Hi!!! I cant comment on your story yet, cause I already used up all my posts. Now I have to wait 24hours before I can comment anywhere on the board. So I am just going to send you my review here.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
After reading your fanfic, I feel like I dont need SulBala endgame in the show. From now on your story is their canon story. It was beautiful, amazing, loving, passionate and completely believable. You describe their relationship so well, I could picture them in my mind.
Highlights: Everything. How can I possible pick just one?
The hospital scene: Wow!! The way he stopped her from leaving. His breakdown. The comfort.
The love confession: How beautiful was that? It was just perfect. Two adults opening up to each other about their feelings. There was no anger, no shouting. Just trust and understanding. We dont get those kinda scenes on tv these days.

The living together: I can deal with it. We all deal with a heartbreak differently. I understand why they dont trust marriage anymore. But you have to write more. I want to see them put their pasts completely behind and move on.

Which brings me to the last part: I want to read about them having their own baby. After marriage. I cant imagine Madhu taking that step without it. And Sultan would do anything to make her happy.

So my choices for the next OS would be ALL OF THEM in this order : 3-2-1

You are an amazing writer. I cant wait to read more of your stories.
I love you soo much for writing this. After today's episode I was on cloud nine. But the precap kinda ruined my day. I was dreading tomorrow episode. But your OS just made my night. I dont care anymore. Your fanfic is my canon. We both know the writers arent brave enough to give us an amazing SulBala love story.

Again, thank you thank you thank you.

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@-Castiel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I love your writing. You make the words come alive and my imagination runs wild at the way you weave your story. Not many writers are capable of doing that. While I was reading, I felt I was part of the story. Watching it unfold right in front of my eyes. Beautiful really👏 I do have one question though. Why would you out them in a live-in relationship yet still hide it? I honestly couldn't wrap my head around that😳 They had moved to a new city so they could have easily lied about being married or even admitted to being in a live-in relationship as I don't see anything wrong with those. I just don't get why they felt the need to hide their relationship in a new city filled with people they don't know. Please don't be offended by my inquiry. It's something that piqued my interest =]

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eminent

@eminent

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

This was so sweet! Definitely a little 'hatkey', but well worth the read! I enjoyed it! Now as for your next ventures...well I would love to read all 3 of your options listed especially #2&3!! 😳 It would be interesting to delve into Madhu's perspective and imagine what she may think of Sultan in particular. The show so far hasn't really explored that angle-it's only showed us what Madhu thinks of Sultan's actions towards Aryan... & As for Sulbala baby- awww 😳 I'm fantasizing it will be as cute as Aryan. ( I'm already imagining a muscular and buff Sultan holding his oh- so fragile and delicate baby girl!!! 😳 Oh gosh you write so well... I'm already looking forward to your next OS/SS on Sulbala!!!)

Good luck! & Please put me on your pm list if you have one!! 😃

Thanks for a wonderful read!

Edited by eminent - 12 years ago

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome OS...so long...:)

Loved it truly...

I want to see Number 3...

Love sulbala

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prabha

@prabha.abha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

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very very very nice, i love it❤️

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MKyara

@MKyara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

THANKS A LOT FOR UR AWESOME OS!!!! love it to ooo ends

Well well well...Now let's talk about ur OS...

I loved how in engraved their flashbacks...loved all the memories...sweet and sour...both...

the contrast of how he reacted to Aryan's say of calling Madhu his mother in his 2nd flashback and his last was great...i loved his nervousness which made him hide in behind the shadows...:D

He really is adorable sometimes...:D oh wait...not sometimes...he is always adorable :D

Though i hated his rude gesture...i really hoped him to repent sooner...and wow...u did that by shooing Aryan away...loved how he wante her to stay and finally he could say it tht if not for Aryan...thn atleast for him to stay...WOW!!!! the whole time i was smiling lyk a freako...hehe...my mom kept on glancing at my pc and wondering who had texted me or where Barun Sobti is for which i was smiling lyk a love-sick-puppy...hehe...u c...he has been my crush and now with Sultan...my mom dozn yet knows tht i have a new love-interest :D...ohhk enough of my banters...hehe :D...back to me loving your OS

I won't say i hated how it ended...i'd rather say tht in l8r stories i expect you to get them married :P...hehe

I love their sweet sweet gestures they give to each other :D

And lastly...you've asked which ones we'd want to read...though SulBala child would be romantic...but i don't want to read that...hehe...I've read a lot of my favorite Jodi's having a child...to tell the truth...i love secret gestures to Love and a bi of masti...than will alll lovey-dovey...my sole reason why i love SulBala since Sultan's entry :D

So in that case, I'd love to read 1st his reaction to Rk's doings...and obciously...i'd love to see a duel (olden times-like) between the twoo...and RK being shot...arrrggghhh

and then maybe i'd love to read Madhu's POV :D