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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
A new ff! Wow, excited to see this.

I am glad & a tad nervous😳

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: PrittB
LOVE Timmies! :D And now I'm jealous...I think I will go get some myself now! 😆 LOL yay I just made you get ice cream. 🤣
Actually, I'm going to go to Marble Slab later! Their ice cream is the best! Even better than Haagen Dazs! 😲 Yeah I just went there. 😈

There was a Nestle toll house opening here & I was so excited but it turned to be crap.

So, Marble Slap all the way I suppose.

Timmies is only good for coffee.

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Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey continue son excited to read it

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Desire6
Hey continue son excited to read it

thank you & pardon the fangirling

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ehmmbhvirman
Awsom awsom !!

I am glad you are excited :)

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

A lonesome pearl escapes from the corner of her eye. She packs her belongings neatly in a four by four cardboard box.

I realize now how much of an apathetic man I have been. She possesses fewer clothes than a monk. The wedding band, a platinum ring sits on the nightstand. She picks it up, along with our photograph from the altar. Her loving gaze dwindles in favor of indifference. She lays the picture frame top down, the wedding ring on top of it.

"I am going away for a week. I expect you to have moved when I come back. Take the furniture. In fact, take everything but the walls".

She does not face me. She carcasses the window seal and greets the vines climbing up our bedroom walls.

"Madhubala", I say and hope she hears me.

Often times I speak but, the words do not come out. My vocal cords are mute and my ears are ringing a deafening noise.

She hears me. Just for a moment, her brows pucker. I have seen no response from her even since the wooed day I betrayed my Madhubala.

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Pritt B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I'm sad already.

"I have seen no response from her even since the wooed day I betrayed my Madhubala"

Oh gosh...DID RK BETRAY HER? Kay I'll be hating on RK in this if he cheated on her. That's RK speaking right? I mean, I know, he's done so much to her in the show and I still don't hate him. But cheating? Grr...that's something I am against big time. 😡

"In fact, take everything but the walls"

^That. That...that just, it makes so much sense...like...wanting to get rid of all memories, all chance of being reminded of the one who betrayed you...

I'm getting attached to this FF already.

Oh great.

I want to read the next part.

But I know I'll be saddened by this FF...but your writing's too good to miss.

I guess I'll put myself through the misery of being reminded of my past! It's worth it in this case!

Great job Jassu! 👏

I'll stop babbling on now.

😆

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: PrittB
Oh gosh...DID RK BETRAY HER? Kay I'll be hating on RK in this if he cheated on her. That's RK speaking right? I mean, I know, he's done so much to her in the show and I still don't hate him. But cheating? Grr...that's something I am against big time. 😡
Good, that is what I want. And, I am sorry, it is like picking at the wounds that just began to crust.

"In fact, take everything but the walls" ^That. That...that just, it makes so much sense...like...wanting to get rid of all memories, all chance of being reminded of the one who betrayed you...
I feel the same way.
I'm getting attached to this FF already. Oh great. I want to read the next part.
But I know I'll be saddened by this FF...but your writing's too good to miss.
I guess I'll put myself through the misery of being reminded of my past! It's worth it in this case!
😳 That is very nice of you to say. Thank you.

Great job Jassu! 👏

I'll stop babbling on now.
I happen to enjoy your babble #cute😊