Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11) - Page 16

Originally posted by: sree07

ole...late here so reserving for comments...

Originally posted by: shamon

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edited..

welll DI what can I say.. it was beautiful...👏👏👏

Luvd Bittuji playing cupid n also keeping his promise😳

dat deepali cud actually create hatred for her here too😡

i just cant express in words d emotions u hav put forward wen she was praying for RKs well being❤️

n d last bit by Rk blessing her with saubhagyavati Bhava was like a "kala til" to hav a happy ending👏👏

PS: *me raising hands n jumpin in joy* but Di u hav to giv us another happy ending only.. plz dnt mek us sad by changing d track... else m happy with dis ending too😛

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Woww wht a superb updt dear
i raise my hand fr anoher udt of hs ff wth dhe saraa romance and some intimate moments btw them but no one shuld come in btw thier romance

Originally posted by: Kurup

Loved It...

Bittujiii the cupid...I loved every part of it and the last line from VD was superb...the blesssing...

Continue more...My hands tooo raised...infact both the hands...

Originally posted by: archanadamania

Very nice,

pls continue,

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: bangalores

thanks Uday...
bittuji of my story is just loke the teddy bear he resembles😉
othiri pukazhthalle... ente thala melkoorayil idikkum 😳

Originally posted by: ranitha

I have said it before and I will say it again, a beautiful story. And you are one of the most talented writers I have come across in the world of fanfiction, believe me.( And I don't say this often, I generally praise stories, not authors-so this is a huge thing trust me😉)

I would love for you to continue this , but even more write it as a completely different story because this story seems to have got its fitting end and now requires only an epilogue( that's a MUST ) to round things off- But I want more stories!😳

Originally posted by: ranitha

Athu sari, malayalee aanalle- Anna Malayalathil thanne pukazhtham- Adipoli chechi!

Originally posted by: EverGirl

Helll yeahhh.. I want more.. :D THAAANKUU for the PM btw.. <3 pm me da nxt part too.. :D

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

*me jumping with hands right up*

Update the next part.