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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: aksuji

1st chap is really nice...waiting for the next part...plz continue soon

Thank you aksuji I am happy you agree with the plot so far :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Updated my comment on page 9!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
@Pritt will check it out after dinner
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: PrittB

I loved it Jassu. Your writing style is honestly amazing.

Thank you very much😳
I liked how he was having flashbacks of the proposal and first meeting and then in between when he went back to the present and KAY, RK'S A JERK. And as much as I feel bad for him (I blame your writing) I can't help but hate him in this FF because I know what he's going to do. Like. Grr. Asklafdjlfk.
I want the tug of war from the readers' side. I cannot decide what to do with RK. I don't hate him, I don't like him either. I am in a limbo...
Even though I wasn't married or anything, this FF is easy to relate to. Memories. I'm okay.
I got you. Who are the two lovely ladies in your dp? I know one of them looks like you (the picture is not very clear)? Is the other one a friend/sister? Cute either way. The stuffed animal bump is epic.😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

No problem! 😳 And I'm in the same boat! I love and hate him at the same time. 😆
Aw thanks! You guessed right, it's my friend and I! We were attempting to make a random YT film but she added a crazy voice in with the stuffed animal and I just literally fell to the ground laughing. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: PrittB

No problem! 😳 And I'm in the same boat! I love and hate him at the same time. 😆

Aw thanks! You guessed right, it's my friend and I! We were attempting to make a random YT film but she added a crazy voice in with the stuffed animal and I just literally fell to the ground laughing. 🤣

I so want to see that video. Is it up yet ?
I hope you did not drop the idea
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: iiDona

I so want to see that video. Is it up yet ?
I hope you did not drop the idea


After we screwed up the first time, we got distracted and never finished it 😆. But I do have the video! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8e_uMjwVXEo

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: PrittB

After we screwed up the first time, we got distracted and never finished it 😆. But I do have the video! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8e_uMjwVXEo

🤣 I see why that happened.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: iiDona

🤣 I see why that happened.


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Yup! She's a crazy one! Glad you understand. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh lovely dona nd d last line 'til infedility do us part' caught my heart... U pennd it very well jasu...b it d 1st part of proposin or der 1st meetn or d heart wrenchn present.. Superb FF. 🤗 Hey again u changd d photo.. I opend d link n mobile nd was scroln down thnkn d other photo in mind🤣

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