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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Nice OS Reesha.Plz continue it...one shots can have 2 or 3 parts

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madhubalaa12

@madhubalaa12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow its wonderful
please continue soon

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sumreen
nice os

Thanks a lot! =)

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: t_areeb
it is a beautiful story
but really heart wrenching

the little boy had to bear so much just to be sure his mother is ok

Thank you so much! True, he had been suppressing the urge to jump on her and hug her tight. Imagine seeing your mother after three months? I felt for the boy too.

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: catty2000
Awesome OS !
Loved it !
Please update your FF !
I am dying to read it !

Thank you so much Catty! Ah! I really don't want to touch the FF at the moment. If I do I'd probably take a wrong turn. You know the FF is really dark and everyone is expecting me to make RK a softie and I can't really do that at the moment. So I'm taking a break! =/

Hope you understand!

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Kaya13
Plz plz u havta cntn!

I'll see what I can do about it. No promises though. =) Thanks for taking time to read!

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Pujark3
hye it was awsome plz give us second chapter plz

Thanks so much Pooja! =) I'll do what I can, but trust me if you imagined the end would have been better. =)

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Nice OS dear. Thanks for the pm.

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza
m speechless of ths OS 👏

m a silent reader of ur FF also...
bt i cldn't control myslf today to cmmnt in ths wonderful OS...

it makes me tears in my eyes wen i read madhu-adi's convo...

dou i jst got to knw u don't wanna cont. bt plzz continue @least 1 part..
i guess wat can happen nxt bt sm story concept make curious to knw wat will happen..nd ur ths is 1of it..

plzz take ths req.

Thanks a lot for the lovely feedback! I'm glad this OS touched you that much. Actually, you could imagined the end whichever way you like in a positive way. That's the best thing about One Shots!

Anyhow, if I get time, will try to give you guys a proper end..

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: PristineSoul
Reesha, when I started reading this, I had a doubt that Dr.Kundra is married to Madhu. And what excited me even more was that finally Im reading something that was in my head since months. Madhu doesnt remember her RK. At times I feel that RK isnt a Doctor and is just here to take care of his Biwi.. Lol.. Me and my imagination..
Adi Kundra is sho shweet. A real mini version of RK. Goldilocks story.. Ahaan, when I was a kid, my mom used to read this story esp at bedtime. I really wish you'd continue with this story. Atleast the ending.. Please Reesha.. I want to see happy endings for my Rishbala. Missing them together

That's wonderful! If you knew from the beginning that Madhu was Dr. RK's wife, then you would have understood Aditya's behaviour so well. Wheee I'm glad to know I was able to bring in something you had in mind.

Awww thank you so much! I'm so happy that you agree Adi's a mini version of RK =D I looove him! I really enjoyed writing about him. Even my mom used to read Goldilocks's tale. =) Brings back childhood memories, huh? I'm glad you felt the same.

I'll see what I can do Pristine! I really don't want to disappoint you guys. So if I do get time will write a second chapter. Even I miss my Rishbala! 💔

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