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So this idea hit me like out of no where and I think I have the story sorted out. Kind of š. I wrote about three different, lets see,previews for it, like what you might see in the future. As soon as I sort everything out I'll tell the people who are interested about the story. If you are interested comment, if not then don't. Criticism is accepted if given in a postive way andbelieveme there is a positive way. Thank You :)
I know there might be mistakes and it is not perfect. Also this might change depending how the story takes place. Tell me what you think. Bye Bye! The snippets are to posted later depending on the what you guys say.
Character Sketch: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3402207/ff-turbulence-chapter-three-pg-8?pn=3
Snippet One
"Tell me something just to enlighten me. Would you leave her in the future, when your
officially married to her, if this took place then and not now?"
He didn't answer but it was obvious what he would have chosen.
"So what matters is your misplaced guilt that will eat you alive and not her, huh? That's what it is? Your so-called "love" would be over in a second because of your stupid morals that make no sense! Is she not important? The insecurities that you have been harboring over your 'family member' have been killing her.
Do you know that?
She might not show it but it does. When you pamper your obsessed stalker, taking care of her every need, it sickens me. A man who claimed to love that woman till he died tossed her aside because of what...?"
He ran his hand through his hair, clearly frustrated and
staring at the man in front of him made him angrier.
"You know what maybe the only thing you care about is fixing other peoples problems! Maybe you saw her as a lovesick fool and decided to take her in! Maybe you never loved her! Maybe---"
"SHUT UP!!! DO YOU HEAR ME SHUT THE HELL UP!!! YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING! DO YOU KNOW WHAT I'M GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW?"
"No I might only have the slightest idea but I know one
thing. You are weak, so weak that you
gave up that one woman that taught you how to live."
I know there might be mistakes and it is not perfect. Also this might change depending how the story takes place. Tell me what you think. Bye Bye! The snippets are to posted later depending on the what you guys say.
Content:
Chapter One: The Model https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3402207/ff-turbulence-chapter-three-pg-8?pn=4
Chapter Two: The Taxi Guy https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81788749</font>
Chapter Three: The Face Off https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3402207/ff-turbulence-chapter-three-pg-8
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