FF: Turbulence Chapter Three PG 8

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Well written
and dontfrgt to pm me
n tc ks hsd

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Seresa

@Seresa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I read each and every comment and appreciate each and every one. Thank you for them and the likes.

But some people are confused about the preview that has been posted. They think that it is RK's turmoil that is taking with in himself and I hadn't even thought of it that way. That does make sense to me but sadly thats not the case. Its a scene that is taking place between two males. I wouldn't want to tell which one is which, there has to be suspense 😆...

but you can guess. 😉

Ok enough talk and the...

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"What? Is there something wrong? I don't look good in this do I?"

"Well… that's not exactly the problem."

"Then what's wrong? Tell me please, your making me nervous."

"Want to leave him and come with me? I swear I'll love you till the day I die. We could get married and live together, and every morning when I see you by my side I'll be completed."

He looked so serious that she had no idea what to say. Suddenly a smirk broke on his face and he said,

"I'm joking with you. As if I could ever love you, what a joke."

She drew out of her trance and threw the nearest object at him while he laughed and ducked.

As always it is not perfect and mistakes are probably have been made. Might change depending how the story takes place. Bye Bye! 😃

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Jane

@Jane523

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hie dear
update was too short
i m guessing haan
was dat madhu n r.k convo
i may b wrong...just guessing
samaj lena plzzz dont mind
do continue soon dear

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice bt short...
thnxx for pm dear..

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Ha looks like two good and goofy friends! lol 😊

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

can't wait to read the full story...cos your snippets are so goooddd!!!!

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Seresa

@Seresa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Character Sketch:

Madhubala Malik

Daughter of Padmini and Shamsher Malik

She is 23 years old and a cosmetologist, also known as a beautician. She might seem as a pushover at first sight because of her sweet personality but there is more to her than some people care to find out. She was raised in traditional Indian family and sometimes her values and beliefs get in the way of her choices. But she is a stubborn strong willed individual who grows as she faces new challenges in her life.

Arun Raavi Vade

He is 28 years old and CEO of Wades. He rarely comes to India as he runs his business from England but a sudden incident takes place that he is now in India for the time being. He's a serious one minded person which causes him to be outcasted sometimes from others because of his personality. The surprising thing is that he wants to be able to get along with others and is quite playful. He is also very kind and compassionate that he puts others before himself. But as he faces life in India the kindness might get him into trouble.

Son of Radha Kundra

Rishabh Mohan Kundra

He is 27 years old and a famous Bollywood actor. He has a cocky attitude and is very flirtatious. His attitude doesn't give him trouble most of the time since he is able to charm everyone around him. Even though he is a superstar he doesn't let it get to his head, most of the time anyway. He cherishes his mother very much and doesn't like to talk about his father. But as everyone has secrets, he does too. Those secrets are going to unravel slowly and going to change his life completely.

Daughter of Shamsher and Padmini Malik

Trishna Malik

She is 26 years old and an supporting actress in Bollywood films. She is trying very hard to earn a lead role in a film but so far no such luck. She is more outgoing than her sister Madhubala. She says whatever is on her mind and gets into awkward situations which can cause problems. She is a little trouble maker which causes her to get in trouble with her parents but Madhubala always saves her. She might at times seem selfish and greedy but loves her family a lot.

Padmini and Shamsher Malik

Happily married and much in love with each other. They have cute little fights but nothing serious. They own a sweet shop together after ending their small career in Bollywood.

Radha Kundra

She's a sweet tiny woman who even after her husbands horrid suicide tries to live her life to the fullest. She put her son first after her husbands death and hasn't regretted it once even though she might feel lonely at times.

Edited by Seresa - 12 years ago