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@ColdEnchantress

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Aww.. It was fantastic!! Though i wud have loved if u wud've continued giving it a happy ending.. But as u said imagine the rest.. So m still fyn wid it! :)
Awwiee.. Aditya is such a cutie pie.. I really felt bad for him nd also for RK.. It must be quite difficult for him to act lyk strangers wid his own wife! </3
And pleaseee update ur FF soon!!

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazin os...i knw its an os bt pls give an anothr part fr dis...pls pls pls

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice os...plz continue...i want to see madhus memory back...cnt see little adii like that...

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tharuTWA

@tharuTWA

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awww!thats awesome!👏

poor aadi and rk

please continue the story

and plzz make her remember them,

oh very touching story😭

really loved it!

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

so sad...can u plsss write another part after madhu learns d truth ? pls pls pls...

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow wat a lovly OS.. 🤗 ADI WAS SO CUTE N ADORABLE poor 3yr old and so much he s goin thru... Hey i want more.. I know its os bt atleast 1 or 2 more to it one rks inner turnmoil .. Pls pls pls pls pls.. U write so nice dat aise lagta hai padte hi rahe.. Nd dear wen r u gonna update Ur Ff , just desperate to read it.

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

tooo loved

Poor kid

Plz plz plz plz plzzzx do continue

I'm literally begging

Thanks fr pm

Ps- wls wait fr the nxt installment eagerly

Edited by didlr - 12 years ago

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Loved it.nice OS though successful in tugging the heart in its own way! Believe it OS..so u won't be continue it right😉

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piya40

@piya40

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it.
Aww you think so? =D That made my day!😆
Actually this is a one shot, so I don't think I'll continue this. You can imagine the rest. Think positively ;D Then you'll get your happy ending! =)
Thanks again!

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wow!!!! its awesome dear 👏. Pls continue soon. Are they really hubby and wife?? Cant wait to read more. Pls do continue 😊 Feel sorry for Aditya. Poor kid. Pls unite his small family soon..

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