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Posted: 12 years ago
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My heartstrings, you own 'em.

My happiness, you got it wrapped around your fingertips like rubber gloves.

Your smile threads through my veins like deep woven scars.

My love is the dirty blood headed for dialysis.

My emotions come undone.

Your stare is cutting me open.

Don't do this...this animosity is overbearing.

I see your gaze possessing me with hateful eyes.

I beg for mercy.

The moon hides behind the clouds in lieu of your horrors. Please, I am but a girl.

Your footsteps press on my pulse. My heart beats a thousand times faster.

My vessels rush to compensate for the moment all time freezes: to look at you, to breathe you in.

I pay homage to the Gods who created you.

The nearness of you is driving me to insanity. A whisper escapes my mouth. You look the other way and walk as if I were never there.

I see the death of me.

Everyday you fail to acknowledge my existence, I live a little less.

A part me mourns the lost cause: you will never love me.

I have tried to come to terms with my failed attempts.

I cannot make you fall for me.

Accept the rejection, says Dr. Phill on channel 9.

So easy for him to say..try to live it my way.

I eat, sleep, walk, hear, breathe...live rejection.

Every waking moment of the day, I am your most hated human.

I am that dark spot on the moon you wish to have erased.

But, I am stubborn and you see it.

I don't have much strength left. My body is nearing exhaustion.

But, I promise you this, as long as I have airs left to breathe, I shall not give up.

I will overcome every hurdle you throw my way in hopes you will run out hurdles before I run out love. Believe me, my affection has no bounds. I am destined to win; even if the flesh says goodbye.

A/N: For those of you who do not understand the concept, it is Rishabh walking out of the room everyday without acknowledging Madhu's present. She may be his companion of namesake but he does not truly accept her. She has tried to win his affection but failed. This scenario is just another day when comes near and then walks away without talking or even giving her a second look.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A/N: For those of you who do not understand the concept, it is Rishabh walking out of the room everyday without acknowledging Madhu's present. She may be his companion of namesake but he does not truly accept her. She has tried to win his affection but failed. This scenario is just another day when comes near and then walks away without talking or even giving her a second look.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will overcome every hurdle you throw my way in hopes you will run out hurdles before I run out love. Believe me, my affection has no bounds. I am destined to win; even if the flesh says goodbye.

👏I so loved this one!! LOVE - explained Beautifully ..only thing to prevail above life n beyond death..

Lovely post😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww so emotional and so meaningful...after reading your works m hating rishabh all the more...u really have a very good choice of words...m hoping to learn something from u...
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awww so emotional and so meaningful...after reading your works m hating rishabh all the more...u really have a very good choice of words...m trying to learn from u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww this is heartbreaking for Madhu! But its wonderfullt written. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it.fantastic emotional and bit philosophical.thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your amazing at your work girl!
Love it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdear

👏I so loved this one!! LOVE - explained Beautifully ..only thing to prevail above life n beyond death..Lovely post😳

Thank you very much🤗
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Originally posted by: aksuji

awww so emotional and so meaningful...after reading your works m hating rishabh all the more...u really have a very good choice of words...m hoping to learn something from u...

awww thank you🤗
hit me up any day you wish. Surprising as it sounds, I do not hate Rishabh. With longing that comes from writing as Madhu, I sort of love him in a weird way. I do not think I have the ability to hate. I appreciate his character too much to hate him although the show is trying hard to make believe in his revenge saga. I refuse to let go of his devilish charm.

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