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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Nice updt dear
now waiting this campaign to finish and thn the madhu and rk try to get to know each other
and i think before marriage nothing will happen btw them am i right
now just waiting fr thier confession of love whn they will confess thier love to each other

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

THINK NONE OF THE COUPLES AREGOING TO GET LUCKY

MADHU HAS DEVELOPED COLD FEET AND HERE ADAM IS PLAYING SPOIL SPORT

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: punam2712
[B]<font color="#ff00ff">THINK NONE OF THE COUPLES AREGOING TO GET LUCKY</font>[/B][DIV][B]<font color="#ff00ff">MADHU HAS DEVELOPED COLD FEET AND HERE ADAM IS PLAYING SPOIL SPORT</font>[/B][/DIV]

Never say never.. I don't know what will happen tomorrow.. they might just chuck everything aside & jump each others bones..

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Simple-Girl

@Simple-Girl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: luvera

Yes the story revolves around Rishab and Madhu, but since this is a FF and not a SS, there have to be additional supporting characters, each of which have a role to play. Im sorry you feel that Rishbala are getting sidelined but As mentioned in one of my earlier Pm's i will be getting rid of some of the supporting characters. How? I am still working on that. But hopefully that will help with the situation.

Thanks for replying..I understand what u said..I didn't want to make u any difference to your story line..You are the writer & u know how the story will be & interesting for us..😊 It was just my thought didn't mean too criticize or bash u..😳I love your story & the style of writing 😊 a lot!!

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Anjali.12

[DIV]Thanks for replying..I understand what u said..I didn't want to make u any difference to your story line..You are the writer & u know how the story will be & interesting for us..[:)]It was just my thought didn't mean toocriticizeor bash u..[:$]I love your story & the style ofwriting[:)]a lot!![/DIV]

Don't worry about it.. everyone is free to speak their mind here.. don't worry my feelings are very much intact..
I have found that people get offended very easily in this forum when people share their opinions..
Well I believe everyone is entitled to their opinions even though we may not always agree on it..
You love my writing & love ya for reading & loving it!!

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Well I am glad Madhu did not do anything she can potentially regret, because she has had such a terrible past, and Rishab too has had a terrible past. I like it that they are slowly getting into the friendship and being there for each other zone. Hope this improves and gives their relationship a chance. Honestly I can't wait it they start being together, or becoming a couple. That would be cute. 😉 but I would rather read about how they connect together first. Loved the updates! Can't wait to read more.

PS: I read in another post that Rishab is going to have commitment phobia? or that he doesn't have it yet but he will, I just have such a negative feeling about him going through that. but I'm sure you will write it wonderfully and I will love it. 😊

Edited by Vsoujanya - 12 years ago

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Well I am glad Madhu did not do anything she can potentially regret, because she has had such a terrible past, and Rishab too has had a terrible past. I like it that they are slowly getting into the friendship and being there for each other zone. Hope this improves and gives their relationship a chance. Honestly I can't wait it they start being together, or becoming a couple. That would be cute. 😉 but I would rather read about how they connect together first. Loved the updates! Can't wait to read more.

PS: I read in another post that Rishab is going to have commitment phobia? or that he doesn't have it yet but he will, I just have such a negative feeling about him going through that. but I'm sure you will write it wonderfully and I will love it. 😊

Sweets... relax.. breathe a little... Relationship is something new to both of them... She has never ventured into that territory... And he, even though he has taken day trips into that zone, he never extended the vacation... So essentially, they are both treading new undiscovered waters... Right now they are working the out the kinks and figuring out the ins and outs of what they have and what it could be.. Give them time...

Regarding the commitment phobia... though Rishab (in my story) doesn't seem to have one at the moment... I was just keeping that avenue open... Caz truthfully speaking, I can't promise anything about the future.. Normally my vision of how the story proceeds does not go beyond a couple of updates...

Hope this clears things??

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Loved every bit of it...it's really adventurous portray out there ... Hats off ya!

Pls pm me the update and do continue soon...really thrilling while waiting to know how the story unfolds from here

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#339

Note: Today is 'Family Day' and am out for the day. So before leaving, here's a short update for you guys. Something better than nothing, Right?

Chapter 34

After Akash left, Abby and Adam decided to take turns staying up incase Sikander woke up and had a fit about his sister again. In a way only they could understood what he was going through because as much they fight with each other they loved each other more. And if something like this happened to either of them, they would be in a similar state.

Abby shook Adam's arm slightly to wake him up when the wind outside started to let up. "Adam, wake up. Sounds like that storm's already slowing down?"

"Hey," someone called from outside and pulled on the tent slightly. "Storm's over, so c'mon out and let's have dinner." It was Akash's voice, Abby realized.

"Yo, Kundra," Akash walked further into camp to get everyone up. "You up?" Rishab poked his head out of the tent and blinked fuzzily as he looked around. He had been napping and enjoying a dream where Madhu was his and none of the others existed. "I am now, jackass," he growled.

Akash crouched down in front of the entry of the tent. "Whatcha doin' with big brown eyes, huh?" he whispered with a smirk. Rishab shoved the grinning fool back out of his way as he climbed out of the tent. "What's up with our injured climber?"

"She's still sleeping. We gave her some painkillers, so it's doubtful that she'll wake up for long if she wakes up at all tonight." Akash glanced around to see if Sikander was around. "She's not gonna be able to continue with that injury."

"We'll need to radio base camp, arrange for a pick up to get her down off the mountain." He nodded. "You gonna tell him?" "Yeah. What kinda damage did that idiot do to herself? I don't want him to go over there without knowing how badly he's hurt."

"Nothing really bad. A little cut on her forehead and her leg's hurt; looks like a sprain, but I bet she won't be able to walk on her own."

"Great. Alright, lemme talk to him first, let him know how she's doing, and then I'll send him over to check on her." "Alright," Akash glanced around the camp, "Ok. Harpreet and I will get everything set up for dinner then."

Rishab ducked back into the tent and zipped the opening back up. Madhu was awake and pulling her outer gear on as he crouched down next to her. He could see the nervous expression on her face and he wondered if it was because of their earlier actions.

Madhu felt awkward about the situation. She shouldn't have started something with Rishab right here. She didn't know what Rishab's real intentions were. "How's she doing?"

"No major injuries, but she's not gonna be able to continue the climb. We'll radio for a chopper and have her picked up at dawn." He reached out and gently tipped her chin up, bringing her gaze to his. "I can't tell you I'm sorry for earlier, Madhu, because I don't regret kissing you." He ran his thumb over her lips. "And if it had gone farther, I wouldn't have regretted that either. But, I do regret the timing because I don't want you to feel bad about it... and I think you do."

He left her speechless with his words and left to meet with Deepali and then Sikander before she could put together words to form a coherent sentence.