Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11)

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Ahh superbly written di! Bittuji tussi great ho! And aiii hiii mein mar jawan RK is choo chweeet please do continu di! Xxx and pm also preety please x

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

nice OS...is there a remaining

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Awesome Post.

Please continue this OS.

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

*Raises hands to the higest extent*
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breathes* THAT was just marvelous ! :D i'm amazed . I'm so happy that you continued.. Love the humour and sarcasm in RK and eeps, he made it just in time ! how cute ! Loved the ending.. left me with the greatest smile !

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now you know what you reader's want don't you !? ... haha, continue Please ?! It's a deff. need , lol.

Edited by hilly - 13 years ago

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Lovely update

I love this story and RK's dialogues

And Madam if you think the forum is going to say thank you & enough then my dear you are so in the wrong forum 😆 here we are always hungry for more Rishbala so more it is

more more more... 😆 pls update soon

do PM me if you are doing so 😉

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visaka

@visaka

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

interesting!!!!😃😃continue plzz!!!

update sooonnn!!!👍🏼

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

me me me me want another part ... :D

thank u thanku thanku shooo much for this part ... haye,,, it was aweeesssooommmeee ...

i cracked up at Bittuji's horror ... lol .. poor him ... kya kya sehna perta hai apnay cheif ke liye ...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

double post ... sowwie 😳

Edited by sanu3108 - 13 years ago

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Beautiful bittuji is so sweet

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: --Udhay--
Raises hands!! :D
Gambheeram!! Kalakki chechi!! :)
Fantastic work.. Loved the way BittuJi handled the situation and made Chief and BhabhiJi meet on this auspicious occasion..
And the Narration was a seamless flow, a delight to read..
Your style of portraying emotions is classy!!
Continue, please! 😊

thanks Uday...
bittuji of my story is just loke the teddy bear he resembles😉
othiri pukazhthalle... ente thala melkoorayil idikkum 😳