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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I would like to them get married and have a baby

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

reserved..
PS-so looking forward to read this..I love your writings Jaz..and since I am also getting smitten by Sulbala I was overjoyed to see your OSs on them!..will comment as soon as I get time to read!

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Shreya

@-Wanderer-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

heya!! 😃
Had a great time reading this update. Did not sound like Madhubala but I simply pictured Madhu and Sultan in the story!❤️
Your imagination!! 😆
Loved the way you wrote with details and so.much description! Can't imagine the amount of time and effort it took!🤗
Some scenes made me go 😳
Judging from the articles today as well as the topics, people are hell bent on making Sulbala breathe their last. 😭 😡 But enough of that! Just wanted to say that I will remember Sulbala with a happy ending like the OS you people write! 😃 No matter what!
So awesome job! Write more! Thanks for sharing it with us and also your PM!👍🏼
xoxo!😊
Oh and all 3 but most importantly number 3! 😉

Edited by Shreya_94 - 12 years ago

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Sujith

@..Sujith1001..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jnawaz
Hi guys!

So...here's my question to you all...

There are many places in this story what i'd like to explore if you guys are interested...here are the three OS's ive been thinking of after writing this piece. Of course, those OS's will bounce off of this story and this relationship that Sulbala have...so...tell me which you'd like to read first...

1) Madhu's POV in all of this. 😳
2) Sultan's reaction to finding out about what RK did. 😡
3) Sulbala Baby ☺️

After you LONG comment...just put the number of which you'd like to read next 😃

Thanks for the input!
JAZ

All the 3! ❤️

And 3rd one is very important

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Sujith

@..Sujith1001..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

And I read the story!!

It is simply amazing 👏
Loved it! ❤️

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ornella_mg

@ornella_mg

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Just completed my bed time reading with your os. It was brilliant ! Most importantly you kept the essence of the characters, which I loved. Cant wait to read more of your Sulbala works.

I would like to read all the three, might be 2,3 and then 1. But pls do keep writing.

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112642

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

This story is perfection :)

3) I guess even though 1 and 2 sound just as fun!

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hi jaz.. GM or GN for you?? i read the title and your note... it required time so i will be back after some time to read it...

the title is very nice... so the picture.

"However long the night, the dawn will break."

beautiful quote ... very true...

AUTHORS NOTE: Get ready to see Sultan as a different man 😉 ...
you'll know what i mean when you read it...

i know u jaz.. i can never underestimate you... u can make the story line up side down.. u can apart our favorite jodi and give them another partners. i have experienced this from a story of yours called "You & I...Collide".

u made (ok.. not you but your writing😆) me feel geet pain... at that time i was like could not read the story at the same time could not avoid it.. u can make the readers cry along with your story... i have very nice experience.

so let me read and find out what has stored for us this time... better not sad / cry one.. 😡 😆

will be back after one hour...

thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

that was just amazing

it was long one and trust me i m presently quiet busy but when i started reading it i couldn't get myself close the tab before completing

Subala wow they do have magic

I love the way Sulthan oops arav feels about Madhu

Their love is so serene

Aryan is a cutie pie glad he has mom now

Before any further knots in the story i would like to see subala baby and their family time with aryan and the new one

thanks for the PM waiting for new OS do pm me that as well